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10 lines
Must be posted before no more than 30 minutes
First to 5 votes wins
VOTERS MUST HAVE 100 POSTS
iight check in
Dipshit...its passed a half hour....Im going to give you another 20 minutes to post, otherwise I win by default
who said i said too post first u spit first
I clearly said on Bitch Slapped "You spit first"
Go...
RB is so peaceful now Yung will show 'em violence
Talking about Irish's talent cos I heard a moment silence
Ya'll got another thing coming if ya'll think this squid is slaying me
and only way I could picture him being hot is if he’s portraying me
battling me you should have retreated tonight cuz all beefing aside
youre about to lose more net fans than jason kidd after beating his wife
one peek at ya lines youre free to see why ill beat you with spite
I spit vicious always sick shit even when the treatment is right
Irish youre a wack fuck theres no way youre gonna blaze shit
Cuz You couldn’t spit on mics posing as a down syndrome patient
no feeding
uppib for ur verse shit
I'll tear you to fragments with rhymes that burn like magma//
'Cause you're faker than stigmata on the hand of a Baghdader//
You couldn't...climb the ladder if you tried//
'Cause when Peter Paul the second hears you rap even he wishes he died//
Members of the...Manson Cult call you crazy//
To step up to me...even if you owned "time" you couldn't "phase" me//
Outpace me? I already overlapped your grandson//
And your parents never put you up for adoption...they put you up for ransom//
The suicidal flee the area for fear of their life//
'Cause when you pick up the mic, even the blind wish they never had sight//
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Pretty weak battle...
Irisheyes- An okay verse verse, But your punches sucked, his was better. Your structure was okay but could have made it better. Your flow was aight not the greatest. Your personals were good. But need to elevate more...
YungKiss- Good verse, But his was maybe a little better. But your punches was better then his. Structure was good, I was feelin a flow, and your personals were ok but his was better. But i vote you for better strcutre and much better punches.
vote Yungkiss
I forgot to add it but it counts from now on...No members from the same crew as Yungkiss can vote in this battle
What a wack board...only one vote which was probably a dickride...
Yung go back to my battle with Tactixx, u gota explain ur vote better or it wont be counted
and tella MOD u cant poll.....thanks ill vote this later
Alrite
Yung - Your verse was nice and it was ok to read...flow was ok...structure was alrite...personals were ok and punches were a bit weak but ok.
Irish - You had a weak verse but you tried with punches which failed. flow was ok but lines were streched,,,no personals either.
vote yungkiss
vote on me battles in my sig please and poll me votes
yo uppin on this battle i will return the favor
Youngkiss:
Have to admit nice verse. The kidd line
In the closer was on point. Structure was
Nice and flow was on point. Only critique
Vocab would be nice.
IrishEyes:
Your opener I will admit was decent. .flow was there
Structure I hated. Because you used this //< that’s a no
no..anyways you fell apart in the end part. make sure
you improve your structure. Pretty good for a femcee.
Haven’t seen any in awhile keep practicing.
Vote: Yungkiss because better punches and flow.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116939
^ Please vote here needs to be closed…would be appreciated
By both emcees…
uppin
Alright...0-3...Uppin
You sed you wud return the favor yungkiss now vote on my battles in my sig...i voted on your battle now you vote on mine.
peace
uppin iight slayer
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RB is so peaceful now Yung will show 'em violence
Talking about Irish's talent cos I heard a moment silence
lol...ok opener
Ya'll got another thing coming if ya'll think this squid is slaying me
and only way I could picture him being hot is if he?s portraying me
ooh....good shit...
battling me you should have retreated tonight cuz all beefing aside
youre about to lose more net fans than jason kidd after beating his wife
eh...weak...
one peek at ya lines youre free to see why ill beat you with spite
I spit vicious always sick shit even when the treatment is right
ooo...nice multis..
Irish youre a wack fuck theres no way youre gonna blaze shit
Cuz You couldn?t spit on mics posing as a down syndrome patient
lololol...had me crak
ttal-7/10...nice verse...
im not even break down irish eyez' verse...u were weak man...structure was off....but punches were ok...some made me giggle<---sounds gay...lol
ur flow waz alrigt...but u really gotta work on ya structure...
vote- yungkiss
one sided battle
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yung got this one
he had an all around better verse
punches hit a little harder and flipped a few played lines pretty decent
irish wasnt that bad
he had a few lines that made me look twice
but nothing really stood out...
to be honest u came just a little played in this one
watch out for played concepts and filler lines
both shoudl keep battlin
read battles in LLL
or the gaunlet even LLLJr has some good battles
any way
v/yung