10-15 lines....
30-45 min...
blind spit...
regular rules....
check in when you start........
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10-15 lines....
30-45 min...
blind spit...
regular rules....
check in when you start........
OK well this is my check in....
still waitin on you Trogdor...but Ima start mine now....
check in..............................................
u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh
Ayo,
Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *
Mleh....thats it...
Good job.....lets see if we can get some votes now....
Peace.....
I dont have a webpage bro
lol what the fuck
anyways can u hit up my battle with Kracka honestly while we wait
thanks
upin
Trogdor- Good verse, It started out nice very nice i thought. Some okay punches you had. Your flow was aight not the best tho. Structure good as hell. i vote you because your verse was better then his, and maybe a little more better punches then his.
Tactixx- Good verse, but i liked his better. Aight punches but he had a little advantage on that. Good structure you keep it inline and not like all over da place. But i pick him cuz he had a better verse and better punches but it was a close battle tho...
vote- Trogdor
tactixx- ur verse was aight. u had some good punches. flow was aight and da structure was striaght.
trogdor- ur verse was aight to. u had punches and perosnels. da flow and structure was better than his.
so this vote goes to................................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....
Trogdor
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nice battle. you both came good.
trogdor- came pretty nice and original. tha peepin tom line is prolly my fav. in this battle. made me laugh. thats always good. your flow was near perfect, as well as your structure. no real personals, your only downfall. other than that, you came good.
tacktixx- you came good too. nice flow and structure. punches were jus as good i think. you came with more, coulda fixed sum stuff up tho. honestly, ima have to say you took this tho, you came wit much more personals.
vote-Tactixx...more direct wit personals, close on tho, props to both.
peace
I Have to go wit Trogdor on this battle his punches hit better and i was feeling the
meta4s and personals and tact i know u can do better don't come this soft any more
and get ur structure right and throw more personals in there
My vote tro
return the fav in my sig
Have to go wit Trogdor on this battle his punches hit better and i was feeling the meta4s and personals they was ok and um work on ur structure the flow came out right needs a little work and u could have more personals than what u have
Tact I felt you could of cam harder than that because i have seen better my best advise to you is come hard everytime u battle you know and throe more personals and wordplay work on that and ur structure get that right u should be ok
My vote go to Tro
return favor in the name of jesus
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overall it was a pretty okay battle thought tactixx could have done better
but it wasnt enough to beat tro
verse from tactixx:
tight stuff mayne.....7/10Quote:
Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *
verse from trog:
damn u can made dope son ...Quote:
u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh
8/10
breakdown:
flow:tro
opener:none
multies:tro
punchlines:tie
structure:tac
closer:tro
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v/ goes to trogdor
thought he came harder then tactixx
seen u've do better
please return the favor in this battle and ill drop my poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121922
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leave a link and ill return the favor..
u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
lol...ok...pretty weakk...
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
nice...
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
lol...
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
nicee...looll..
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh
eh...2nd line weak...
total-7/10
Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
nice....i liked the first bar....1st 2 lines...
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
nice...ok...
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
eh...weak...
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
culdve done suttin better...
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
eh...weak...ur goin down n down...
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *
lolll...nicee
total- 7.5/10
i really thik dat tactixx came harder....overall better punches...i felt ya shit...
vtote- tactixx
MY MACANTOSH LINE WAS MY BEST LOL
thats wierd
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ricallyabbusiv
plze hit this batte up........thankz....
vote-trodgor
reason:
trodgor(wutever name is)- u had a good verse, flow, structure,metas,wordplay,vocab, and personal were all pretty much good in this battle. u had had this by a hair.
tactixx- good verse too. U both a good verse in this particular battle. Thats why it was so hard to give the winner. U as well had good verse pretty much the same as trodgor, but he had a bit more personals.
thats why my vote goes to trodgor
hey maynes how about hittin my battle up, seeing that i took the time to hit ur guys battle up, thanks heres da link....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122857
Ehh... damn. this is too close..
trog- You came ok here. You threw some nice punches out there at him. Topics somewhat played in certain lines but u switched it up a bit and made it a little different from the norm, which is good. Personals weren't at a high level, I think I remember 1 but they weren't really here in this battle. Strucutre/flow was fine... I think u could've come harder here...
tactixx- Both verses were very close here. You came ok too. Once again some of it had slightly played concepts but you can't really get away from that. I think ur verse came a bit more original because you used more personals then him. Strucutre/flow was ok as well....
I'm going to honestly have to go with Tactixx in winning this battle. It's just my own opinion on this. No hate. Both verse came really similiar. It's going to come down to everyones personal preferences. Keep up guys...
vote- tactixx
Uppin....#2
post an honest vote...
leave a link....
I'll check it out asap...
thx...peace
Vote: Tactcixx
Trogdor: Some good punches, a pretty nice flow and ok personals. I didnt like how long your verses were, it was hard to follow what you were saying. they were just too long. I liked the jiraffe line, but the rest was just ok
Tactixx:I liked your opening line, and the rest of your verse had some nice personals and punches. You came through solid, and kept me interested the whole time. You just came a lot stronger and had better rhymes than trogdor.
Vote: Tactixx
Return the Favor At:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122915
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Trogdor took this one easily. He had some dope lines good structure, flow, some jokes lines. .. and most of all personals kicked us in the teeth! Good battle on your behalf trog.! inner meaning shit and creative too!
Tactixx you seemed kinda hurting in this battle. rhymes really played out and boring. Nothing that really made me smile or think oh shit. Can't really read your shit with interest. Sorry man, work on your vocabulary and elevate. Read books man trust me it helps like u dun know! 1
Upping.
This battle was actually decent by FL standards. Some decent lines that can be seen as punches. Trogdor barely edges it out though with his harder hitting punches. Neither of you had personals though. That'll help in your next battle.
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
^Only quotable from Tactixx. Made me smile.
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
^Decent attempt at word play with the first line, the second was sorta decent.
Vote = Trogdor.