10 lines due in 30 mins
no crew votes no gay shit .......
check in , :shoot: and get killed
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10 lines due in 30 mins
no crew votes no gay shit .......
check in , :shoot: and get killed
........check..........check........check...*hardh itter*
Check to beat newbs yup yeah
yo.......who the fuck is this fagg callin a newb.......
youve only been on the site for a fuckin hour dude...
yeah i can feel it im gunna slaughter you *NEWB* in every position..
........you best be kissin and best be wishin......
so birng on the next text ~n~ next scription.......
dude your claimin me as the wrong person...
no one will give you as much pain or hurtin....
i'll make you suffer dude and treat you like every other newb...
fuck that no need for me to go any farther,im 9 lines deep...
and you pose and patray with your 7 post and no beef after this RAPBATTLES will prononce you six feet deep.....
ightt just a quick key for this NEWB, come on mann get that little 10 lines in!
He claims to be a hardhitter but his reasons are faulty
This kid sacrifices hard punches to flip worthless multis
Damn kid go to grammar school before you attempt rap-inQuote:
Originally Posted by Hardhitter
I mean it's sad you got 600+ posts and still talkin shit to newbs
Thie bitch with a 6-5 record, we'll make it even when youl lose
You still an unknow on this site, cept for your band of dickriders
This kid is gettin more dirty hose, than a mutha fuckin firefighter
I soar easily to victory, while my rhymes leave your wings clipped
With you played ass rhymes, your punches and personals all miss
uppin thi MO fo leave a link i'll return the favor
UPPIN#1
i think you were a line short ,wow bad structure!!
hmmm if you could count thats 10 lines herb...your dumbass quote counts as a line...quit swayin
com on vote in this.....honest votes please
uppin this MO FO leave a link ill return the favor
Hardhitter:
Ok very simplistic nothing to say wow!! Or good punch
No clever lines that I can say stood out!! The highlight
Is your structure , your flow scheme is ok. Work more
On cleverness with punches and disses and you will do
Good.
Sidewinder:
Ok your opener was nicely done!! Which basically the reason why
You took this battle! Ok flow nice structure. You fell off at the
End. Got kina lazy there I can see. Which I do myself.
Anyways stay more consistent threw out. no matter if you feel
You won…
Vote goes to: SideWinder due to better punches
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116939
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114316
^ Please vote here needs to be closed…would be appreciated
By both emcees…
nice battle. lol.
hardhitter- hilarious opener. i think wit that you won tha battle. lol. seriously. your other lines were prolly jus to take space, even tho they were good too. nice flow, and your structure wasn't bad either. good job, easy to vote on this one.
sidewinder- okay i guess, for a firsttimer. your had the structure but for some reason your flow and rhymes were off. your first line didn't rhyme wit anything. work on that. you had personals but thats about it. elevate.
vote-hardhitter...pretty much everything
hit this up in return plz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122528
thanx.
peace
CAN some one pleazz tell me whatBio*Chemist is talking aBOUT?? WOW HE MUST BE OUT OF THIS WORLD CUZ HES VOTE WAS WACKED,HE'S JUST DICK RIDEING OH WELL.....
Quit swayin you piece of shit...uppin for FAIR votes
this was a close battle but i have to give this to sidewonder because he came on a different level than hardhitter
i didnt like hard hitter's verse, it was a little too childish and it could have been better if he prolly would had put some more time in it
it wasnt horrible, just wasnt great
sidewinder had a better verse because his punches connect more
and his verse, as a whole, wasnt as wack as hardhitters
thats why im voting for him
v/sidewinder
okay...pretty one sided battle...sidewinder definitly took this
Hardhitter...not a very good verse..besides the opener, which
was pretty good, you didn't have a punch or personal to speak
of...it was mostly just filler...work on yer punches/personals,
try to be more creative, and dont sacrifice content for flow
multies dont win battles..Sidewinder...okay verse...you
had some decent personals and punches, pretty basic,
but that was really all that was needed due to Hardhitters'
lack of both..the opener alone probably could have won this
for you...
^ LOL....ownedQuote:
He claims to be a hardhitter but his reasons are faulty
This kid sacrifices hard punches to flip worthless multis
v/ Sidewinder...better punches and personals
thanks..up
Last up...drop a link and we will peep it
iight this was an okay battle
sidewinder-i enjoyed your verse the most outa the 2....i liked your punches and they hit hard along with your personals....your opener was prolly your best piece in your verse....
hardhitter-i dont think that i saw one personal that actually stuck in your verse....your flow was choppy and your structure was fucked...you had alot of filler lines and alot of multis....try using less multis and more personals...
vote-sidewinder
hit up the links in my sig with honest votes pc
This is how I see it...
Opener: deffintly sidewinder...caught my attention it was good
Personals: there were a few but sides hit better
Metas: sidewinder
Punches: sidewinder...his shit just came harder
multis: hardhitter
vote:sidewinder<--good structure well played
hardhiter<--have to agree with flash wasnt feelin the flow
ok.......
sidewinder- you had a good verse...you are good for a newbie!
flow was good and so was the structure...nice quote there....punches were good and so was the personals...they hit hard...verse was good...good folow to it...good verse
hardhitter- you underestimated him......your punches sucked and so did the personals...dont do this anymore..~"*^$#"~~"~"~"!"~"~"~~""~......flow is bad when you do that.........flow was off and structure was bad...work on some things...get better .....elevate
v/sidewinder
Sidewinder takes it for being harder, more personal, and having justa tad more wit.
That quote threw off the flow alot, I don't see how it rhymed.
But ya laid down what ya needed to win.
Cuz all Hard had goin for him was multi's.
Weak punches from him, pretty much none at all.
I'd seriously consider researching ya opponent before and trying some personals, Hard.
Peace
Bleh..
hard- when someone comes with few posts and speaks like they know something.. throw a better verse then that. You didn't come well here.... ur punches weren't that good.. nothing creative.. no real good personals, I know u can do better
side- heh.. I know who joo are! No, but seriously.. you really didn't come that great here. I think you're aware of that... but I guess it shows you have skill cause you still easily took this. You're personals stood out over anything he reallly had in his verse, this wasn't too hard to decide, in my mind.
vote- side