10 lines.. when you drop.. i will drop less than 3 minutes after.... you have as long as you need (no longer than an hour though)
Printable View
10 lines.. when you drop.. i will drop less than 3 minutes after.... you have as long as you need (no longer than an hour though)
check in
Yo the rules are
10-15 lines
no freeposting
no bullshit votes
no dickriding
explain votes only
poll vote
no crew votes
^NO.. the rules are 10 lines. allready stated.... you cant change that... i accept your other rules..but the RB rule is .. first rules stated stand.. you saw them and signed in.. so tough shit.. if you go over 10 i'll simply have your last five removed
infact i've just keyed my verse straight up so you've got an hour from your check in to drop or I win by DQ.....
Who the fucks this?.. I'll do my thing...
.............and then I'll boast
He knows he can't win... but he needs all the posts!
Your supposed skill.... has still yet to show
How's it possible to suck... and at the same time blow?
Fuckin hoe, show respect... your brainless antics are ended
I had to write this simple... so this bitch would be offended!
You just attended your funeral... Your a hopeless case
Coz even ya sig...
............is scared to show its face!
Thought a concept hit you... but it was swelling instead
You barked up the wrong tree... and it fell on your head!
like clumsey hippies i'm guaranteed to drop this herb
and wreck his text, just to leave him at a loss for words
shut ya ass up...this kid spoke a sick amount of dead sentements
so now i'ma leave him broke on his account like dead presidents
i end sentences...that means i'm killin his talk
my piece of mind's shaped like a nine, that means i'm spillin his thoughts
i'm disturbin him worse than haters...fuck waiters..i'm servin him first
like vick vapors...he'll open up...helped by a surgeon and nurse
cuz my verse stay on fire....like bbq's ...i'm charrin ya duke
cuz i'd rather recycle verses... then spit garbage like you
I keyed will you
well i can't edit it now but i didn't agree wit 10 lines if i could i would take out two lines but i can't
I'll do it. What two lines do you want taken out?Quote:
Originally Posted by Yungkiss
lol waohhh nice finisher Kiss
Kiss had a much better verse basiclaly because he went second and COM underestimated him. Kiss had nice creativiy, with the spilling your thoughts, the garbage line. there were other nice points......the only wack line was when you called COM a jerk, that was just a filler.....get ur teeth checked before u spit cavaties like that
Com had two lines that stood out, the finisher, and the one about his sig hiding his face.......nice personal, but other than that, it seemed as though he through that verse together in a matter of seconds, ive seen much better come frum him
Vote: Kiss for creativity
Com had way better personals tho
Please hit up my battle with KRACKA Com, fairly, since ur the oonly one who has enough posts to vote, thanks its at the top of frontlines
then concealing the chalk, cuz you ain't never murdered a verse
who the fuck is this kid?...i ain't never even heard of this jerk
take that out
Already did it cuz I'm better than Axe
uppin for votes on this battle
uppin for the second time and i will return the favor
ok not the best of battles but it wasnt bad
kiss- nice verse from u, ya had some nice punches that hit very hard. ya did make ya verse very creative, it was better than coms by far. but you could of hit him with more hard personals. flow was ight aswell . keep it up
overall 7/10
com - not a bad verse. a couple of lines were ok, like the personal but you need more punches and better personals that hit really hard. flow was very good and structure wasnt bad
overall 5/10
not bad overall but i thought kiss took this as he came across harder.
v/Kiss
you see.. THIS is why i dont battle in frontlines....
why not u should of stop playing games and came harder
well this was an obvious win for yunkiss and if com wouldn't have been so careless he would've ripped him a new asshole but he didn't so kiss won fair and square
com ur a disgrace
^WTF can we get someone with a brain to come in and judge this thing.... half of you arent even getting my lines
I get ur lines it was a decent verse but i seen you come way doper than that
Com really had proper punches...(aswell as the other guy...)
But, Com had an affect seing as his constantly had sensuall punches..
Thats all reallly...And his flowed better (syllable wise...)
Vote/Com...
(Welldone tho kid, U came off really strong)
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
can you poll vote that^?.
uppin this piece of shit..............................
I hate it when herbs vote
Com clearly took yung apart
I mean, this was an absolute slaughter.....
only line yung had that was above the played/wack level was the finisher, which was decent
Who the fucks this?.. I'll do my thing...
.............and then I'll boast
He knows he can't win... but he needs all the posts
^haha nice
Fuckin hoe, show respect... your brainless antics are ended
I had to write this simple... so this bitch would be offended!
^pretty good
You just attended your funeral... Your a hopeless case
Coz even ya sig...
............is scared to show its face!
^I can't see his sig...not sure if he removed this or if it's just me
Thought a concept hit you... but it was swelling instead
You barked up the wrong tree... and it fell on your head!
^lmao...best bar
Yeah...com took this by a long shot...almost all of his punches were witty/hard-hitting
V/com
^ this what a dick rider u fucking dick rider and the other herb up there i st8 rip com
try and sway again and you'll be reported for the second time today.....
This was an aight battle both came good but yungkiss's verse was better more fresh and creative.
Bill: your verse was weak lack of effort even though his post count makes him a flyweight his skill could be of a vet so never underestimate your opponents and always bring yourbest your folw was aight punches wernt that good personals nothing special.
Yung: your spit was nice creative and original except one or two lines but still i enjoyed yours more cause you had better flow better punches and better personals your was overall better he had one thing better than you flow but im givin you the vote.
My Vote: YungKiss
what the hell is this? no disrespected but i think com took this battle hands down
**********coms verse****************************
Who the fucks this?.. I'll do my thing...
.............and then I'll boast
He knows he can't win... but he needs all the posts!
not a good opener at all.. what does post have to do with him knowing he cant win?
Your supposed skill.... has still yet to show
How's it possible to suck... and at the same time blow?
Fuckin hoe, show respect... your brainless antics are ended
I had to write this simple... so this bitch would be offended!
You just attended your funeral... Your a hopeless case
Coz even ya sig...
............is scared to show its face!
Thought a concept hit you... but it was swelling instead
You barked up the wrong tree... and it fell on your head
coz he aint battling to win,,, he's only battling to post a lotQuote:
Originally Posted by Illynice
what the hell is this? no disrespected but i think com took this battle hands down
**********coms verse****************************
Who the fucks this?.. I'll do my thing...
.............and then I'll boast
He knows he can't win... but he needs all the posts!
not a good opener at all.. what does post have to do with him knowing he cant win?
Your supposed skill.... has still yet to show
How's it possible to suck... and at the same time blow?
hahahaha good line there.. funny shit
Fuckin hoe, show respect... your brainless antics are ended
I had to write this simple... so this bitch would be offended!
ok diss.. pretty nice
You just attended your funeral... Your a hopeless case
Coz even ya sig...
............is scared to show its face!
hahaha nice personal thats probably your nicest diss in your verse
Thought a concept hit you... but it was swelling instead
You barked up the wrong tree... and it fell on your head
not a good closer.. but overall you had a nice battle verse
*********kiss's verse*************
like clumsey hippies i'm guaranteed to drop this herb
and wreck his text, just to leave him at a loss for words
ha.. nice mutlies also the first line you had a nice use of metaphors in it
shut ya ass up...this kid spoke a sick amount of dead sentements
so now i'ma leave him broke on his account like dead presidents
that dead presidents line was slick duke.. nice metaphor
i end sentences...that means i'm killin his talk
my piece of mind's shaped like a nine, that means i'm spillin his thoughts
wack line.. first line was ok .. but you didnt follow it up well enought with a nice punchline
i'm disturbin him worse than haters...fuck waiters..i'm servin him first
like vick vapors...he'll open up...helped by a surgeon and nurse
cuz my verse stay on fire....like bbq's ...i'm charrin ya duke
cuz i'd rather recycle verses... then spit garbage like you
nice closer
vote- close battle man.. yung i think you could have had this easily if your metaphors that you used were applied as disses.. like for example that first line bout "like clumsy hippies im guaranteed to drop this herb" is a good metaphor however its not really a diss man you should have said something about him rather than say what youll do to him.. thats how alot of your verse was.. that dead presidents metaphor was good though you should have come at him harder.. com had some nice personal disses that were directed to you like that line bout kids sig scared to show its face was nice.. i feel like he came at you harder.. both verses were pretty much even this was a hard battle to judge .. but i really feel like com got this cuz he came at you harder.. it could go either way though real close battle
good shit by both niggas
my bad on the freepost.. after reading both verses i take back what i said i dont think com took it HANDS DOWN.. close battle
Okay, this battle was pretty good, but...
Bill Kill: I wasn't really feelin' ur verse. Either you didn't try or you're not as big as I thought, either, way, you didn't come strong here. Structure was weak. You drop some pretty nice flow. I liked some of what you had to say, but I wasn't impressed on the whole. Keep elevatin'.
Yungkiss: Ur verse was pretty good. I've seen better, but you put some effort into it and you threw some ill punches. I was entertained, and I liked ur flow and all. Nice personals and creativity. Oh, and work on your structure, buddy. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Yungkiss
*Vote on the battles in my sig and I'll return the favor later.*
iight, it was an ok battle, and it was close...
kiss-i think u had more originality and better punches and flow, but not by far, well, bill underestamated you, yah hes spit a lot better, but because he did underestamate you, u pulled through. Your vocab want much but vocab isnt the prime point. you had more metas, but bill was also very close in this
bill-nice verse man, but like i said before, you underestimated him, but also like i sed, uve spit better than this, your punches were slightly played, slightly, this was the main reason why imnot voting for you, a little bit more on the punches and metas and you should have had tis.
but both verses were good but the final vote goes too...
...kiss
peace
uppin