10 lines
I spit first
Spit when ever you feel, even if we're talkin 2 days
Goodluck, hope you got my IM
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10 lines
I spit first
Spit when ever you feel, even if we're talkin 2 days
Goodluck, hope you got my IM
I'm here...
Let's see what ya made of.
you put ppl to sleep all hours of the day like Night n' Day Quill mixed
damage ur competative level 4ever like waitin on bones to heal n' fix
try n' come large, u'll shoot off wrong impressions like cocanuts assin ya underwear
Borns got me less scared than his own avatar, I wont even bother to lose my hair
you cant pop me unless u dish me steroids until acne builds on my back
im silent but deadly like mafia wacks, you only are usin ur ass crack
step back, i'll literally burn you, its like we racin diobolical cars
Born aint got the balls to start a real fight like non-alcoholic bars
ill make u look bad, worse than a picture of ya past liscense
fuck Born, his punches are about as consistant as gas prices
ya married n' stuck wit one pussy, a perminant keeper for that goal
have fun findin a new piece...its like blind mice in search of a Hole
Born hit this up honestly dude, make this 12 lines ok, peace it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117412
Him...
Birthday: March 11, 1987
Age: 16
Crew: solo
So...
Trog, my son...welcome to the fold...
Ya just been beaten by a 34 year old.
But don't you cry, there's been many others...
And they're all like you, at home with mother.
Just a young sprout, barely outta the earth...
So it's not a surprise that ya such an herb.
Bitch soundin name, sounds neanderthal...
But those dudes are extinct, just like ya balls.
Called out when ya had em, but now ya fucked...
Cuz when I accepted, they sucked right up!
Insult to injury, cuz I don't need 12 for you...
But fuck it!
Ya crew life's like ya sex life, doin that solo too.
WTF
Born-I've seen you spit better shit in the cyph... in my opinion that verse was weak as hell...punches didnt really hit, no real word play or meta's.
TrogDor-better punches...good metas... my favorite line
step back, i'll literally burn you, its like we racin diobolical cars
Born aint got the balls to start a real fight like non-alcoholic bars
^it was pretty good, I'd say you won cause Born put no effort at all into his verse.
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122067
Please vote ^^return favor
Trogdor- Good verse. You had better punches. Ya had some good metas. You had an okay flow ya dig. You had some pretty good lines yo like at the end you finshed off pretty nice i thought so keep up tha good work
Born to kill- Damn man i thought you were gonna come wit some better punches and a better verse. Your punches were bad, and so was your verse. Plus your there was like no flow, and you didnt have no word play at all...
Vote- Trogdor
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I liked parts in both verse
Trog: you verse was kinda streched but it still flowe could. some of your rhymes were weak but i really liked that gas prices rhyme, thought it was really good. Try to be mroe consistent
Born to kill:well i dunno if trog is an alias but if not youve had way mroe expericen than him. You won the battle with consistent but a bit short punches and i was diggin your closer. This battle was closer than in shoulda been,
Born should try harder next time and dont underestamate opponents
V/born
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Trog - other than stickin in the name 'Born' occasionally this coulda been for anyone.. didnt get personal at all.. jus a series of stand alone punches.. some of em were pretty cool actually but they were ineffective compared to ur opponents..
Born - standard.. nothin special but it was on point with the personals as usual.. ya punches were alot more effective cos they were keyed directly at ya opponent.. closed pretty well.. enuff to win this..
VoTe = Born.. cos he dissed his opponent personally.
^^^^same here i liked born's personals and everything so u basically explained it for me
vote=born for overall nicer verse
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some of the punches TD was hiting were played
like the part about him being married ya heard
who realy gives a fuck if thats all the pussy there
at least he has a wife, a family, a fucking life ok
and most of ya shit was filler related no good quotes
and also some of ya shit was half assed & corny at points
i felt B2K had harder hitting punches and nice flow
decent personals and overall it was enough i thought
and hes struc was nice, short bars but witty ones
aight man imma vote for B2K for coming stronger
& B2K can you close this its been sleeping like 4ever
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121504
vote/B2K
IMO this wasn't that great of a battle.
Born 2 kill I expected better from you man. Your diction was good along with your flow and structure. However, I fould your creativity 2 be lacking. Your verse seemed kinda played out. Your punches and personals were there but they didn't hit very hard. I didnt find any apparent multis. best line was this... was pretty tight. Bitch soundin name, sounds neanderthal...
But those dudes are extinct, just like ya balls
Like i said i expected better.
Trogdor your structure was a lil off along with your flow. Your diction was good and you were pretty damn creative. Concepts were alright. Punches and personals were there and they hit harder than b2k's did. A decent verse from you but it could use some work. your best line was this! Killed it! you cant pop me unless u dish me steroids until acne builds on my back
im silent but deadly like mafia wacks, you only are usin ur ass crack
Vote/ Trogdor
Trogodor - your punches were not that complex. Flow was a little off, i still dont kno why you used an underwear line.. that is just nasty! You didn't have many personals, and your structure was messed up in a few places... Not that great of a verse, elevate.
Born to Kill - Your punches were a bit harder hitting. Flow was also better. And your opener made me laugh, so did the line about all of your merkings were at home with their mother. Your verse was a bit more complex, and harder hitting. Structure was short and straight to the point. And your creativity was just a little better.
Weak battle tho.. but i'm goin with Born to Kill
V/Born to Kill
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post1313034
Structure goes to B2k and the flow as nice man tro needs to work on that
Punches tro i felt yours was too force and u need more direct punches and a few was played but b2k nice punches more direct punches in there
personals B2k Took this one also his was more better they went will with the conpects and etc
Mutis really not none but b2k had a few and they were ok
meta4s was ok and not many in there
wordplay sick wordplay b2k u have nice wordplay yo
overall b2k
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123133