yall know the rules
votes explained
no crew,etc.
10 bar min.
and the rest of the good stuff
no bullshit
let's blaze
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yall know the rules
votes explained
no crew,etc.
10 bar min.
and the rest of the good stuff
no bullshit
let's blaze
due today............................................. ............................
check in
I drain life out of many battlers, like swamps full of leaches
And this nigga is easily slept on so his screen name was made to beaches
I’ll leave you speechless like my many fans that have lost their voices
And either you chose to suck like hookers or you’re just not good wit makin choices
My rhymes are definately the moistest so it’s difficult to lyrically have my gripped
And like speed tickets given to hustla’s I’ll literally have you ripped
I’ll lyrically have you stripped because you’re claimin to be rebel
But even with the use of an elevator you wouldn’t be on my level
** aiight, I’mma try to bring my real shit…for a change. **
It’s now time that I’m serious because many will be gorily murdered by my gasses
And I cause more deep breaths, than bitches enrolled in Lamaze classes
Not only wit rashes they also ask why I leave gashes on bodies by the masses
So I reply there’s no need for you to ask this cuz all that murder was just for practice
I attack this, because I model life after each of my prophecies and visions
And if you’re lookin for a Messiah only in my pupils will he ever be risen
Yung murders niggas in prison but for some reason they ain’t believing ya
Cuz they don’t realize that I cause more death in cells than sickle cell anemia
I seem to be freein ya cuz slavery has become a thing of the past
But presently I’m still capable of lyrically whippin dat ass
I’m spittin it fast, like Twista and I do not mean the artist
And competing in sex wit castrated men is the only way that you’d be the hardest
uppin for your verse
where ur verse at homie
get blazed...
Yungkiss on my street is walkin-dead like Michael Jackson in thriller
cuz half of your verse was no threat and the other half was filler
another newbie to the site; but ya stay won't be long-term
i'll guarantee to leave this YUNGin burnt like charred sperm
10 bar limit so i guess you gave me more then enough
your punches is more forced then intercourse in the butt!
imma take KISS out the game like music thats alternative
your lines is more played then coke heads trynna be conservative!
let's talk hood then; i'll squeeze just to see how many slugs you can take
"Imma try to bring my real shit for a change" means all his life this thugs been a fake
conclude that your whole status has been a living charade
in this battle your'e more assed out then faggots at a dick parade
cursin this geek, deflate your ego bring you to earth in the streets
this biter smiled at me and i spotted my verse in his teeth!!
made a mistake now your 0 fans have to watch your spleen decay
so you better break the voters legs if you want votes to lean your way
you spit like you know how to rock but never seen ya slangin on blocks
I'll put a rope around your neck and give you a perfect hang out spot!
now everybody know you gotta foot fetish cuz you love defeat(the feet)
after you see this dont even up fa votes just CTRL+ALT+DELETE!!!!!
*KEYSTYLE*
10 barz is 20 lines dumb ass
uppin for votes on this battle
uppin for votes...don't sleep on this....will return the favor
o yeah watch who call dumbass fuckin internet thug.....get ya lil ass murked
uppin on this battle
uppin.....dont sleep on this shit .....fuckin kunts...
Uppin
uppin.............................................
yungkiss- i liked ur finisher first of all. all ur punches were decent, well better than his. flow was a little bad. and da stucture of it was cool.
brook burns- i liked ur finisher too. u had punches but not too good. only liked da finisher and da beginning. flow was great. structure was aight. but ur weak punches are what hurt u.
but this battle goes to................................................ .............
vote: yungkiss
fuck that shit...make your verses 10 lines then people might actually read it..
uppin for votes
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^ lmfao...look at that again very carefully man...Quote:
Originally Posted by Yungkiss
hahahaha
lol
o.k yungkiss had alot of punches brook u weren't feeling it no emotion to it and wha is wit sperm u couldn't find a other word to rhyme anywayz both flows were good but yungkiss had all the emotion overall brook was good yungkiss was better v yungkiss
Return the favor
yung kiss i didnt like the 2nd part too stretched out but yer beginning was good and i liked it your punches were great and everything else was decent iliked the sickle cell punch
brooks i liked your shit everything flowed perfect and your punches were good but yung kiss's punches were off the hook which is why kiss gets my vote
v/yungkiss
Im in youngs crew so i cant poll
This was very good battle by both people, alot fo nice punches personal wordplay
Young: you came really hard ,w tih some funny shjit too, i really like your lamaza classes one that me fucking bust a loung, but very good alaround
Brookburns: youve got skills man you cam reyll good too , id have to say almost perfectly even with young. Your intercourse in the but was kinda played but was really well structured and worded so came acrros pretty hard.
Both verse were dope in my opinion
even i could poll it i dunno who id votre for
brook burns won i giv' u that 1
i like dem punchlines dawg
keep it up and keep yo head up cuz
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
yungkiss is dq'd for excessive upping.
Every post after both verses are down,
are concider'd as an up.....
BrookBurns wins.