go ahead the floor is yours, the shit is set up.
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go ahead the floor is yours, the shit is set up.
???????????????? Do you have a rematch ot sumthing cuz the last time I checked you lost from BTK with 5-0, weird......................
Checkin in...
He says he can do better this time around...
Kid, just cuz you's a dumbell...
Don't mean you can go pound for pound.
You were wasted yesterday, totally shamed...
Copped ya first loss, and couldn't live up to ya name.
No King, just a jester who cold got laughed at...
Ya low like a bump in tha road, and I easily rolled past that.
Now here ya are again, trying ta save face...
But dawg, you's ugly, so I'd consider tryin ta replace.
"Rap for Dummies" subscriber, lookin ta land hits...
But like yards without fertilizer, you ain't shown me shit.
Just another rookie bitch who ended up getting fucked...
Now you've got a losing record, aside from having ta suck.
I've grown bored, and hungry, startin ta think about lunch...
And that kinda filler ^^^^, is even harder than ya punch.
So it's all over for you, like a Donald Trump firing...
But you will be famous, for having 2 battles then retiring.
One more hit will do the trick, <-----sounds like ya sex life...
Gettin high ta suck the dick, but hey, whatever gets ya by.
My fault I took so long but I was out all yesterday.
Come on famdo you know they call you B2K.
And your a hardcore rapper, man dat shit sounds gay.
And ya rap name is Born ta Kill.
But I know one thing ya wasn't born ta do, thats get a deal.
Damn B2K ya older than my mom and my dad.
And ta you I suck man that makes you look bad.
An old ass man battles a teenager.
Thats almost like my high school team playin the Lakers.
But it's not, so don't get happy and say I called you nice.
Cuz your just more experienced, but ya shit ain't tight.
And ya hand is the only place ya ass be bustin.
Cuz you ain't seen pussy sense ya first time fuckin( if you did).
Ya talk is cheap and rhymes is weak.
Its funny cuz ya by yourself when you reach your peek.
Old man stop fuckin ya damn hand.
You ain't nothin but a reject from makin the band.
You get caught beat ya meat by ya mom, ya wussy.
So let me call you wat you don't get, you pussy.
My fault I took so long but I was out all yesterday.
Come on famdo you know they call you B2K.
And your a hardcore rapper, man dat shit sounds gay.
And ya rap name is Born ta Kill.
But I know one thing ya wasn't born ta do, thats get a deal.
Damn B2K ya older than my mom and my dad.
And ta you I suck man that makes you look bad.
An old ass man battles a teenager.
Thats almost like my high school team playin the Lakers.
But it's not, so don't get happy and say I called you nice.
Cuz your just more experienced, but ya shit ain't tight.
And ya hand is the only place ya ass be bustin.
Cuz you ain't seen pussy sense ya first time fuckin( if you did).
Ya talk is cheap and rhymes is weak.
Its funny cuz ya by yourself when you reach your peek.
Old man stop fuckin ya damn hand.
You ain't nothin but a reject from makin the band.
You get caught beatin ya meat by ya mom, ya wussy.
So let me call you wat you don't get, you pussy.
Oh shit fuck that first post of mine.
I messed up on that so that first post doesn't count.
Its the same as the first one.
Someone kick this voting off, please...
Pretty fuckin please???
Vote/ B2K
why? well first of all.. he had punches.. lyrical king had weak attempts of punchlines that made no sense at all and using his name doesnt make it a personal.. weak wordplay if any and seriously need to be upped.. B2k didnt drop his best but the best of him wasnt needed. B2k could have dropped all filler and one punchline and would have got it... Lyrical king look up punch line in RB help center.. it helps in battles.. and is actually the only real thing that matters in a battle and you failed.
Ladies and gentlemen we have a dick ryder in the building but its all good.
Lyrical King - I say get ur game up and ur punches was kinda played and u need to elevate on that and also ur personals was not connecting and flow with ur verse like it should and i say u need to elevate before u battle an Vet again
B2K Nice verse i was feeling it and i guessed u keyed this cuz ur structure was off and ur personals was nice and ur wordplay and mutis and meta4s was hitting right on the dot
V/B2K
Thats how u vote guy
Your wack thats a bitch vote.
Your just mad that i voted for Da Kid, why you gotta take shit personal.
Its nothing personal anyone that comes in here i bet they will say the same thing
I feel you but you ain't vote until you saw i voted against you and you might be right but thats still a bitch move.
return the favor
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122272
lyricalking- about the only line i liked was the last one. the rest was off. you said his name too much. you came with a lot of weak personals. came kind of soft i say.
Born- came wit harder everything. punches and all. not much personals, but everything else was good. better than lyricals. nice flow to your whole verse. closer was prolly my fav. took pretty much every category. props.
vote- B2K
peace
It's kind of funny how lyricalking actually thinks he's bein d/red out of this battle, but w/e.
Lyrical- First, get away from that"ur gay" type of lines. Try to incooperte more complexty into your verse by using personals that hit hard, multis, wrodplay etc. Too simple and that type of verse won't win you a lot of battles, especially against B2K.
B2K- Average from what I've seen. Opener was dope, liked that line a lot. And also liked the road line. Personals that hit pretty hard, it wasn't ur best, you didn't need your best.
Vote- B2K for simply having harder punches. Sry I can't poll, pz.
excuse me ladies and gentlemen lyrical is official dumbfuck by swaying votes.. ahhem lyrical it doesnt take much to beat someone like you in a battle.. and how am i a dickrider? why dont u dick ride this biotch
Uppin
vote: Born
he actually had some punches, and i could tell he didnt try
Lyrical king had fillers all over the place with no meaning, and sumtimes nothing even made freakin sense, you have to be more creative dude, USE PUNCHES for the 100th time
Borns line about the fertalizer was the best cuz it made me chuckle
Please hit this up in return
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=122721&page=2
I thought this was closed...
Please make it so...
Thank you.
Peace
Didn't I ask a favor of you people?
Please close this, it very clearly needs to be.
Thanks.
Peace
born to kill- you had goo punches and personals...good flips......i liked the flow...structure was good...opener was fine and so was closer...........punches hit hard...good job and good verse
lyrical- bad verse...no punches that hit hard enough....personals were off..they didnt do anything..flow was ok and structure was ok but you have to work on personals more..use them more often..they really help
v/born to kill
return it with the battle in my sig if you can
BTK...you came you half assed self....punches were there for the most part but you did have a little filler and some played lines...like the pound for pound one..but you had pretty good overall punches and personals and metas
LyricalKing25...you came weak...even out your lines to fix your flow...most of your punches were pretty weak and played...You came way too simplistic....try and use some witty lines man....
Vote BTK
Please drop an honest vote here..gettin mad slepped on..thansk guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122665