10-20 lines blind spit..
3-0 knock out or first ta 5 wins
no crew votes no bull shit you know the rules...check in
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10-20 lines blind spit..
3-0 knock out or first ta 5 wins
no crew votes no bull shit you know the rules...check in
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checkin in yall...aight, aight i'll drop mine later then ........
aight since you didnt spit it's past the deadline but i'll spit anyways.....
Sorry fer the free post,
hardhitter stop prayin off these newbs..
i wanna rematch pussy!
aight aight ok....
It seems i've brought you alot of raw stress, causing a mental breakdown from ur already fucked up thought process
Now you're not even cautious when spiting weak shit that you think is sick, hell it makes me nauseous
You're the ultimate computer nerd, this what i've learned from ur member photo
My multies leave you burnt ucz your lyrics are always rendered solo
Quit thinking u can make this battle historic, just ur name in the title of this thread makes people ignore it
You ugly fuck, i'll make ur face even more morbid as a result of my horrid actions
People could scream in a horror fashion but they wanna see more man whore bashin
Why would you even try to compete wit me in the first round when u were amazed by this verse and how the words sound
This is just absurd now, hardhitter is trying to act hard but obviously can't match my smarts
I used to think he was chillin cuz of his avatar but came to realize he's one of the pricks i'd punch out at the bar
It really didn't matter if you saved the material you thought was ur best
You can't bring anything deep for these peeps to leave them impressed
Nobody wants to hear weak emcees fight so get off this web site before you're forced to secretly bite to be condersided tight.
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ayo........''''and1mix'''' can you belive this bitch tellin ~n~ textin fake lies...........
ive been out, alittle rusty,but will take this win with no suprise.........
this mother fucker is talkin about damageing peeps with his heat........
kidd i'll pull ya heart out your chest and rap ta the beat..........
and im comein at you with some real shit off the top of the dome...
un like you,you searh site and come with a line off a popular poem...
and And1mix says he's slangin by the bolda........
only coke this kid sell's is coke with a dash and a cola.....
...after this u better look up to me as the illest in your eyes..........
cuz the only time this kid's on the mic is when he ask's if you want your meal super sized....
........chill herb i'll hit ya fast..........
by the time the votes come in your eyes will be hangin out ya ass.......
now take a grasp lay back and chill fag dont get hypped.......
your not black mann your liveing a white life.......
meet you in audios and strangle you with the mic.......
an "AND1MIX you and leave your brain spinnin like wheel's on a bike.......
sorry about that dude i was out sk8ing all day and forgot all about this battle..............shit happens........
nah its aight....i forgot bout it too....so who care bout deadline now it dont matter now wit da votes yall
yeah it still can go on cuz i never posted a time in the rules so let the votes come in....................uppin #1
this was a nice battle...
And1mix- Okay your verse was very good. Your punches were okay, but some what decent, but maybe you should work on them a little. I thought you had a nice flow.And the last 2 lines at the end was nice also. And ur personal were nice too.
HardHitter- the same your verse was hott tho. Your punches were kinda lacking a little. But they were ok. Your personals were better then his. Nice flow and structure.
but it's tough ....close one
vote- and1mix
ok..........uppin #2..leave a link ill hit it up.....peace
weak battle ....
and1- lines were stretched.....it hurt your verse. Punches were ok and so were the personals.....but you have to use more personals....the flow was opk and so was the structure........gotta elevate and use more personals
hardhitter- lines were stretched also.....the punches were ok and the personals were ok......but use more of them...they help alot........the flow was off abit and the strcuture was ok.....work on some things..............you came played also.....
work on it
v/and1
no herb's pleazzz..........thank you........uppin#3
Uppin.......................Vote People..............
fav line of the battle
this mother fucker is talkin about damageing peeps with his heat........
kidd i'll pull ya heart out your chest and rap ta the beat..........
Other than that, And1 took it. He had very nice multi's and creativity. His vocab was complex. The only negative feedback i give him are his stretched lines and structure. Try and cut those down so it's easier to follow.
For the other dude, yoou had better flow and structure i'de say. But your lines were too basic, not many meta's, similies or wordplay. try to make more creative lines like the one about you beatin to his heart. although it wasnt all that, it was your best.
Please hit this up honestly.......thank you dont overlook it.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117412
Can we please close this battle now Cuz i win 3-0 vote knockout in da rules....
Just let the battle run, I dont think 3-0 KO is a rule on RB thats why the polls go up to 5 dude
Dont forget to hit up my link, im still waitin for an honest vote.......
i know dat ......but this dude put the rules in dis thread that 3-0 is a knockout and will get win just read the first page and find out....So please close cuz i won 3-0 knockout the guy made the rules so ...??
PM a MOD, PM born to kill
and please hit up my link dude......................fairly
Yeah no doubt dawg...i'll hit up your links then ...
First to 5 votes will win, none of this 3-0 = win shit..
aight then i dont care......i was just sayin ....aight then uppin...vote people
Upppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn.........Vote People...........
ahhhhh AND1MIX you are over your limit,you have posted to many times,,and will a MOD pleaz tell these herbs to quit freeposting cuz it is bullshit heres one of the herb=Trogdor,Do something about this thank you.............
And1mix.. post again and you will be DQed for uppin too much. Since you are new.. I won't DQ you. But you're only allowed 5 ups. every post after both verses are posted are considered ups.
this is your warning.
And1 Your structure is fuck its so damn fuck get it right bit in the that fuck up structure u also had some nice punches that was connecting and ii was feeling the wordplay and also work on ur personals if u get that down pack I think u will be a beast
Hardhitter I wasn't feeling ur shit at all on the real a few punches here and there and some was played and ur personals need to be before work on ur wordplay and shit and soory for hitting the enter botton
my vote go to and1
return the favor
its in my sig
can we have this last vote removed it is a incorect vote..........
It seems i've brought you alot of raw stress, causing a mental breakdown from ur already fucked up thought process
Now you're not even cautious when spiting weak shit that you think is sick, hell it makes me nauseous
ummm.....wak.....culd of done suttin better...nice multiz tho
You're the ultimate computer nerd, this what i've learned from ur member photo
My multies leave you burnt ucz your lyrics are always rendered solo
culd work on 1st line.2nd line waz good
Quit thinking u can make this battle historic, just ur name in the title of this thread makes people ignore it
You ugly fuck, i'll make ur face even more morbid as a result of my horrid actions
umm.....where tha rhymin??.....i waz rollin on ya 1st line...
People could scream in a horror fashion but they wanna see more man whore bashin
Why would you even try to compete wit me in the first round when u were amazed by this verse and how the words sound
This is just absurd now, hardhitter is trying to act hard but obviously can't match my smarts
I used to think he was chillin cuz of his avatar but came to realize he's one of the pricks i'd punch out at the bar
umm.......wakk......
It really didn't matter if you saved the material you thought was ur best
You can't bring anything deep for these peeps to leave them impressed
i c u prolly do audio....but text aint audio......
Nobody wants to hear weak emcees fight so get off this web site before you're forced to secretly bite to be condersided tight.
wakk
overall- okay verse...sum linez were nice...otherz were juss plain wak
overall-5/10
ayo........''''and1mix'''' can you belive this bitch tellin ~n~ textin fake lies...........
ive been out, alittle rusty,but will take this win with no suprise.........
wak...culdve gone sumwhere wit it..
this mother fucker is talkin about damageing peeps with his heat........
kidd i'll pull ya heart out your chest and rap ta the beat..........
lol...2nd line waz hot.....
and im comein at you with some real shit off the top of the dome...
un like you,you searh site and come with a line off a popular poem...
umm...wak....
and And1mix says he's slangin by the bolda........
only coke this kid sell's is coke with a dash and a cola.....
lol...ok....not 2 good...
...after this u better look up to me as the illest in your eyes..........
cuz the only time this kid's on the mic is when he ask's if you want your meal super sized....
lmfaoo...nicee....
........chill herb i'll hit ya fast..........
by the time the votes come in your eyes will be hangin out ya ass.......
lmfao at da 2nd line...
now take a grasp lay back and chill fag dont get hypped.......
your not black mann your liveing a white life.......
eh...weak...wak...dont b prejudice...
meet you in audios and strangle you with the mic.......
an "AND1MIX you and leave your brain spinnin like wheel's on a bike.......
loll..nice wordplay..nice closer...
overall-7/10
i duno bout yall.....but i REALLY think dat hardhitter took this one no doubt..
i swear dis aint a d/r...but i saw dat hardhitter took this
and1- work on ya structure....
Aight..
Kinda one-sided IMO..
And1 - your structure was really hurting..very stretched bars man, gotta fix that immediately, you'll get hits for that like a motherfucker. Because of the messed up structure, the flow was hurting too. Not too bad on the creativity side, liked some of your punches. Personals werent really there, or didnt hit very well..For structure, tryin keep it like:
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...and so on..ya know? Keep elevating man..
hardhitter - overall, I think you came harder in this one. Personals were a little better, and punches were..eh...ok. Ditto on the structure and flow, need to work on that badly. Very stretched bars. However, yours was a little easier to read and you came harder than and1..in my opinion anyways. You both need to work on it tho..
Vote / hardhitter
Peace..
your verses are really similar. lol. nice tho. came real original. your structures were outta wack. both had real nice punches and wordplay tho. didn't come to much on the personals. kinda annoying to read wit those structures, but i think you both came pretty hard. but overall, i was feelin' and1's verse more. he came with nice multies that mixed well wit his verse and made his flow smoother and nice. props to both but for flow...
vote-And1Mix
poll your vote on my battle plz. thanx.
peace