10 lines min and max
u spit first
due in 40 min afta chek in
no crew
cannot leave links until i also bcome flywieght...cuz many headz dr....
no recycling .....u know da rest....
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10 lines min and max
u spit first
due in 40 min afta chek in
no crew
cannot leave links until i also bcome flywieght...cuz many headz dr....
no recycling .....u know da rest....
it takes dat fuken long 2 chek in?????????????????
aight checkin in i'll drop soon.....................
ite.....ill spit asap afta u........................
aight aight...
Today im writing wit a broken hand, but still gon be smokin raw
Spoken well, swelled your cheek w/ my fis, ur spitting wit a broken jaw
I spit carnage, similar to faces after thugs tear up..
Ill tap into your veins, like hotcakes with blood syrup..
You fuckin SAP, two claps and lights out, i might shout
Eyebrows raised when amazed as your sister dikes out
Your a cold discrase, i'm rushing, you better hold your pace
I'll smoke your Ace, with my pencil give you the nick name "poker face"
Full of holes, made with lead, bloodshed, the love is lost
Tornado style, whip my way through this modern day holocaust
You crazy, loco, nutty, out of it..You feel insane? battlein me
I'll bubble your skin wit hot lyrics that'll rattle your brain cavity
ite imma start keyin...5:10 eastern................
n dawg...u have12 lines...take out two....
nah 4get it...........cuz then ur verse is gonna looked fuked up...
yeah sorry bout that dawg .............................
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hmmm...
ite ite...now watch as i kill this herbish flyweight...
Hes riting with a broken hand...but after this he'll havae two..
And yea ...this is the modern day holocaust...but ur the jew!
He came out weak..but u shuld neva underestimate ya opponent..
Bitch new dat i would kill em....so he prewrote and postponed it...
Let me sink a lil' bit lower......there we go-but still we ain't even
This kid has to look up to me...like i'm all that he believes in!!
He already got merked once....but this kid just doesnt get it..
A 'punch' wouldnt come to his head....it Tyson swang and hit!
Nice choice for font&glow color...cuz now it matches your eye...
Now just shut down ur comp.cuz ur not gettin a vote,so never reply
eh...didnt really ned 2 go all dat hard......lets up dis shytt!!!
te ite ite...uppin this shyt...leave ya links now dat we both can vote!
Lyricaly iposted this link on the mission's.. so your mission is now complete..
newayz good battle by both of you kee it up....
:thumbup:
Eh.. ya came played alotQuote:
Originally Posted by And1mix
you had like 1 or 2 decent punches
other than that, you came weak
Elevate homie...
Came alot better than And1Quote:
Originally Posted by lyricallyabbusiv
Some harder hitting punches
Made me laugh a few times..
So, my vote goes to you
V/lyricallyabbusiv
Aight,Aight come people keep votin on dis battle...Vote then leave a link and i'll respond to it....Uppin 1
uppijn 2.....LEAVE YA LINKZ PEEPS..GLAD 2 HIT EM UP:)
Wow this was a good battle i thought
Lyrically- Very Good verse. You had some good punches. The flow was okay not the greastest. Your structure was good. I think you started off good, but then i thought you just maybe went a little downhill...but good job
And1- You had a good verse too. But your punches were nicer then his, because i was just feelin dem. The flow was nice. Your structure was in order not all out of line and shit. But i was just liking yours because it made me like whoa those are some nice punches.
But it was a close battle but i gotta give it to.......
vote -and1mix
(plz hit my battles up then)
ok, my vote- and1mix
reasons:
And1mix- ur verse was aight, i like some of ya verse but not the whole thing. Ya structure was aight, not the best but aight. Ya vocab was aight, still not the best but aight. Ya wordplay was a bit better, when i red there was very few places where i didnt really get it, like why did u put something where u did. Ya personals were aight, nuthin special. and ya punches, not many, but there ones that u did have hit pretty straight on him.
Lyricallyabussive- ur verse was nothin special. The first thing that brought me further form choosing u was the fact u was feedin, not a big fan of it aight. Ya verse was pretty much the same. U did have some played lines aswell like the modern holocaust, ive seen that too much before and dont plan to see anymore.
So my votes- And1Mix, mostly because he was not the one feedin(he really couldnt, considering he spit first).
hit this up with an honest one, its weak......... i know, and i aint haten on none of yall about this battle, aight
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122404
hmmmmm..... i see sum dik riders....look at HPER-ACTYVES ip and then AN1MIX's....see something similaar?? YES!
plze dun d/r...cuz itz pretty obvious who won dis battle......cmon now...
lyricallyabbusiv "Hes riting with a broken hand...but after this he'll havae two..
And yea ...this is the modern day holocaust...but ur the jew!" i was feelin that it had me rollin..good punches nas structure and better personals.....
and1mix was real played..BLAH BLAH BLAH..one sided battle and lyricallyabbusiv took this in ever catagorie...........
v/lyricallyabbusiv
tite battle...but lyrically takes this in my eyes
he had more punches...nice personals...and nice structure
and1, i wasnt feeling your shit...it was all babble to me...but u had nice punches though....but nto as great as lyrically's
punches- lyrically, easily takes this categor
flow- tie
sturcutre- easily seen and lyric takes this
personals- lyric, i loved your opener and your closer man, had me laughin
multis- tie
vote- lyrically abbusiv for better verse
Mmmmkk...
And1mix - overall this was pretty weak man. Nothing really stood out to me at all. Structure and flow were aiight I guess, but punches and personals were really hurtin. A lot of filler to be honest with ya..dont stop though, always room for elevation. Work on personals, thats usually what hits the hardest in battles :thumbup:
lyrically - Came much better. Wasnt the dopest verse in the world, but it was enough. Nice use of the font colors for a diss, that was prolly the line that stood out the most. Saw a few personals, at least you had some..Ditto on the structure and flow..wordplay was eh..rhyme scheme was fine.
Vote goes to lyrically, basically came more complete and had personals where as and1 was lacking them.
Vote / lyrically
Will poll once you peep my battle, tired of ppl sleepin..
Peace..
lyrically- your verse was aight. u had punches. the flow was aight also. in da beginning u were comin at him hard, then u just started fallin off at da end. but it was aight overall.
and1- yeah ur verse was aight too. he had punches, but u had better ones. ur flow was kinda confusin, had to read it over a couple of times. but i liked da beginning when u was gettin on his "broken hand"
vote: And1mix
and1- flow was alright and you had some totally decent lyrics. Unfortunately you had no personals and the punches just didn't hit hard.
Lyric- nice verse you came creative with it. You only had 1 or two personals but thats more than him. Punches hit hard, i was feelin your shit.
Hit my battle up with Thing and make sure you drop that vote you promised and1. Also check out I lost a friend open mic in my siggy
Peace