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13 lines or some shit
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13 lines
30 minutes to drop
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5:20 eastern time
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lets get this shyt crackin
Knowing the anatomy the substance rapid fire is a general term
mostly ****** bitches wit perms & that have stretch marks curved
whats so rapid about this fire the core is mostly runed by propane
as mine runs on liquid ILLumanum gas influenced radio cloaked waves
fuck what u say your easily gay & provoked by the pillsberry doh boy smashed dick n ya tummy its funny when ya woo hoo ur the real mc Coy
i mean this kids has fun putting her dick n silly little stuffed animals
but yur willy is negative 1 centameters long & u fuck dead microbes
this clown got her name off the movie when she first seen brandin lee
but like bruce lee imma 'nun chuck' this mother fucker like sarah lee
a bee has more girth than u as u be seeing trees thinking there robots
yur an AIM bot & ya name is 'smarter child' the computer geek stop
u hop on fast to D/R & u have a female stride & yur always on top
Roflmao
keyed
didnt think
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Oh please, thise siamese will be ceased with ease//
He so full of shit- they could build feces trees //
When He "release some anger", they line cos asshole with grease/
Mastermind underneith, and says "Im loving this breeze!"//
ill make your first track become your last track/
cause you just in this battle for motherfuckers to laugh at/
His face and tongue was sprung upon his sister's nappy pussy//
His fingers in the ass, he asks to have a happy"look-see"//
rapid overdoses your system time to unfold the curtains/
in this battle your sexually and lyrically,the motherfuckin virgins/
and im poppin you,hard-knock-lock-with screws,remotely the purist/
this is something new,its like a vacation for you,your both tourists/
cause your rhymes make people commit sucide,including people with def disorder/
U Want 2 Battle Me Ill Put Ya Sleep,spitt Fire With No Teeth Have Niggas Runnin Like Track Meets,let Them Know Who Tha Best Be
yo dont use the "n" word first of all and dont free post this is a battle if u gonna post it's for a vote
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vote: cos
he had better punches and sweet vocab skillz. flow was terrible tho, hard to follow, to many words in ur sentences threw it off tracck
rapid fire, you had an ok versse, no punches tho, yes creativity but no metas either. dont come so basic next time
overall wack battle
and u two need to stop with the fake personals, like what the fuck
Vote: Cos
Rapid poll my battle now
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=122721&page=2
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hmm...one sided battle...
cos takes this easily..he had his punches on target...and his flow was str8..his sturcutre was good 2...
rappd- ya font waz 2 small..but ya puches were good..but not as good as cos'...ur strcture was decent also...nice verse..but cos got this one man...
punches: cos
sturc.: tie
flow: cos
cretivity: cos
vote- cos...fairly easy..
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cos- nice verse, you had some decent punches at rapid. personals werent bad either, ya could of thrown more but none the less the ones ya didnt hit pretty hard. flow wasnt very good. ya need work on that, structure wasnt great either but your verse was strong
rapid - not a bad verse, didnt hit really with a punch of personal, ya had some nice metas but nothin else stood out, flow was blah and structure could off been betta,
v/ overall cos takes this for hitting harder and having more decent punches and personals. hit up me
Vote-Cos
He had harder hitting punches..and I could find his flow, but dont try to use so much vocab because that wont win all your battles..I was feeling the bruce/sarah lee line and the propane/cloaked waves lines too..your line's danced around the opponent for a little bit then it finally hit her enough to cause an effect..pretty good verse
Rapid Fire-your flow was good..and so was your structure..your punches werent bad they just weren't hard hitting causing you to lose this battle..like the "im loving this breeze" is really working in this battle to have an effect on the opponent as a diss...and the last line made your verse look weird because it ended on a new line with a different syllable at the end causing the transition to sound funny..from tourists to disorder..should of atleast added an extra line or just taken that line out..but this battle was closer than it looked..
keep it up
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Rapid fire had da best flow of both emcees in dis weak battle....Cos was rippin it with more complex lines even though rapid fire isn't a girl...Rapid fire's concept of punches and shit were getting old and virgin line...shit...I ain't even going there but Cos came original and I give him props for dat...I didn't see a lot of played punches in Cos verse and his punchlines hit way harder than rapid fire...rapid fire's punches weren't going anywhere at all...Cos had da better structure and da better overall dissing verse and gets my vote for typing an original merking...Rapid needs to elevate...peace.
vote= Cos
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117124
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yo i dont mean to speak on ya thread but rapid fire you were suppose to battle me awhile back and u neva showed up nigga wuts goin on...holla at cha boi wheneva u get this 1 aight
COS-had harder punches..good flow..word play was okay...your rhyme was like you were backing up and just wanted to lay one big hit that hit him hard..pretty good verse--DECENt
Rapid Fire-your flow and structure was good..your punches werent bad but they were like BITCH SLAPS...the last line needs to be taken out never rhyme...but this battle was closer than it looked..
This was a decent battle...
VOTE--Cos
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cos
structure was ok....try and even out ur lines more though.....flow wasnt good at all....it was just everywhere but whateva.....metas were pretty good.....wordplay was decent.....some of the punches connected.....personals were ok....
rapid fire
structure wasnt that good...ur lines got increasingly larger as ur verse went through....try and even them out.....a few metas....wordplay was tight.....none of ur punches really connected....no personals....
Conclusion
neither had a good structure or flow.....both had metas....rapid had more wordplay.....cos had better punches and personals....so basing off of that....cos gets my vote....
VOTE - COS