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::House Rules::
1st U drop 1st
2nd Due in 20 min
3rd 10 Lines Max
Ciao Goodluck.
eye this to me is easy as pie
this was over fo it started so dont even try
im new to this battle shit but i kno ill win
so many ways i coud beat i dont kno where to begin
ill shake u and bake u like dante hall
ull change color and drop like leaves in fall
no need to go 3 rounds its over in 1
u sweatin and frettin im just havin fun
aint it ironic that that i kno these ebonics
im hooked on this chronic while u hooked on phonics
Aight kid learn and watch.
..1st off my stocks raise like nasdaq, and i be spittin rockets from NASA..
..Wright? I bet you like 50 cent because yall both the real Wankstas..
...........Just 7 posts? leave lyrical deposits in ur arteries.......
...........Cause u got a weak heart failure loss of memories......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121854 (Mike bitchslap thread)Quote:
Originally Posted by wrightmak17
..Cmon kid my scriptures just be wild, Go copy and paste ya rhymez..
..Throw ya watch away even Mike didnt wan to battlr you is a fuckin waste-of time..
..Its like a fuckin waste of lines, Probably this lil kid going to whine..
..Am the type to shoot myself in the dome just to give you a piece-of-my-mind..
..I m bringin more to tha table than forks and knifes...
...I keep my affairs thats the same day I porked Ya wife..
Ciao.
Ok.
17.
You came very weak.
You had multi's.
And a nice, clean structure.
But the punches lacked, greatly.
Eye.
You had a nasty structure.
Your trying to do too much.
Keep it simple.
You had the better punches.
Simply.
17 couldnt of won with a verse that weak.
But.
You do need to work on some things.
Add more multis.
But you win.
v/ Eye.
Hit up my topical battle in my sig. Dont have to poll it as I doubt your registered. But whatever. Jus go drop an opinion and I will get a MOD to add the vote.
Thank you.
Yea this battle was weak from me and also Wright so UPPUN..............
Writemak17 - nothing about your verse was good. Flow was even a little choppy, no punches, no personals, no wordplay, no multies. Man..elevate, your a major league newbie.
Eyeronik - you came alot wittier then wrightmak did.. You had some aight punches, some played.. but atleast you had them.. Flow was good, structure was ..BLAH! Overall.. you got this with ease.. i can tell you made no attempt though..
V/Eyeronik
yea i kno i was weak as hell
this my first battle tho, i think i did a little better on my second
eyeronik beat me hands down
check out my other battle http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121912
IS ok man we all get beat someday.
There is always someone better than you.
UppUN#2
UppUN#3
aight .
17 - very weak from you man, nothin stood out for you rhyme, you didnt have any good punches or personals, vocab was poor. flow was bad also. structure was blah
eye - an ok verse ,some ok punches, came alot harder than 17, flow was ok..
v/ eye won this easy
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Dq cuz of Inadequate feedback?
wtf UPPUN anywayz.
personals: Eyeronik had sum nice personals in there which came harder than wright
multis: Eyeronik had sum multis which were nice
punchlines: Wright your punches were played and they didn't came thru hard, work on that
structure: they both had a gud structure
wordplay and voc: Eye had gud wordplay and nice voc., didn't feel that with wright
Overall vote: Eyeronik, return the favur man, check my battles in my signature, thx.....
Wright you need to work on your punches and personals, aight?
UppUN#5
Plzzz End this Battle cuz ITs taking too DAMN LONG!!!
17 you had a basic verse with no punches at all or any metas. The only think you won in this battle was structure
Other dude, your structure is all over the place, put it together better so its easier to read. Other than that you won in every area why with punches and metas and vocab skillz
Elivate the both of you.
Pleae hit this up in return of this honest favour
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122412
This battle was kinda weak, but...
wrightmak17: Ur verse was very weak. Ur punches made no sense, and I had no enjoyment in reading your verse. Ur flow was weak, and ur verse was just wack in my opinion. But, keep elevatin'.
Eyeronik: Ur verse was weak too, but it had some okay personals. You gave it a good fight, but you are too basic. Other than that, you generally nedd to bring up ur level on all aspects. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Eyeronik
*Vote on the battles in my sig. I took the time, so should you people.*