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www.soundclick.com/bands/8/rapidfiremusic.htm should be the one on the top..
The begining is a bit warped...especially on lo fi...I'm rappin over machine guns...and the machine gun sample was bad quality...and I guess bad quality on lo fi is just horrible...the song has good quality tho I think..lemme know what u think..PLEASE don't judge the lyrics b/c I purposely focused on guns and didn't use great lyrics in this piece...
peace
grr..u fucking sleepers...
the voice is aiiight..the delivery was awesome as was the flow.. the chorus was catchy.. overall I like it.. its a good track
thanx...
peace
this track is pretty good, flow is straight, delivery is ok, lyrics are kinda basic like you said but there still good enough, the hook is good too. overall nice drop.
peeping... good beat... you got a decent flow, you fall off at points maybe cause you trying to fit to many words into a bar... Ok delivery... lyrics is kool nothing special.. I like the hook... second verse is better then first... well nevermind three verse you bring it better then the first two... if you rap like this with that energy you would surpass most these net cats... much respect for having a full song. I aint gon rate you cause I aint no one to be rating you na mean? But this was a good track...
crazy intro
uh oh!! some thug shit!
delivery was cool-laidback but hard at the same time
beat was tight
keep doin your thing
yea man, I wrote the first 2 verses a few months ago..I wrote the 3rd verse the day I recorded it, which would explain why the 3rd verse was best...was u saying I should put more energy into it? and thanx for the props...
peace
you know i wouldn't sleep on you fam=)....I liked flow was on point nice delivery better voice then you usually use......good lyrics overall nice beat and shit like that...yep yep...good song fam...now i might even buy the album....p.s. i heard you redid your shit on the IJL collab for some reason =).......7/10..pz
I have redone it yet, but I'm gonna redo it...my verse sounded like ass lol, and then when I heard ur verse I was like "fuck man I can't get outshone on my own cd.." I'm not changing the lyrics or anything, I'm just changin my voice on it..it was annoying lol..
peace
:laugh2: congradulations, you have reached optimal WHACKNESS. :hump:
^ and who the fuck are you, and why are u dissing my shit?
yo, just work on your flow and delivery you sound like you are
too excited try to sound more relaxed, like if you have done this
forever...your lyrics are nice so all you need is flow and delivery
and you will be a decent dude to spit on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122168
hit me back up
who am i? i'm an asshole, an asshole who speaks the truth. Werkonit.
Flow was way to basic. Thats the feedback I offer.
Im one who doesnt give net-gangster rap a chance.
But your flow was horrible.
really not feelin the beat sounds like some down south shit.
flow is pretty basic nuthing to sweet. talkin bout guns n money really isnt my style, dont really prefer it either especially when u prolly never held a gun in ur life either.
overall its aiight drop
return the favor http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...43#post1304343
It isn't my style either...and I'm from the south...and....being from the south I've OBVIOUSLY held a gun before...I made this track to satisfy the commercial fans who are gonna cop the album....I'm a really diverse emcee...
eh I dont' see how my flow was basic...i thought I switched it up alot..but I appreciate the crit...
peep more of my shit before u form an opinion on my overall style tho...
peace
^^oh yeah, obviously. :rolleyes:Quote:
Originally Posted by ~RaPiDfIrE~
you got "commercial fans"? Hmmm.. I find it hard to take you and an album very seriously, sorry. :huh:Quote:
Originally Posted by ~RaPiDfIrE~
Word. :)Quote:
Originally Posted by ~RaPiDfIrE~
Your flow was mad basic though
I listened to more tracks. Your not a garbage emcee by any means. However you are not ready to make an album. Your flow is elementry, your simply writing to snares. You got the tipical "hard hitting words hit snares" flow. Your a real syllable rapper.
I didn't mean more of my online tracks..some of those tracks are months old...the majority of my album has been recorded in the past 2 months...
yea I do usually just write to snares during my verses..but I also write to the melodies..i switch up many flows tho...lately I've started spitting faster than usual...if my net wasn't so fucking gay I'd upload some of my other tracks that I'm proud of but most of them are like in the 5 minute range and it takes forever to upload...
neway I appreciate the crit..
btw...when I said commercial fans, I don't mean it like it sounds...I meant fans of commercial music....I'm planning on selling this album, and most people in my local area listen to dirty south hiphop...my last cd (more like a mixtape with an album cover) didn't sell shit b/c it was completely underground style...not many hard beats, just focused on my lyrics (which were written with a strange flow but they DID flow)...I didn't sell shit..lol I don't care how "fake" it sounds..rappers make albums to make money...unless they already have money...+ my lyrics are real on most tracks..just this time I did something for other hiphop fans...
neway enough of defending myself lmao...
Lol word. Just do you homie. Respect.
this was bad. Dont be scared to
ride the beat. Sounds like you're
holding back or something. Let go.
Yeah, the beggining was a lil distorted. Couldn't hear what you said. I like the beat. Sounds like some old school shit. Flow is basic, but you're riding the beat. I like the chorus, dont know why :-/. Lol. This was ok. Keep doin it, homie.
Please return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=123004
to murdera...I rode the beat...iono about holding back..some of ya'll complained that I used too much emotion..then some say I didn't have enough...can't please everyone obviously lol..
yea I hate the intro more and mroe every time I hear it...I think it was a good idea tho..even tho Tech N9ne did it better...neway...thanx for the crit
peace