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Said I wasn't going to but im keystylin' I have no time.
When I post on this site u stay underground like a ninja turtle
U wana fight? u the type that couldn't injure urkel
Before I met metaphors and I physically met the metaphysical
I knew being' the pinnacle I'd spar with pitiful lyricals
So here we go on a key lyrically eatin by a shark
And like an African's heart I'll have u beaten in the Dark
Retreatin' from these darts. It’s only an illusion ur eludin'
With a Loss 'hangin over ya head' ur quick to 'jump to ur conclusion'
The rhyme infusion. who's winnin? we'll need multiple choice precision
1. God
2. God
Day um that's a tough decision
Split incisions. lyrical circumcision thru certain divisions
Beat me? This guy is PUSSY... what is he KITTEN? (kidding)
Good riddance to good writtens. personals? only if u could
Ya must be a THUG cuz ya skill level is always up to NO GOOD
Im relievin a drought seizin the 'bouts' and ceasin the doubts
Make like the WWE and get the F out
uppin for ur verse G/L
He knew no-one reads his threads b/c they equate sheer stupidity...
...So he begged me for a match over AIM, wanting to get merked infinitely!
This herb can't spell his own name right, let alone drop with skill....
Verses more confusing than the Matrix-stranger structure than a duck bill!
You posted three seperate joke threads, each less funny than political prattle..
Until people BEGGED you to stop.....umm...ain't that like your battles?*
This idiot loses battles with more velocity than physics class...
I mean..just look at his AV for description of his rhymes...they ass...
The only CREAM this kid will ever earn is from eating Joe Louies...
..He couldn't avoid my cold flow if he ODed on Vitamin C..
Says he's been in the game since '98, yet hasn't elevated since the start..**
..Face it kid, yo rhymes are so obscure..you give voters a navigational chart!
He's a 'Lil Kim stalker..doesn't realize he don't have a chance..***
This battle is already over..can a mod give me a win in advance?
Well...I guess i'll stop the slaughter..let you recoop your losses..
Because your punches hit their target less than Jr. QB tosses..
*http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121556
**http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121509
***http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120984
uppin for the first time
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id say god on this came with better (P&P)........
other cat had whack ass punches decent personals
but it was close id say god wins do to that consistancy
cuz overall it was god 7/10 and Maca 6/10 see close
and flow on both needs work cuz structure was off
so work on that and think of something no 1 else has said
like come creative and come witty aight and also
i think god had a few good quotables as for Maca had none
overall close shit like i said but vote god for coming harder
vote/god............................................... ........
iight uppin for moe votes
Tough battle to decide...
Both utilized wordplay, both tried going personal.
Both hit fairly decent.
Nothing amazing or really quotable from either side...
Just good jabbing back and forth.
Godfather's structure and flow probably hit a touch nicer due to lines not being as stretched.
God takes the opener, Mac only half punched.
Mac takes the closer, that wasn't a punch, God, those were multi's.
I think Mac mighta had the better overall verse, but he weighed it down with so much filler and extended lines.
God had less wit, but carried his rhyme better, it flowed more, and the punches were short and compact compared to Mac.
Very close, but by a hair...
Godfather
uppin
This battle was close i thought...
I thought God was better though...Punches were a lot funnier and flow was pretty much on point...
Nothin really stood out from this battle...The reason Im goin with God on the is because Mac, you had a couple of lines that seemed as if you piled a bunch a words to rhyme but didnt make any sense...For example:
^^I mean cmon...made no sense...^^Quote:
This herb can't spell his own name right, let alone drop with skill....
Verses more confusing than the Matrix-stranger structure than a duck bill!
^^Wasnt feeling that either...^^Quote:
The only CREAM this kid will ever earn is from eating Joe Louies...
..He couldn't avoid my cold flow if he ODed on Vitamin C..
Pretty good battle both of you...
Oops sorry forgot to vote..............
Vote/God............................................... .......................
^A duck bill's structure is curvy, and thus is not straight. And it is strange for an animal.
And how could you not understand the Vitamin C line...you take Vitamin C to build immunities against the cold.
ok i have a different oppinion...
i thought that godfather came extremely played and his verse made absolutely no sense to me...it was stretched and it was just hard to read.....i wasnt feeling it at all.....you have to come more personal with your verses..flow was good ..also structure was good
macabre.....had a better verse...you have to keep elevating and gettin better with your verses. It was ok and it was better than godfathers but just get more personal. Flow was good and the structure was ok..........keep gettin better....you have potential
v/macabre
upping this shit.....................................
yo this was a good battle i must say...betta den alot of da shit battles goin on......both peeps have good multis adn shit....this is a decent battle peeps....now who should i vote for is tha question..ima go wit god cuz i like all he said...kept it up peeps
vote:god
UP! Drop a link and I will return the favour.....
^^^gonna say those r ur two best lines.......had wordplay, a decent punch.......but yo.....dont put ' ' around ya words......thats newbish......overall ur verse was pretty good.......structure was good.....flow was pretty good......had some metas.....wordplay was pretty nice.......some of the punches connected.......ok personals......Quote:
Originally Posted by Godfather(2)
^^^im gonna say those were ur two best lines........had a pretty good personal......overall ur verse was pretty good as well......the structure was ok.....some of the lines were kinda stretched.......flow fell off a lil......there were some metas.....wordplay was decent......most of ya punches connected.......personals were pretty good.....Quote:
Originally Posted by Macabre
conclusion - this was a close battle......pretty nice shit from both cats.......godfather had a better structure (though that is not biasing my vote at all) and flow........he also had a few more metas........wordplay was about the same from both cats.......i thought macabres punches and personals hit harder........so overall ima say macabre took the more important categories needed to win a battle, so im givin him this vote......good shit by both cats though.....
VOTE - MACABRE
uppin on this
uppin for votes
uppin for votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...532#post1293532
hit dis upp dawgs and ill come and vote fairly....
Dont do this again, this is your only warning.-ILLunatic
fuck it i will vote before i go bed.....
hard battle to chose from but anywayz.. both of you came decent with good flows and structure even in them 2 pieces.. punches were hard hittin by both of you again but i think God had a few harder hittin punches.. personals were good aswell it was good how you both brought them in your verse..
\/0te..God
hit this up plz.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...532#post1293532
uppin for votes i will hit ur battle up when i get to school
uppin on this battle
Godfather.. do not post a link to your battle in other battles without voting. And don't post until both verses are dropped in those battles. Next time I'm going to DQ you.
flow/ I thought that God had a nice flow going on with sum nice rhymes and a gud wordplay, Ialso did Macabre but it made more sense with god
punchlines: They both had sum gud punchlines but God did betta cuz his punches just came harder and Macabre's were sumtimes played so.....
personals: I didn't saw so much personals but God tried to post sum while Macabre didn't
structure: They both had a gud structure, nothin special but ok
I think you both need to work on more personals cuz that is how you can win a battle
v/Godfather..............