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house rules
check in
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dont no show
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10 lines
blind
house rules
check in
1 hour to post
dont no show
sup man.. checkin in..
verse up within an hour
my bad dogg i was away from my comp
im checking in now so my time starts now
so its fair cuz you started already not me
I ain't wack but I think the ÷Thìñg÷ is though
Is that your raps don't seem to bring in votes
So why would you even post " don't no show "
like an astronomer my punches have you seein stars
Stick a needle filled with diesel right in our arms
Now you're fuel injected like most newer cars
All your raps get closed or seem to quickly vanish
couldn't beat my verse even if I typed it in Spanish
What happened? Before I posted you were tough
Fuck an hour to drop... I roasted ÷Thìñg÷ enough.
sorry last line was supposed to be
Fuck an hour to drop... I roasted this ÷Thìñg÷ enough.
spelled ya name'Tactixx',tha fact is thats worst than tha name'laxsative!'
comparative? yes ya tactics inbrace ya'runs',squirted them like'inpairatives'
all the matches were inaquivicly & lyricly fucked!,u suck go fuck a duck!
ya stuck physicly & mentally,assentialy no luck,ya a baby buck so sunk!
ya open mic'clash of conscience'is ya epitome of 2 different personalaties
1 that is heavaly into homosexuality the other into werewolf beastialities
like mortal combat this is a flawless victory,ya fatality owned like history
this is a conspiracy,how were u allowed n RB,ya spice & punch like hickory
Tactixx please pm'The End' & have yurself banned,ya a women & not a man!
give u a'hand',right threw ya face out ya head,ya presents i cant stand
good job....uppin....
Ok. Pretty close actually...
Tactixx - Your verse, to me, was overall pretty general. Nothing to spectacular..you rambled on about fuel injecting and cars and shit..what was the point? I took that as filler..punches were ok, definitely have seen you spit much harder..
Thing - the 'thing' that caught my eye right away was your vocab use..nicely done in that category..but you lacked direct personals, except for maybe the beginning line...everything else were regular punches that were general at best..no hate intended here..structure and flow were fine, you just lacked the personals, which isnt like you......
However, as close as this battle was, I have to sway my vote to Thing, simply because he came a little harder, and his verse wasnt so bland..
Vote / Thing
I'll poll vote once you peeps hit up my battle in sig ... too many sleepers..
Peace.
Wtf.....General...basic.....suck a duck...comeon!!??
I agree, that was basic/general...thats only one line..pm me if u have questions..dont want to ruin this thread :thumbup:Quote:
Originally Posted by Tactixx
Tact u came a little too weak for me u had a short and sheet verse kinda like you was battling a baby or something work on ur wordplay and punches try using moe personals some times that will get u out of trouble
Thing I flt you came a little bit stronger in this battle u had some played punches but ome was iight also and ur personals was eeee no work on them ok.
My vote for thing
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121560
Mleh.......uppin
Uppin#2...
post an honest vote and I'll return the favor....
leave a link....peace
Uppin...I wanna battle again later.....
post an honest vote and leave a link....
kinda close battle but i think thing takes this...
Tactixx - your verse was waayyyy too basic and played.... Try to add some creativity into your work, make your verse a little more interesting to read, maybe put in some good multies or something... seen better from you tactixx.... needs work.
Thing - nice verse flowed nicely had good structure... Vocab and wordplay wehre excellent... Your punches where connecting but there just wasent the personals to back em up... nice verse
Conclusion - Kinda close battle but thing takes this... Better punches an vocab....
Vote - Thing
Return the favour... Drop an honest vote in this battle
it was an okay battle
verse from thing:
I ain't wack but I think the ÷Thìñg÷ is though
Is that your raps don't seem to bring in votes
So why would you even post " don't no show "
like an astronomer my punches have you seein stars
Stick a needle filled with diesel right in our arms
Now you're fuel injected like most newer cars
All your raps get closed or seem to quickly vanish
couldn't beat my verse even if I typed it in Spanish
What happened? Before I posted you were tough
Fuck an hour to drop... I roasted ÷Thìñg÷ enough.
pretty descent
7/10
verse from thing:
spelled ya name'Tactixx',tha fact is thats worst than tha name'laxsative!'
comparative? yes ya tactics inbrace ya'runs',squirted them like'inpairatives'
all the matches were inaquivicly & lyricly fucked!,u suck go fuck a duck!
ya stuck physicly & mentally,assentialy no luck,ya a baby buck so sunk!
ya open mic'clash of conscience'is ya epitome of 2 different personalaties
1 that is heavaly into homosexuality the other into werewolf beastialities
like mortal combat this is a flawless victory,ya fatality owned like history
this is a conspiracy,how were u allowed n RB,ya spice & punch like hickory
Tactixx please pm'The End' & have yurself banned,ya a women & not a man!
give u a'hand',right threw ya face out ya head,ya presents i cant stand
nice.....ur lines were strected
8/10
breakdown:
flow:thing
multies:thing
punchlines:tie
opener:none
structure:thing
closer:thing
v/ thing
ill drop my poll vote when u vote on my battle in lust vs havok in my sig
Close battle...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Tactixx
Thing was more consisiant with wordplay, vocab, flow, and some better punches.Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
Tactixx coulda done alot better, but as of now.. i say Thing got this won.. so imma vote for Thing, just because he was consistant with wordplay, flow, vocab, and decent punches.. even though some were played at some points..
V/Thing
lol its 5-0 me some1 close this and poll that vote from mac
lmao uppin 2 close this drop yur link ill hit it up soon enough
uppin 3 som 1 close this been sleeping drop ya link
tact- yah verse made it luk like u wer new n it was jusat a practice that u had a few minits to get it down, it was basic and it didnt have n e reel gud punches...
thing- yah part was betta that tact's but this alos seemed to be a quick practice, but ur punches wer betta than tact's were and urs flowed out a lil betta too
no hate in tended on either
vote~thing
TooDLeS
....bless
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
uppin............................................. ..............................
LMAO
uppin 4 come on this was closed already leave a link i will hit it ASAP
my last up man hurry up and close this some 1 please lmao
I ain't wack but I think the ÷Thìñg÷ is though
Is that your raps don't seem to bring in votes
wak....
So why would you even post " don't no show "
like an astronomer my punches have you seein stars
Stick a needle filled with diesel right in our arms
Now you're fuel injected like most newer cars
ur rhyme schemes wak...work on it
All your raps get closed or seem to quickly vanish
couldn't beat my verse even if I typed it in Spanish
wak...
What happened? Before I posted you were tough
Fuck an hour to drop... I roasted ÷Thìñg÷ enough.
ok....bad closer...overall- wakverse
2/10
spelled ya name'Tactixx',tha fact is thats worst than tha name'laxsative!'
comparative? yes ya tactics inbrace ya'runs',squirted them like'inpairatives'
fuk u and ur vocabulary....lmao...**goes to dictionary.com**..ok...
all the matches were inaquivicly & lyricly fucked!,u suck go fuck a duck!
ya stuck physicly & mentally,assentialy no luck,ya a baby buck so sunk!
lmfaoooo...im laughin cuz it corny...lol.....ah..had me rollin...
ya open mic'clash of conscience'is ya epitome of 2 different personalaties
1 that is heavaly into homosexuality the other into werewolf beastialities
wak....
like mortal combat this is a flawless victory,ya fatality owned like history
this is a conspiracy,how were u allowed n RB,ya spice & punch like hickory
lol...ok...weak...
Tactixx please pm'The End' & have yurself banned,ya a women & not a man!
give u a'hand',right threw ya face out ya head,ya presents i cant stand
ok...ok closer....better than his
overall- ok verse...average..
toal-5/10
u take this easily...this waz one of ur weak battles.......
vote- thing...
Close battle homeys!
Tactixx you had a pretty good verse with some decent structure. Your flow was good for the most part but kinda rocky in some areas. Punches were good! Personals weren't really there man. That's almost like a battling essential too! Delivery was ok. Concepts were pretty good! You were real creative and original man! Heres your star line . . .
Stick a needle filled with diesel right in our arms
Now you're fuel injected like most newer cars
^^ good stuff and fucking unique man! props on that 1
Thing you had a really good verse aswell. You had wicked vocabulary! Blew away your competitor in that area. Structure was good, along with flow. Seemed kinda stretched at times but wouldn't take much editing at all to fix it. You blew him outtah the water with that opening personal. Punches were comin' on pretty strong too! Star line was definately your opener. . . .
spelled ya name'Tactixx',tha fact is thats worst than tha name'laxsative!'
comparative? yes ya tactics inbrace ya'runs',squirted them like'inpairatives'
good stuff! lil sketchy at times but overall pretty funny/creative
Hard 1 to choose but im voting thing for his killer opener and great originality
\/ote Thing