Aight
like we agreed we shall do this quick
am in college got like 12 min of free time.
so hurry.
10 lines max no less no more.
old rulez apply.
Goodluck
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Aight
like we agreed we shall do this quick
am in college got like 12 min of free time.
so hurry.
10 lines max no less no more.
old rulez apply.
Goodluck
Close this battle Mods.
TAKING TO DAMN LONG!!!
yo kid chill i didnt even know that you had this set up....i told you to hit me up on aim if you wanted to battle....but yeah fuck it i will spit mi shit and then you whenever....check in
iight startin off easy and continuing mi pace....
Throw my Hand in ur Stomach and Rumage, rip out ur Heart, Don't worry ur Body's Numbin/
Castrate u Show da Women, u like a Old Marry Couple in Bed, u Long Time Cummin/
I'm so Elevated i'm Levitiating, Tower Over u Supreme, da only Coke u've ever Pushed Drops Out of a Machine/
Ur rhymes Nursery, my Words be Melting This Nigga like Hersey/
Put Bullets on ur Chest, Like u Rockin da Jersey/(get it?)
0 loses and No Wins, I don't even know where to Begin, i'll Get Simplistic then Realalistic, Throw ur Corpse in a Trunk/
cuz all my Mac do is Clap like Tracy b4 he could Dunk/ (too complicated fo u)
This shit u Already Lost, u Soft, I'll Take a Shot at ur Eyes and Turn out ur Site, ur Life's over cuz u think ur Computers Off/(Tricky Wordplay)
I don't need to attack ur Life and be that Versa-Till/
Why get Specific?, everything i Say U Take Personal/
kid since you aint spit i will give you until wednesday to spit or your gonna get d'qued
La La La....blah!! This Will be an easy prey...He using "(Tricky Wordplay") so they could get it..lol
..Bitch I'm devastating.......I blow more people away then detonations..Quote:
Originally Posted by flash
..If practice of defeatin people is what u need, then i'll use u as a demonstration..
..Soco kid I strike you with savage blows to ya brain, and you already losin it..
..Faggot had to eat his own verses, before he knew he had a verse full of shit..
..I scorch ya corpse in flames my heat is to much for homo like you to handle..
...Hop off dicks, This Flash fag blows my dick yearly like birthday candles...
...I just don't have to worry..I've been had ur lives folded in my hand...
..Damn stop asking why cats don't like u,ur whack! whats so hard to understand..
..I'm laughin now, putting (Tricky Wordplay) never knew someone could be so whack...
..C'mon battlin me is like a train on broken railroads, Cuz am sendin u off track..
Ciao.
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UppUn
# 2
C'mon How Hard Is to Vote??? Drop Link i will return fav as ussual.
damn....this was one sided as fuck......
eyeronik had a way better structure......flash lines were stretched as hell.....eyeroniks flow was on target......flashs fell off, mostly due to the wack structure.......they both had metas, but eyeronik had more, and his were more effective.......when u said tricky wordplay after that line.....it wasnt wordplay.......if i read it right it was just a wack and played punch......whateva....eyeronik had wordplay......eyeroniks punches connected....flashs were played and/or wack......they both had personals......but eyeroniks were way more witty and creative......
overall eyeronik ripped this kid a new asshole......just mercesslessly merked him......simple as that.....
VOTE - EYERONIK
UppUN # 3
This battle was aighht, but...
flash: Ur verse was pretty decent. I liked some of the stuff you said, but you had way too many fillers and too little strong personals. And ur flow was kinda fucked up. Keep elevatin'.
Eyeronik: Not ur best verse, but it was okay. Good personals, nice flow, work on your structure. I liked your creativity a lot as well, dawg. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Eyeronik
*Vote on the battles in my sig and I'll return the favor later.*
UppUn #4
Break fuckin Down...
Flash-came wack as fuck....need elevatin in all aspects of battlin.....just work at it is all i can tell u.....lame ass verse...
Eye-came decent not ur best...merked the kid and didnt really come hard at all...so easy win for u.... ALOT better flow, wordplay, multies, punches...everything...pretty dope kat..
...Conclusion...
Flow-Eye
Multies-Eye
Punches-Eye
Wordplay-Eye
Vote/ Eye....just merked the kid...
UppuN# 5 END THIS BATTLE!!
ok my vote-eyeronik
reason:
eyeronik- u showed this kat who was better and who was gonna win. Everything was god in ya verse pretty much, like ya vocab, wordplay, structure, punches, metas, and personals. U had this mayne.
Flash- ya verse was aight. Try to narrow down some of ya lines. Like i say to everyone who has stretched verse, some lines are good strecth but not all. Ya verse was pretty much good and all the other categories, but not better than eyeronik's.....aight.
vote-eyeronik
But good effort, and good batte to botch
i took the time to hit yalls battle up, now hit mine up, its not a special battle, there was no reason to come hard at all, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...06#post1304806
Thnx 1 more.............................................. ...............its over.
Yo i have to go wit eye
eye You had better punches they was really hitting there and ur personals was nice i think u could put more in there but they were good and ur meta4s was good i liked the wordplay and i sau nice verse 14/20
Flash I say ummmm ELEVATE cuz thats what is need here ur punches was played too me and ur personals well u need better ones and u need more and ur meta4s can be better and ur structure could be better also
but this was an easy voted
Eye
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122787