Lyric & Diverged versus Flash & Ace of Aces

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I.J.L. whoring Flash wat you mean "Fucka Crew"?
the only reason for that talk...
... every crew said "Fucka You"!
never heard of a bitch who can Freestyle on text
ya fingers flex ima leave ya battered thru the comp...
...like It was wrecked
The Constantly swinging of the fist is getting irratating
you miss every time...going and goin...
...chances of hitting still fading
ima Drop this ace like as if i had a royal flush
Dick riding vets...
...U can call it Loyal Rush
breakin you down ace.. like ripping the A of spades
this kid is really dope..
..yep played and D/R was laced

Ace and Flash on a Tag team, it seems like whackness has finally been cloned
Cause you don’t wanna remember…
These fuckin Flash backs yeah ya owned
I mean they form to make a herbish duo, combine to make this a newbish duel
Cause with the talent they bring…
…they failin class ics like public schools
Ace couldn’t brace himself for whackness, didn’t wanna except this battle
But Flash flashed him in Bitchslapped…
…And Ace succumbed to his gay senses!
This battles far from close, Whens RB startinf the “Save Whack Emcees Fund”?
Cause Ace mooned and Flashed shit…
…But then ended up gettin straight sonned!
Seriously this battle aint fair, I mean with you guys dropping played and weak rhymes
Discussed strategy over AIM…
…And came up with 20 whack lines!

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Im roasting these two lesbians like marshmellows on charcoal
We got a price-check of zero on both of their lyrical barcodes
Sketch pictures of their verse, the results a babies colorin page
Lose the ‘lyrics’ in it and you’ll be ‘diverged’ from the shame
Erase these phases and plant another Atom-bomb on the Asian
‘Lyric’ is a ‘Joker’ considering thats the name that he gave-him
This battles stupid, there’s only half a point to seeing me spit
Flash could handle them both like monkeys handle their shit
My eyes half open, yet Im more on target then theirs combined
Got verses from them both but none of them still matched mine

shit sorry shit is so late....

For u it's Crunch Time, i'll drop First and Kill u With my PunchLines
U always Lose cuz ur Rhymes are Weak, Dick in ur Hand, U Only Cum Correct on Beat
Throw my hand in ur Chest and Rumage, rip out ur Heart and Cut It
Why am i even battlin U, This Kid's Not Ready like Baby's in Stomachs
U wanna be gettin a Deal, But ur not, u Wanna Be like me But ur Not JUst Face It, cuz i got More Agents Comin After me Then Neo in the Matrix
Leave u Slaind, Cut Off ur Skull and Shit on ur Brain, Blood Stains early in this battle, ur Bones Break from 1 Hit
If every one on this site Caught a Cold and Dialed ur Number they still Wouldn't Call u Sick
Rip out ur Eyes, my Rhmyes Blind, u can't Win this fight cuz i've seen Better Rhymes from Mc's doing Commercials for Sprite
Heard u Biting my Lyics, What u Thinkin i don't have Contacts to know u usin my rhymes on other Sites
u lose blood in the Liters, cut Off ur Feet, Sittin on a Dryer is the Only Time u've Rumbled with Heat

shit my bad it looks like alot more lines then it really is hold up....

For u it's Crunch Time, i'll drop First and Kill u With my PunchLines//
U always Lose cuz ur Rhymes are Weak, Dick in ur Hand, U Only Cum Correct on Beat//
Throw my hand in ur Chest and Rumage, rip out ur Heart and Cut It//
Why am i even battlin U, This Kid's Not Ready like Baby's in Stomachs//
T-3 wanna be gettin a Deal, But ur not, u Wanna Be like me But ur Not JUst Face It, cuz i got More Agents Comin After me Then Neo in the Matrix//
Leave u Slaind, Cut Off ur Skull and Shit on ur Brain, Blood Stains early in this battle, ur Bones Break from 1 Hit//
If every one on this site Caught a Cold and Dialed ur Number they still Wouldn't Call u Sick//
Rip out ur Eyes, my Rhmyes Blind, u can't Win this fight cuz i've seen Better Rhymes from Mc's doing Commercials for Sprite//
Heard u Biting my Lyics, What u Thinkin i don't have Contacts to know u usin my rhymes on other Sites//
u lose blood in the Liters, Cut Off ur Feet, Sittin on a Dryer is the Only Time u've Rumbled with Heat//

mi shit is fucked but its not that bad for a 6minute do up

well firstthing id say is you ALL need to come with more wit... i saw some personmals, but the whole verse should be personal,, otherwise peeps are gonna look and think 'prewrite'....
...anyways...
diverged... your verse needs definate work on connecting with punches, it flowed ok... but didnt hit... the royal fluch line was your best, but still,
lyric this ws slightly better... but still not up to scratch as far as punching is concerned... you had it more personal, but your wording could be better... work on it....
Ace... your verse had better wordplay... seemed a bit better constructed... more personal too...
flash... you also had some wordplay in there, but id didnt add to your punches... all of you need to connect more, thats whats battling is about... hitting hard.... but..
...all in all i gotta go with flash and Ace on this one.... brought it together better.... ace did the best outta the four.. so vote=ace/flash
..you all need to elevate tho

this battle wasn't that good..
ace had the best verse of all four of them, i don't know what that other kid was doing posting his verse like two times, just edit it man lol...

Lyric and Div were preety whack in my opinion, the flow was choppy with realy weak punches...

overall ace killed these kats..

V-Ace..

Peace
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lol you cant edit in the front lines...

Lyric - you need to work on your structure otherwise your verse was great had good punches flow ect...

Diverged - wasent really feeling your verse that much pretty much all of it was whack your flow was choppy your punches didint land that hard ect...

Ace - You won this your verse had beautifull structure flowed nicely.... you had some hard landing punches, all around i was feeling your verse alot more than the other 3's verses

Flash - You came harder than diverged... but still your verse needs some work on the basics, start with structure

conclusion - ace takes this one for him and flash Nice battle i alwasy enjoy tag teams.

vote - Ace + flash

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diverged- ok....not that interesting.....notin exciting or rare....u got 2 put more creativity in2 ur shyt......other than alllll that....itz ok....
lyric- i felt ya shyt.......mad nice...but diverge lost it 4 u.......no hate on that....
flash- titee ass shyt man....feelin every bit of it...good shyt...but ya structure waz fuked up......work on that....but u really took this one....
ace- u couldve handled this battle all on ur own.....good shyt....no probs wit anytin...nice verse....overall nice punches......g shit....
vote- flash/ ace.....
ok battle...average......
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............. uppin

This was an alright battle, I don't think Lyric and Diverged tried as much of they could of...I've seen some better from both, but they were still alright, I'm not a huge fan of that type of structure but the punches were there, Lyric you had some good punches and personals same with Diverged wordplay coulda been better

Flash..Decent verse...not great a couple of good punches, little to no personals and the flow was off at times, structure was a little wacky, lucky you had an Ace up your sleeve. Ace..Nice verse..your opener was crazy, the wordplay and vocab, both nice, more personals and punches...structure made it an easy well-flowing read...props..nice job...Though I'm sure both Lyric and Diverged will come alot harder next time..

v-Ace and Flash..
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^thanx peepz. i'll hit those battles up a.s.a.p.

i got a question tho. do both me and Flash get this win on our rec, or just Flash?

lyric ace and diverged all came quite hard...
ace the best of the lot
flash u had bad structure and no punches blah blah.
flow:lyric
structure:ace
punches:ace
all done pretty well except flash
(i didnt feel yours at all, elevate and cut lines a bit)
my order
ace
diverged
lyric
flash
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if it wasnt 4 flash it would have been a real hard merking
but since ace was so tight
v/ ace of aces-flash

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^thanx man......................
uppin this...........

^to the top again. blah.

i guess i'll take this for the pride