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Checkin In..
I'll drop when i got time.
It will be tonight dont worry
oops...checkin in.....ima drop now. Good luck bra.
I wanna show Ill's first words....
Illunitic is gay, and is getting his share of bullets today!Quote:
Originally Posted by Illunatic
Muhahahahhaa...
Here ya go...
Its a shame Illunitic, how you accept the challenge from .44...
this aint a topical...i meen, have you ever battled before?
And about you bein a mod, guess dickridin can get u that position...
so ima cut off Ends dick, to the doctor for his sercomcision!
To the Loony bin little man, where most Lunatics usualy reside...
so for the rest of his lif...existance...he'll be spendin it inside!
Heres a knife for your death, wait, thats not up to regal...
here....you can just shoot yourself with my desert eagle...
And werent ya listnin? I said i wasnt wack so watcha think now?
didn the *cock-back-coplow* from the deagle open up your ear conal?
So do you see what happens when egos flair from redneck Lonnys?
see what happens when u give computers to rednecks in the boonies?
Blah, Keyed
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Yaa-Boi..? how bout we take some more Friday quotes
Vote on these please:.......
...D/R yourself, thats the only way you'll get higher votes
Skill.. this kid can't even touch, he's reachin for nothin
He's so unknown and even after he speaks....
...............people dont even ask if ya just heard somethin
Look at his sig, you see a pistol.. He must think he's Gangsta
Fucka 50 Cent....
...................This kid shows us the true meanin of a wanksta
He Join'd 2-16-04 and already has over 500 post.. DAMN
Ever heard of a life?......
.........its sad if he knows the internet more than his own fam
Thats it.. i quit, my opponet is shit, no need for me to finish
He's so weak....
..............even pop eye the sailor man gave up his spinich
overall i good battle
lots of personal's really liked both ...
both of u mad me laugh
line from illunatic:
Yaa-Boi..? how bout we take some more Friday quotes
Vote on these please:.......
...D/R yourself, thats the only way you'll get higher votes
Skill.. this kid can't even touch, he's reachin for nothin
He's so unknown and even after he speaks....
...............people dont even ask if ya just heard somethin
Look at his sig, you see a pistol.. He must think he's Gangsta
Fucka 50 Cent....
...................This kid shows us the true meanin of a wanksta
He Join'd 2-16-04 and already has over 500 post.. DAMN
Ever heard of a life?......
.........its sad if he knows the internet more than his own fam
Thats it.. i quit, my opponet is shit, no need for me to finish
He's so weak....
..............even pop eye the sailor man gave up his spinich
blahh had its funny moments
rate : 8/10
yaai boi :
Its a shame Illunitic, how you accept the challenge from .44...
this aint a topical...i meen, have you ever battled before?
And about you bein a mod, guess dickridin can get u that position...
so ima cut off Ends dick, to the doctor for his sercomcision!
To the Loony bin little man, where most Lunatics usualy reside...
so for the rest of his lif...existance...he'll be spendin it inside!
Heres a knife for your death, wait, thats not up to regal...
here....you can just shoot yourself with my desert eagle...
And werent ya listnin? I said i wasnt wack so watcha think now?
didn the *cock-back-coplow* from the deagle open up your ear conal?
So do you see what happens when egos flair from redneck Lonnys?
see what happens when u give computers to rednecks in the boonies?
^^blah seen u do better
rating 7.5/10
breakdown:
opener:ill
flow:ill
multies:none
punchlines:il
personals:ill,lol the need alife killed yaa boi
closer:ill, it was alittle wack
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......vote goes to illunatic
had better flow....better punchlines...and better personals
yaa boii ....good battle overall need to elevate........
overall vote goes to .,// illunatic
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn#1
Yo this was a god battle
44- i thought you had this battle in the bag wit your punches and personals but ur structure was fucked and some of your punchlines were blah i say work on ur sructure it u had better structure i say u would of one well not just structure punches to but anyway elevate
Ill - that was an funny ass verse and it was ill at the same time i was felling ur punchlines and personnals damn like this one
He Join'd 2-16-04 and already has over 500 post.. DAMN
Ever heard of a life?......
o there more but thats all for now his bar took the whole battle
my vote goes to - Illunatic
return the favor
UPPIN#1
Drop links we'll vote
This battle was good, but...
.44: Ur verse was aight. I liked ur metas, but you followed too much with that gun line. But you had a pretty aight verse. Your flow was okay. Basically, you just need to come harder and more consistent. Keep elevatin'.
ILLunatic: Your verse was kinda weak, at ur usual standards. But it was okay. Ur's had more humor, but you gotta come with better punches. But everything else was pretty strong.... Except structure. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: ILLunatic
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=120871&page=2
hit that up plz.................
Its a shame Illunitic, how you accept the challenge from .44...
this aint a topical...i meen, have you ever battled before?
good opener cud of hit harder
And about you bein a mod, guess dickridin can get u that position...
so ima cut off Ends dick, to the doctor for his sercomcision!
great line impressed me....CIRCUMSISION*think*
To the Loony bin little man, where most Lunatics usualy reside...
so for the rest of his lif...existance...he'll be spendin it inside!
good 1st line,2nd line was very ehh..
Heres a knife for your death, wait, thats not up to regal...
here....you can just shoot yourself with my desert eagle...
shit 1st line 2nd line was used well
And werent ya listnin? I said i wasnt wack so watcha think now?
didn the *cock-back-coplow* from the deagle open up your ear conal?
blah hated this bar
So do you see what happens when egos flair from redneck Lonnys?
see what happens when u give computers to rednecks in the boonies?
good finish was a nice personal....
7/10
Yaa-Boi..? how bout we take some more Friday quotes
Vote on these please:.......
...D/R yourself, thats the only way you'll get higher votes
good hard punch,liked it
Skill.. this kid can't even touch, he's reachin for nothin
He's so unknown and even after he speaks....
...............people dont even ask if ya just heard somethin
best line of the battle, i was very impressed
Look at his sig, you see a pistol.. He must think he's Gangsta
Fucka 50 Cent....
...................This kid shows us the true meanin of a wanksta
50cent is played out, you shud no
He Join'd 2-16-04 and already has over 500 post.. DAMN
Ever heard of a life?......
.........its sad if he knows the internet more than his own fam
it was agood punch can deny*ihave 1200ish in a month :cussing:*
Thats it.. i quit, my opponet is shit, no need for me to finish
He's so weak....
..............even pop eye the sailor man gave up his spinich
good finish had a strong punch to finish him off......
8/10
\/0te ill......
plz vote on mine ILL.....
.44 cant he's in my crew.......
UPPIN#2
to get this closed.
sorri i forgot to poll my vote........
^Yes i kno that now..
This battle Was Good From both sides,
.44:
Verse was good. Nice Meta's, but you followed Alot of Gun Lines...kinda gettin played. U maintained yo flow in good paste. Flow was aight. You need to come harder on yo punches and also remain consistent but the rest was of tha heezy fo sheezy. Keep Elevating
ILL:
I havent seen you come weak at all until this battle, Other battles i peeped u was at ur usual standards. But it was okay. Yo verse had alot of comedy lines made me laugh though, This goes for you 2 man yo punches could be lil betta i seen yo other verses. Overall verse was good only structure was fucked..lol. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: ILLunatic
-Vote on my battles , links are in my sig and I'll return the favor when am online-
Ciao.
damn....i was just behind you. This was suppost to be to get into LLL jr., but of course, smoka STILL thinks I need to elevate a tad bit more............wtf. I could beat some people in LLL jr. easily, but there in.....but o well. Good battle Ill...