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I'll Spit 1st..........
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House Rules
Due Monday Midnight *GMT*
I'll Spit 1st..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120865 vote porfavor
bout to drop my verse.....
bitch change ur avatar thats mine nigga get another one ...
If you continue to use the term "nigga" you will be banned. -ILLunatic
hurry up and drop your verse cuzo.......................
sorri man i went out with my dad, just start keyin up now and iwill aswell.....
bitch if you keep spittin wack.. your shit will never prevail,
leave you lyin and screamin on the Loser’s cross.. cryin impaled,
RASCAL'S hear raisnin hell.. and givin out Hexes and curses,
you rep me in ya sig.. "the only mcee raising hell while spitting verses."/
your stood speechless.. with your hands in your pockets,
my punches leave you hurt.. like disaster's rockets,
hittin so hard.. they knock your eyes from there sockets./
in other words ineed time to feed of your verse./Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Tissle
when you answerd my call out thought you’d say.. no dnt wanna fuck with you
yes im 7mins over i was busy thinkin over the best way to get my W.../
played finisher ii was rushed...
why did you call yourself a rascal...
your rhymes are like my slaves about to put them in some shackles.
you lose when you battle different people...
i thought you was a good mc,but you will never be my equal.
and if you put a rhyme that youll surpass me...
the highest you will get is poor but classy.
your over here thinking whats right from wrong...
you think being gay is right and you putting on a thong.
your stupid, thinking your batman and putting on a cape...
and whenever you go to jail you wonder why you always get rape.
if im being to harsh, im sorry just laying it out plain and simple...
before you go you need to pop that pimple.
but you cant cuz you haven't hit puberty...
plus you cant have beef, cuz you a vegietarian like murphy lee.
sorry if i went first..............................
any votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!
uppin for votes..........
leave a link ill return the favour.......
uppin for votes cuzossssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
Big Tissle You Have Used Three Of Your Five Permitted Upps dontpost In Here (upp The Battle)more Than Twice Now. If You Do You Will Be Dq'ed From This Battle
Pz
I find this funny, do to the fact you dont have authority to say that.. but atleast you warning them.. Lol :thumbup: -ILLunatic
^^^i guess those r prolly ur 2 best lines......have a meta......punch didnt hit that hard......overall ur verse was decent......had a good structure.......flow was pretty good.....there were some metas......wordplay was ok......some of ya punches connected a lil, some were just wack.......ok personals.....Quote:
Originally Posted by RASCAL
^^^uhh i guess u could classify those as ur two best lines.....had a played as hell punch that was weak.....overall ur verse wasnt that good......structure sucked.....flow fell off........no metas.......attempted wordplay, but came out wack.......the punches u had were played and didnt connect.....no personals....Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Tissle
conclusion - rascal takes this in a landslide......rascal came with a better structure (though that does not bias my vote)......is flow was way better.....rascal at least had metas and wordplay.......some of rascals punches were decent, i didnt like big tissles at all......rascal had ok personals, big tissle didnt have any.....basing off of that rascal wins this.......
VOTE - RASCAL
yo ill come back and poll my vote after at least one of u leaves an honest vote on my battle.......
dude this battle suck big time but n-e-ways
vote= rascal he came a lil bit harder
Please drop an honest vote here..thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120413
Ehh, not the greatest battle..
But an obvious outcome..
RASCAL takes this simply because he made an attempt at personals and punches. As general as some of them were, they were ok. Tissle, no hate whatsoever man, you just need to direct your punches AT him..turn them into personals....try lookin up his profile info, av, sig, SOMETHING...ya get me dogg? Just a tip. Both had aiight flow and structure, Tissle, just try an' fix your personals approach more, and maybe yur structure a lil.
Keep elevatin to both..
Vote / RASCAL
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120587
(I'll poll vote once ya peep this battle...I'm tired of voting and not gettin replies) Peace.
uppin this ya'll iwill return the favour if you leave a link....
My vote goes to Rascal Because his verse had better pUNCHES and most of all he had better personals the battle is all about the personals and i was feling ur personal rascal and ur structure needs work too
Big you sure is not a biggie smalls because i wasn't feeling your verse on the real u real need work and shit and when u battle again make sure u have you verse structure right
My vote racsal Return favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...4&page=2&pp=15
What, u a mod now?Quote:
Originally Posted by Aines
Anyway...
RASCAL: Not ur best, but it was pretty good. Had me laughin' some. I liked your personals most, good use of his sig. Punches coulda been stronger, but they were still nice. Oh, and that feed off verse line had me dyin' too. Keep elevatin'.
Big Tissle: BIG improvement. That's a real verse, man. Unfortunately, it wasn't strong enough. I liked what you had to say, and you had some okay punches and metas, but your main problem was that your verse was too basic. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: RASCAL
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*
uppin ill return the favour if you leave a link........
Rascal you came pretty decent in this battle, not your best but i think you got it. You had a lil more developed punches. Which some didnt' hit that hard, but they connected. Not every time but yea.. you kno how it goes. Your structure was also better than Big Tissle's.
Big Tissle you didn't come that dope, you had a few punches here and there, but didn't connect that well.. maybe 1 did.. but thats not enough. Your structure was fucked. Verse wasn't that great, which.. Rascal came decent. Elevate
V/Rascal