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No bitin'
no feedin'
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No bitin'
no feedin'
no d/r
i drop first
checking in................................................ ....... :thefinger
ChriZno dropin rhyme week wid punch dat is dishonaralbe to dis site,
Your lyrics are still wack even tho you bite and cant seem to sed light,
Comiting ur self to suiside lyrics wid ur onslaute week like Will Smith Track,
Your Rhyme De-railin' off track as you Choke on da mic wid ur myth wack,
Even your crew boo you off stage wid your loss punches miorrin' no mic cred,
Your punches so week they resenble imbread,ur face as turn a colour like red,
ChriZno internet record is equal to his brain density 0-0 shows his lyrical skill,
Laugh wen he srays dat hes ill,his rhyme so dumb fuck it needs biblical pill,
To make a marginal differce to a flow so pre-writen wid his fake penskillz,
ChriZno beaten more than eggs will,peeps realsie hes wack as his mic cerd revealse,
ima HIT this DIKE with bars hurlin at the CLIP of LIGHT
give up or ADMIT im TIGHT, takin a chainsaw to a battle is the only way u'd RIP DA MIC
Lyrics DASHIN from BEHIND, SMASHIN ya SIDE like destruction DERBY
swallow ya whole, but u tasteless so i SPEW this DUDE back out like KIRBY
perfectly FLAWLESS my punches land like COMETS, the way they shake ya on IMPACT
i reverse the SHIT u'll SPIT like u GAG on VOMIT while layin on ur BACK
no way to BUSTLE my ill speech, i'll even deface ya with RUSTLE
powerful bars, no way to dodge or u'll pull all of ur MUSCLES
im shovin condoms with HIV infected cum in ya mouth so u can taste SICKNESS
so cum QUICK KID...oh i forgot ur last hungry boyfriend left ya DICKLESS
uummm...not bad.....
...Lets get some votes on dis.........
uppin 2
uppin 3
uppin 4
damm no vote so far...well hexen wins
new to rb members neaver get votes we need to get to 100 posts then vote in other peoples battles then drop a link then maybe we will get some votes.Quote:
Originally Posted by lil jon
what do you mean hexen wins you didint even breakdown fool.
uppin1............................................ ..............
Not Necessarly.
HeXen.. i wasn't feeling ya verse at all.. It was hard to flow, due to your spelling errors. You had some vocab, but no really punches nor personals. You honestly need to elevate, not to hate but.. i'm being honest.
ChriZno.. you also came pretty weak, but i felt your verse was easier to flow to. And had a good punch here and there. But the punches were played. But atleast you had them. Overall..i say you got this.. but you also need to elevate extremely!
V/ChriZno
Ill i have to disagree with ur vote because both was weak and the oly thin H had wrong really was his structure but Chrizo verse was plain weak H had a few punches in there that i come feel a lil ot much personals but i say Hexen got this one.
Vote is Hexen
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1276738
uppin...leave a link and i will drop a honest vote...pz :D
Yo chriz got this one.,.
other dude didnt have enough punches,,...
not a great battle..
V=Chriz
uppin leave links and i will drop a honest vote pz out
uppin...leave links..i will drop honest vote
uppin2,,,,,,...................................... ............................... :thefinger
uppin3........................ please dont sleep on this..............
uppin4........................ letz get some votes here people
uppin5.................... last up for this one........ not many votes...
hexen- came a little soft in this one, stretched bars and wut not. structure was ok. flow was ok. work on your stuff you got potential. not a bad drop, but i still think you coulda came better.
chrizno- you came pretty good, had a little problem wit your structure but your flow and wut not was pretty good. you had sum nice punches as well as wordplay. really nice on that aspect. you came harder wit this one.
vote- Chrizno...better punches, wordplay.
peace
Mmmk...
HeXen - In all honesty, yours wasnt all that bad, however, it really lost my interest about halfway through. You need to work on creativity and harder punches. Alot of em were pretty general, except maybe the 0-0 line, although i've seen that used many times..Elevate man..
ChriZno - You need to lose the CAPS thing, at least in my opinion, and join all of your bars together..only reason I suggest that is because I've been told the same thing when I was beginning and I got structure hits for it...besides that, you had some hard punches, one that stood out was the 'dont dodge--tear muscles' line ..lol ... you just came harder, however, you lacked personals completely..really need to work on that..Not bad...
Vote / ChriZ
return the gotdam favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121560
hexsen should be dq'ed for 7 ups but ill leave a vote....
i didnt feel either verse...but chrizno had the better one....dont cap your punches...its looks very newbish......work on some things.....you had an ok verse...just elevate a lil
ok punches and use more personals floww as ok too
hexen had an ok verse but it was stretched and it was hard to read.....use more personals and get a better flow....elevate...this was weak\
you too gotta elevate but chrizno go this one
ok..
Hexen- I've seen u gotten a little better from when I last saw. That's a plus. You need to lose the spelling errors, ppl don't wanna have to figure that out. Week is actually Weak. That's important. Your flow was off a bit, could fix ur structure up.. reword ur lines and lose the spelling errors to make ur punches make sense and hit hard. These, to me.... didn't hit all that hard here.
Chriz - first. Lose the CAPS. ahhh... I really dislike that. If this was a close battle you probably would have lost my vote for it. Your punches were mad played, try to be a little more creative here. Use some personals, not just metas cuase most of them are played. Punches..... you had some. Some ok ideas.
vote - chriz