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I'll drop as soon as i see you drop.
I do got moderator work you kno.
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10 lines
You spit first
Normal Rules
I'll drop as soon as i see you drop.
I do got moderator work you kno.
Yeah i know checkin i will post in a few
Freepost Cleared.
Godfather(2) get on that name
to battle me.. not Mr.E
Your wackness offends me, Im just tellin you because I care..
..Illunatic, your way outta line!....& we all wish you stayed there..
I was gonna play fair, but Ill pays for sex..quarters for collars..
..thats just plain assanine, no wait..10?....we'll juz say 11 dollars..
Followers get son’d, overrun..heated, decieted..beatin wacks fun..
..we’ll enter the scheme of things..& see ur ryhmes still don’t have one..
Admit dun, ur a lil rusty, & ducking battles wont help u get thru..
..cuz yur running on noncompliance, & dopeness is runnin along too..
Talk ya face blue, wit battles or woman you get the cold shoulder..
..if U‘s a pimp, then V-Z prolly already hoe’d her..
Heres the truth, I beat u already..smackin me’s all but a myth..
..cuz im feelin a double L, even Cool James could agree with..
No feeding,
Please...Look.. he tries comin with a punch, but this kids juss a kick
The only way for him to get this.. is ta find riders and grow a dick
Its a mystery how i'm going to put GodFather(2) out of his misoury
Its pretty sad... This kids only chance of winning is to vote with Mr. E
Check his verse, he over exceeded the limit... I think he's a little worried
Write his whole life in a book, and it will be noiminated for short storied
He chose not to show his battle records, prolly cuz he's embarrassed
He's so weak and wack... i can't help but to feel bad for his parents
Time to finish this, Lets move to the pig in his sig.. Reminds me of piglet
This verse was all for jokes, so i'm jackin on Booka T.. can you dig it?
SUCKA!!! :laugh:
lol that was some funny shyt the booka t shyt was mad funny son
line from ill:Write his whole life in a book, and it will be noiminated for short storied
He chose not to show his battle records, prolly cuz he's embarrassed
He's so weak and wack... i can't help but to feel bad for his parents
Time to finish this, Lets move to the pig in his sig.. Reminds me of piglet
This verse was all for jokes, so i'm jackin on Booka T.. can you dig it?
SUCKA!!!
lol that was some good shyt
line from g0d:
Followers get son’d, overrun..heated, decieted..beatin wacks fun..
..we’ll enter the scheme of things..& see ur ryhmes still don’t have one..
Admit dun, ur a lil rusty, & ducking battles wont help u get thru..
..cuz yur running on noncompliance, & dopeness is runnin along too..
[b] iight verse nuttin special
breakdown:
opener:ill
flow:ill
mutlies:ill
enjoy readin:ill
closer:ill
v/ illunatic
overall had better everything
flow. multies, he had better punchlines, and he had the humour in his verse lol......so it's any easy win for illuntic good job
to god for tryin to put up a fight
ok uppin for votes
Uppin 2
Your wackness offends me, Im just tellin you because I care..
..Illunatic, your way outta line!....& we all wish you stayed there..
^ i liked the concept of this line...g2
Talk ya face blue, wit battles or woman you get the cold shoulder..
..if U‘s a pimp, then V-Z prolly already hoe’d her..
^i thought this was a mad played concept, but it was aight i suppose
Followers get son’d, overrun..heated, decieted..beatin wacks fun..
..we’ll enter the scheme of things..& see ur ryhmes still don’t have one..
^mhmm...cool
I am a tough judge or w/e, so all in all, this wasnt bad, i mean it flowed pretty good, and had a few nice lines!! on to the next guy's
Its a mystery how i'm going to put GodFather(2) out of his misoury
Its pretty sad... This kids only chance of winning is to vote with Mr. E
^this sounds over-used, but maybe its not, not a bad line, i kinda liked it
Check his verse, he over exceeded the limit... I think he's a little worried
Write his whole life in a book, and it will be noiminated for short storied
^haha, i swear...meh, this was cool
He chose not to show his battle records, prolly cuz he's embarrassed
He's so weak and wack... i can't help but to feel bad for his parents
^purty weak...
kay, this dude...illunaitc...he had an alright drop...seemed more solid...
the other dude had to make his periods even his shit out...
illunatic had a nice simple clean style, even though the othe dudes was pretty nice flowing...
im doubtin homies structure so
that goes to illunatic
flow goes to lunatic also
multies if thats a category goes to g2
punches-hmm...illunatic
ill was funny sorta, he kept it light hearted, no hate g2...
vote-illunatic
*geez how much did i wrote that dudes name*
uppin 3
vote - godfather
Punches - godfather
wordplay - godfather
vocabulary - godfather
Godfather - you had pritty nice punches, the first 4 lines was the top lines out of your whole entire verse. There were other strong points .. like the VZ one. The only thing you were lacking was good personals .. I don't think you flipped it properly.
Illunatic - ill was alright. I think people dickride enough cats with too much posts or hear that there moderators and shit. Overall, your punches and wordplay were aiight. But, your vocab was weak.
Overall - Godfather
Vote on my sig battles in return.
Your wackness offends me, Im just tellin you because I care..
..Illunatic, your way outta line!....& we all wish you stayed there..
aight first line was koo...........2nd was out of concept
y would u want ILLunatic to b outta line?............ehhh........
I was gonna play fair, but Ill pays for sex..quarters for collars..
..thats just plain assanine, no wait..10?....we'll juz say 11 dollars..
pays for quarters? & collars just dont make sense.........
'plain assanine'?......man the rest was pure whackness.....
Followers get son’d, overrun..heated, decieted..beatin wacks fun..
..we’ll enter the scheme of things..& see ur ryhmes still don’t have one..
1st line didnt make sense at the end.........beatin wacks fun?
2nd line was ok................................................ .........
Admit dun, ur a lil rusty, & ducking battles wont help u get thru..
..cuz yur running on noncompliance, & dopeness is runnin along too..
best bar so far............................................
Talk ya face blue, wit battles or woman you get the cold shoulder..
..if U‘s a pimp, then V-Z prolly already hoe’d her..
Heres the truth, I beat u already..smackin me’s all but a myth..
..cuz im feelin a double L, even Cool James could agree with..
whats 'V-Z'?..........2nd line was nonsense.............
'cool james'? lolz...........................................
overall.............7/10..............
Please...Look.. he tries comin with a punch, but this kids juss a kick
The only way for him to get this.. is ta find riders and grow a dick
kinda blah........but it made sense..........
Its a mystery how i'm going to put GodFather(2) out of his misoury
Its pretty sad... This kids only chance of winning is to vote with Mr. E
ok personal.......................................... ...
Check his verse, he over exceeded the limit... I think he's a little worried
Write his whole life in a book, and it will be noiminated for short storied
best bar so far............................lolz
He chose not to show his battle records, prolly cuz he's embarrassed
He's so weak and wack... i can't help but to feel bad for his parents
Time to finish this, Lets move to the pig in his sig.. Reminds me of piglet
This verse was all for jokes, so i'm jackin on Booka T.. can you dig it?
dont no bout that booka T thing but the rest was ok
overall............................8/10
Vote/ILLunatic.................
uppin for for votes
Uppin#1
Uppin for votes
Godfather
nice punches,
this part stood out:
Your wackness offends me, Im just tellin you because I care..
..Illunatic, your way outta line!....& we all wish you stayed there..
I was gonna play fair, but Ill pays for sex..quarters for collars..
..thats just plain assanine, no wait..10?....we'll juz say 11 dollars..
^^this was the best 4 lines in yo verse.
There were other strong points ..But dawg you Missed good personals and some played lines also but..the rest was fluent.
Illunatic
It was good, Punches were more harder
He chose not to show his battle records, prolly cuz he's embarrassed
He's so weak and wack... i can't help but to feel bad for his parents
Time to finish this, Lets move to the pig in his sig.. Reminds me of piglet
This verse was all for jokes, so i'm jackin on Booka T.. can you dig it?
^^i liked the Booker T hit
Overall verse was better so i have to go with betta multi's and punches
Overall - iLL
Links are in my Sig return favor.
Uppin#2 i think..
Lets get this over with
Was feeling both...But, I'm leaning towards Illunatic more because of his punchlines. Bascically I thought you both were cool, but Illunatic through some funny shit that I happend to like more than Godfather.
So I give Illunatic 7/10
Godfather: 5/10
Vote: Illunatic