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I will return....the favor and peep your song and give you some feedback...
Basically i send this to my producer and he makes it perfect ..and i pay...so i just wanna know how ya'll like the feel and the lyrics and flow....i know the production is pretty is pretty fucked ...THAXK to all those who took the time..
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/demuirgic.htm
Flow doesn't sound right on this.... Like it's probably that beat being so slow an empty... I ain't dogging on the topic it's pretty straight but this could have been done a little better.... GL to who ever fixes this up to sound perfect man vocals sound fuzzy.
^dun worry hes good and thank you for you opinion......
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yep plz peep i will return any feedback that i get.......good or bad.....just lemme know thanx....
the beat is nice...flow is aight...im not really into the spitting slow...then speeding up some words...it's either your fast or slow...not both....bit for the most part it was a safe song....holla...thanx for the feed on my track...
I Like The Lyrics. But The Flow Wasn't There For Me, The Voice Kept
Changing Tone, My Advice, Find A New Beat, And Record Same Lyrics.
^thanx for taking the time to peep and the opinion i'll give feedback if people need it leave links aight then......keep evalutatin
beat is simple but still aiight. flow is good, lyrics are tight. i think since its such a serious topic more emotion would help. but it's still a pretty good drop none the less.
if you wanna return the favor here's my link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120038
the beat is nice...flow is kool...im not really into the spitting slow part ...blah...need to speed up some words and verses ....it's either your fast or slow...not both....bit for the most/ part it was a safe song....liked it alot but it had it's ups and downs give it a
7/10or an 8//10
the flow i dont see as being bad? i just think it depends on if you feelin the style of flow he bringin, beyond whether his flows actually good or not.
the flow is solid, but at certain points your delivery/presence gets weak, just like on some words you sound more monotone and like your just talking, i think its just in the pronunciation of the words but it gives off that sound.. but its only at a few points, not really noticable.
your voice is cool, ya lyrics is nice, ya style i can feel id like to peep you on a more hyped up track to, good shit man, keep up.
ps: i like the tribute idea man, much respect, i like how you did the intro and the talking inbetween (if you did do that?? ionno).
aight nice thank you for all the feedback leave links guys i will return all feedback i get......pz
word uppin for even more feedback ...i'll return all feedback pretty much instantly .....if i'm on ...aight thanx pz
it could be that 9-11 was my 21st b-day and this song is just hittin me deep down in the pit of my stomach... but i have not been able to turn it off since i heard it!!!!!!
i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to hear the album
Aight I'm peepin' This is a good beat... hmm your flow is not on point...it is decent but it is nothing special. I know you said you gon get this fixed up but wow your boi must do wonders... lyrically you good some steez but that topic has been done to death by cats so this is not anything new to me. The last verse is the best on this track. I aint gon rate you cause who am I to judge other then give a opinion. Stay Up
good lyricks dont like the flow but pretty good man, i dont like that effect u got on your voice wtf is it??
ne wayz
6.5/10 cool shit
Liked the intro.... concept was done well, and I really don't think the flow was too bad, maybe a little too slow in the slower parts, but the thing for me was your voice - it sounds like you're not putting a style into it, like you're almost just talking. It's missing that punch, that core strength that would give it a moving effect... you're flowing too soft for the song. Jus step it up a bit and put a couple add-ins to the slow parts of your verse to pick it up, this will make a good song. Nice lyrics by the way
i like the intro love the subject but u droped in to your rap too
quick, beautiful lyrix nice flow on second vrese was a little off
beat, third verse bad u used the same thing twice but over all
8/10 great
hit mine up and leave fedback plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121415
i can't stand to listen to another 9/11 track yo....
you sound like your spittin through a phone reciever too... and this beat is mad empty... your flow and emotion need work, sounds like your reading.
basically this needs mad work...and on the 3rd verse.. i question if you even wrote these lyrics to this beat.
^harsh but thanx man i work with what i got.........and yea i know it sounds weird...i fucked up the hard limiting on cool edit i think .........thanx for the feedback look for my next one though gonna be straight fire....
Returnin' the favor....
Yhea um I don;t know if you using Phaser effect or you eqing but you using the type of effects that cats use when they wanna sound like they on the phone...
and not to sound insisitive..cuz you might have some significatce to it..but um not really moved by the whole 9/11 thing no more.....and I mean, I feel like if you wanted to get emotional it's a whole lotta shit done happened since then to talk about..and for a topic like this it would seem that you would have a little more emotion....
Keep working on it....
^aprreciate the feed .....kind of all ready mastered though so pontless to work on...maybe i could just pretend i was singin this one over the phone to my friend..ehehe