10 - 12 lines
blind spit verses due by midnight t night
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10 - 12 lines
blind spit verses due by midnight t night
standard rules
checking in................................................ ......................
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aight, checking in
ill finish before midnight, ur offline, but i expect to see it by the due date
chrizno, this guy or girl, he or she - was born a crack addict//
not physically one or tha other- we'll subtract tha subject, and add-it//
"it's" infected thats 4 sure-wether a its a cunt-or-isnt one//
march 16th, has a daily routtine, currently on "blunt- 101" //
twenty-four-seven, three-sixty-five... your eyes are blood shot//
no job, no $- just tha company of your dank crack crop//
wens tha last time you left your fuckin mobil home//
smokin off all your memories- til one's left of 10 million chromosomes//
3/4's your day spent tokin - tha rest wasted on rap battles . com//
thers more elements to life, you'd rather pussy around like a human shlong//
you dont even sell your crack, you light it all up yourself//
you resembel a dealer, just as will ferral does a christmas elf//
that definately portrais more that just "a-dick-son"// ( addiction )
crack's so natural to your body system... you have a weekly stop at RIGHT AID for your nesecity of a drug-perscrption......// // //
Mortal step to me, you know you goin gainst an immortal
With a lot of prep you wont beat me, you make me chortle
Stomp you out with a roar, while I rip this mic until it shatters
Fuck your usless chatter, flip my pistol grip make your brains splatter
Sick free skillz progressing instill wit heat weapons
shit man people enve me im so ill I Out legacy The Legends
Slap ya face graffiti ways with massive sprays
Cuz this dudes more of a BUST than Harold miner on draft day
who are you? Tryna beat the best kid why you stressing
This Pussys not sick He's just contacted a yeast infection!
your chances decrease man slim 2 none
I Kill this son cuz like fat people before the marathon YOUR DONE
sorry its so late i just completely forgot about it last night and left home didint come back till this afternoon. I had it finished i just neaver got around to posting it.
alright lets get some votes please dont sleep on this people
nice verse...... truly, wers that voters...........
m-ortal has this one , only cus............
ya, betta verse,... no personals
but it flowed real nicely////
chrizno,, alround -- mediocre..///
vote: m-ortal
uppin for some real votes............................................. ....................
Both verses were good
Mortal: nice verse but what was with only talking about drugs??
kinda narrow and made yours seem les than it was. your closer and the chromosome one was really good i like em good wording and multis. solid verse but no real punches
7/10
Chrizno:you mized it up a bit more but your rhymes werent as good though close. I like your yeast infection rhyme, had me laughing
your closer was a good punch but rhymes kind simply with little complexity.
7.3/10
I think mortal woulda had this one if hed thrown punches but his verse flowed way better than chrizs and woulda won if it was frestyle not battle format
nice battle
vote:chriz
PLZ RETURN THE FAVOR MY VISIONARY BATTLE IS BEING SLEPT ON PLZ VOTE ON IT
thanks for the vote uppin............................................. .....
uppin3............................................ ...................................... :thumbup:
uppin4.................................... leave a link and ill drop an honest vote im almost at 100 posts
lmao-............almost dont count chriz.............
accualy it does cause ill be at 100 soon so i can vote on peoples battles and stop freeposting uppin5...
This battle was kinda weak...
There was like 2 punches thrown in the whole battle...well more punches thrown...but only like 1 or 2 decent ones...both were by ChriZno so he gets my vote
M-Ortal....get rid of the gay/sex lines...dun put spaces between ya bars....and get rid of the // at the end of ya lines...you used too much filler..your verse seemed directed at a third party and not at your opponent..keep elevating dawg
Chrizno...dun space ya bars...try to even out ya line to improve ya flow....you came a bit played...had a decenmt punch ot 2.....cut the net gangsta line like "flip my pistol grip make your brains splatter" Its weak
Vote Chrizno...for better punches
^^^ agree here. this battle was pretty weak... ugly lines, lacklustre punches... disconnected flows.
anyway... Chrizno had better punches..or more of them.
I don't even know what Mortal was doing with the 'crack' theme. Reading that verse was as painful as watching a retarded kid write his obituary. jeez. no offense, I say this cause I'm sure you can do better.
Chrizno... you got it near the end. It took a while to get into it but the last couple punches were definately decent... and you got the vote.
vote - Chrizno
These battle was very weak...
mortal- I don't even know what u were rapping about in some spots.. it wasn't very direct at all.. I didn't know u were battling Chriz cause u said nothing personal of him.. but neither did he to you.. so no biggie, but u should try to do that.. ur punches came weak, needs to be reworded.. and also need original punches, ehh.. I guess ur only bright spot would be flow, and thats even off.. work at it some more. keep up.
Chriz- again.. maybe try to work some personals^ like I said above.. you had two decent punches at the end of ur verse.. but up until that point u were losing this because u ave way too much self-glorification which doens't win you battles around here.. need to throw more punches.. word them nice and direct.. be witty and creative.. but you got this one.
vote- chriz
i wasnt feeling mortal at all he came with fake personals and rubbish punches plus his flow wasnt there and his opener was crap and so was his closer
chriz had a nice closer and an ok opener his structure flow and punches were better than mortals and he was a bit more witty so my vote goes to criz
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