10+ lines
no biting
no crew, d/r, hate votes
verses due by tommarow night...make them good.
order is...Neno, jockyourself, Yaaa-Boi, Avalanch3
u can diss either person on other team in ur verse...g/l
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10+ lines
no biting
no crew, d/r, hate votes
verses due by tommarow night...make them good.
order is...Neno, jockyourself, Yaaa-Boi, Avalanch3
u can diss either person on other team in ur verse...g/l
holy shit, this shit is confusin... checkin in... good order
hey this is confusin am i in this battle cuz avalanch wants yaai boi and smoke
no ur in neno... and no more posting please...unless its ur check in...verses due tomarow night around 10:00 at most...good luck all
wers , avalanch3 at...... wer - ay but, idk about tha ' drop til tomoro night' bullshit.... that dont make sense
question it's 10 lines max??? rite....cuz im keyin my verse rite now
its due BY tomarow night...u must drop ur verse before then...avalanch3 will be here. this is my check in....
who tha hell is............ neno?>
do u mean NINO
ay but, if he dont show up, then dont dq my shit... it aint my fault aight.....
but im startin now
LOL, ya...shit...and its 10 or more lines... god people u makin this worse then its gotta be
could a mod PLEASE change name so that it says nino, not neno...and could a mod please delete the usless posts that were for correcting our shit? That would help a lot.
You Bitches-Be-Lipsin-His-Cock, Sick? What You Spitten-Is-Not
Kid Your Living a “Fairytale Story”Which-Listed-As-Wizard-Of-‘os’
Its Amazing Im Blazing This Daisy You Facing-The-Hottest-Of-Childs
How Can I Take You Serious When You Basically-Copyed-My-Style?
You Wont Make It,Your Topics Are Boring,The Door-Slams-&-Dropped-Sells!
Your “Too Young 2 Touch This”& “Look Up 2 Me”Like “Porn-Mags-On-Top-Shelfs”
Gonna Get Personal You Fag Your Multis are forced,I Deserve-a-ill-fight
On Invisible Mode Cause u Ugly As Fuck! Shame It Don’t Work-in-real-life
You Over dickrided by most of the site,real heads pic-the-main-picture
Before I make u feel ashamed wid ur “Head Down”like a “Addicted-brain-giver”
Hah You was fucking-insane-tones-of-complaints cause u rubbish-&-lame
When You Spit The “Jokes On You” Like Pengiun Chocolates “Stuck-2-Ur-lame”
You bitten-your-rhymes im flipping your description u a bitch-in-disguise
Put My “feces in your view”avalanch,so now im the fucking “shit-in-your-eyes”
Im class-your-bars-tired trade’ll smash the wacks & blast-with-hard-fire
T“hard 2 beat”&“sharp round the edges”like a“boiled egg trapped-in-barbed-wire”
Fellas-stop-for-the-better-hit-with-hellicopter-prepellas by my master-bars
Cause I got you “hooked”on my rhymes like the man holding in ur avatar
My Scripts’ll-hurt im ripping-herbs-while-fisting-earths-missing-wisdoms-worth
(Kids-disturbed)Oh Well Lets give jock's around of applauds cause he finished 3rd
I give dentals-to-brothers-got-metal-so-cover im to high your levels-are-under
When you wrote “horror”I guess the whole concept resembled-your-mother
Try hide it, blud your a disgrace and you’re the one whos missing-hype
I Know your disses what is the one bout metaphive or the sister line?
Your too played, let me Magnify-the-whole-truth-&-grab-a-nine-and-through-you
jock and avalanch quit now,cause ur ‘numbers up’like “hookers advertising-in-phone-booths!”
ayo im here but dont no if im gonna check in....
this aint the original setup...
neno has a few hundred more posts than me
i admit i am gonna b merked
Damn, how hard could it be,, seriously though?? Just set tha teams and post your verse.//
All this whining from Yaa-Boi- about having nino....I observe that it cudn’t be any worse//
if your planning to post some half-baked shit, don’t expect to sweep this thread?//
Look at this “BOI- ya..”, niggas on NINO’S command, “un-zipp, pullem down, and spread” //
I don’t even know if my “team-ate” is really gonna show//
im on my own... I’m my own [ teams-aid ] , tha team mvp, and tha fucking coach//
wuts this shit about?? “ verses due tomorrow night” //
nigga, if you post tomorow night, you wont have to worry bout this battle, but tomorrow nights fist fight//
switch tha channel to ESPN.. Station 28- and watch yaa-boi and” your boy” JOCK, throw down//
“ K.O.... jock came up with a LEFT- JAB , and yaa-boi fell head to ground.....//
....I JUST CAN’T BELIEVE IT, IT WAS THA FIRST SWING OF THA FIRST ROUND” //
let that be a lesson to “NINO - chacito - pito”.... see what happens when you go up against thugs weighing 280 plus pounds//
ya’ll better brace yourselves... that was just tha mutha fucking PROLOGUE //
im indefinately sentencing both of you back to first grade... and I, as your pedadgogue//
meaning, “ a school teacher. ,,, or an educator”- see your already learning something//
lesson # 1... either- a dick in tha throat, or - dick in tha ass..- you both deserve at least one thing//
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chapter one: “ a lesson on merking”
ill merk both you middle weight faggots solo, in this tag team..//
Yaa- boi, those were some impressive-marks back in tha boxing ring//
are you niggas together, - - - - - -you know... groom and bride//
Cuz boy, you sure fought hard, just to get nino on your side//
yall must be devoted if not married cus he writes tha same thing you wrote//
he broke tha same way you choked.... and since you ( nino ) were tha first to have spoke, im not sure who be the sailor( super hero) and who be tha boat ( side kick / bitch )..//
if yaa- boi rides nino, that would make more sense//
since, nino comes across as the side kick, and “YA’r- ’ boi as your bitchy past tense//
ya you heard,, I think yaa-boi and nino, be tha same type if not same person//
both too scared to show fury, not yet one time did he try curse-in//
that “rhyming-game” you call a verse, is truly un-battle-able //
you bitches is nuthin but false labor, like 3 year old- toddlers outta-control//
battle-in yall , is like baby-sitting a bunch of dictionary reading 5 year olds..//
Wont ever shut up, all I hear is big words you read 2 minutes before..an yall crying til’ my ears-dry-cold//
if there was a god, he’d send jesus back to perform ya both a lil’ miracle//
enuff of this irritable non-sense, of you and ya boi’s facts, im quoting “ clear-ya-skull”//
looks as if that boat grew to ship, cus my heavy words sink while your anchor floats//
I cant believe that you both are battle-in me, JOCKS - “ this REALITY better turn up as a BIG hoax//
ay who cares, just try avalanch3- ur in a hol differnt league
checking in...
ill drop but i cant promise anything dope
ight...guess the grand fanale going second to last...
Jockyourself...
Jockyourself I think that ur a plummer, wut a bummer to see crap run FREE
and you proved it with your own words...................
Hey man, Im just tryin to help ya out by givin back to the community,Quote:
Originally Posted by jockyourself
makin friends givs me immunity and it dont gimme dickriders ..........
..........................but it sure do get chicks to room-wit-me!
And whats that jock? You rollin wit the wack crew by da name of minor t's?
the clan-of-the-cock presents...babies! The result of sexaholic...mommies!
Shit, just lable the crowd as the plummers-bank, givin u shit not credit
and since u live in heaven, ull need cash, but you bet-it.......and lost
and you thought u came prepared, but God screwed your debit............
..............no other choices, looks like Jesus left you crossed!
Avalanch3....
Avalanch3, well, well, well. I thought u knew better than to fuck wit me?
guess not...i guess ima have to pull an OJ on ya.......................
.........................................and get outa murder free!
I rip u so happily, I've removed the organs, now its time for the bones
not just gettin you, im destroyin the home............................
.....................fuckin the queen bee, and leevin out the drones!
Cuz I only want that fine ass sister of yours, whats here name? Deniece?
tell her im sorry, but I couldnt help myself.....................
..........................I dont like pie, but this time i wanted-a-piece
And if I catch u ski'n down my mountan, ima give u 10 seconds of a chance
So I suggest u get goin, get goin fast..................................
.............................cuz its just 1, 2, 10, until its MY avalanche!
(yaaa-boi)this guy wouldn't battle till he had his mrs on his team/
me and jock gonna rip you nigga....
..............................................righ t down the seam/
you really got some problems dawg, when u cant spell your bitches name(neno)/
u put the "e" instead of "i" fuck she must b carry'in some shame/
"leevin out the drones" we dont need them to merk you/
then well leave yo alone to have a cry....
.................................................. ....and leave nino to jerk you/
÷ŃiŃo÷ you dont need your 'fancy' writing to win-a-battle/
if it wasn't for ya boi bitchin you wouldn't b in-the-battle/
im battlin the middle weights...and i just got myself 100 posts/
but when this battles over...the posts, ill get the most/
jus like jock said "you sure fought hard, just to get nino on your side"/
you did fight hard but nino also told me that you make 1 poor ride/
^^but when this battles over...the posts, ill get the most/
i was ment to say: but when this battles over...the votes, ill get the most/
can someone edit this please.......
uppin..........# 1
Damn... My eyes are hurtin'...
I vote for Yaa-Boi and ÷ŃiŃo÷ because jockyourself was talkin' bout me... LOL... Just kiddin' ya'll... Anyway...
÷ŃiŃo÷: I thought ur verse was pretty good, but it was so damn loooong... I liked your punches and structure, but it was so crammed that I wasn't really feelin' the flow. But, ill punches and metas. Work on makin' your punches more personal. Keep elevatin'.
jockyourself: I thought you came pretty good, but your shit was way too long also. I wasn't feelin' your flow either, but you had some okay personals. However, you had some pretty good concepts and all. But the beginning was wack to me cause I didn't like you talkin' all that shit about the conversation in the thread. It was wack, but you picked it up in the end. Keep elevatin'.
Yaa-Boi: I thought that your verse was good, but you didn't come hard enough. Your's wasn't that long (thank God... LOL... That joke never gets old) and I liked what you had to say. But, you can come a lot harder and with more fire, you know? Anyway, keep elevatin'.
Avalanche3: Not bad, not bad.... U don't have enough confidence, though. Just rhyme as hard and as good as you can, and nobody can really say anything that matters. As for your rhyme, you came okay, but you didn't come nearly hard enough. Pretty good punches, and your flow was just decent. Get the personals stronger, though. Stop talkin' about heavyweights and flyweights and stuff, posts are only a number. A winner's a winner. Pretty good drop. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: Yaa-Boi & ÷ŃiŃo÷
*Ranking*
1st: ÷ŃiŃo÷
2nd: jockyourself (close)
3rd: Yaa-Boi (close)
4th: Avalanche3
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later*
*I just realized, my vote is like as long as all of your verses together...LOL... maybe not that long.*
I just figured out that ÷ŃiŃo÷ is Shortay140. What's up?
aight , fair vote-- uppin.... whos willing to vote next
yea god lol.....yea its me hi wut up ...iight uppin for more 1-0 me and yaai boi favor
OKAY BUMP AND JUST TO TELL everybody nino is now
this name ÷LeThAlnJeCtIoN÷ okay dont get it twisted please
UPPIN.........some one vote on this, no more sleeping
ayo uppin....................1x bump........
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn#1
uppin this...........number 2
how many are we allowed again?
3................................ only 3..........................
this thread is crazy. lol. shuld get this stuff cleaned up.
Nino- came pretty good. i noticed you had about 2 name changes already. lol. as for your verse, it was long. you came pretty hard tho. had sum nice disses, had the punches, the flow, and the structure. but you coulda worked on those personals a little more. 7/10
Jock- i liked your style. you did you hw too write that verse. you came wit what was real and didn't make stuff up. had sum real nice personals in there. you seemed to go all out. your structure threw me off tho. but i still found the flow. 8/10
Yaa- you had sum nice lines. a few of them were played. but the personals you had were ok. your lines seemed sort of stretched in a couple of places. but other than that, you came good. this battle just gets closer and closer. 6.5/10
Avalance- you coulda came harder. i feel you held back. you lacked really could punches. but because you filled your verse with personals. i say you came pretty good your flow and structure was good enuff for me. decent drop man. 6/10
sum: ya and nino: 13.5 Av and Jock- 14
props to all. real close battle.
vote- Av and Jock
peace
:( that was a hate vote...lol....j/pin uppin 1-1
uppin.....number 3 bitch
Uppin On This 1-1 ....
lets go.....ay sumone get sum voters in hurr. ay lethal.... -i didnt no , you and .44 wer in that crew, my homeboys in thurr
well know u know jock
lethal. . do not up this battle again.
upping for the thrid time!
come on people vote
we really need them
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