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no dick-ride votes
verse due tomorrow nightish
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10-14 lines
no feeding
no dick-ride votes
verse due tomorrow nightish
check in
checkin in me-self
Here...hop on my shoulders mental midget...you're finally above me!
...you couldn't battle hard if you memorized "Lyrics for Dummies"
This idiot freeposts in battles..so he can receive the bad news..**
With the amount of battles he loses, he should quit rapping & start singing the blues!
How do you expect this retard to spit something decently..
...when he can't even read his own damn brain frequency!*
Like a retard comedy show..we laugh at you cuz we feel bad...
..I'll wear you out then throw you down like you were a schoolyard fad..
Essentially, I'm your master and you're my footstool...I send you through hell..
Let's roleplay WWE...*BAM* there's a chairshot, and you got rung like a bell
*http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118867
**http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114985
Aiight listen im a show yall really how weak this nigga is.......
dude ill mentally and emotionally murder you and SPIT ROUNDS LACED WITH
enough ammunition to leave this BITCH CLOWNS FACE SPLIT,
your SHIT SOUNDS BASIC ,you woulnt be noticed running through a HICK TOWN PLACE WITH
your damn lyrics attached to the back of a poster of hali berry STRIPPED DOWN NAKED (lol.. damn!)
and you talk like you carry KNIFE STACKS AH TON
when the truth of the matters that you've gotten SLICED, JACKED , TA JUMPED
you damn phony, your only real affiliation with the streets was your LIFE AS A BUM
and fuck the thug image kid your just a HOE THATS GAY
how the hell you livin' a street life when you average 19 POST A DAY?
ive seen your pics and ive never seen a kid as FAT AS YA
take all the fat out ya stomach and you could feed the whole contitnent of AFRICA
i mean just face it bitch you have no TALENT MAN
your gay ass couldnt "drop bombs" even if your ghostwriter was in the TALIBAN
gunna your just a nerd that chills in a WEAK CIRCLE
how you hard? when behind the monitor you resemble STEVE ERKEL?
you have no money kid.. your lack of incomes ALARMING
your so poor even the rats that live in your house are starving
Thread cleaned of bitching. ANY post after this is considered an UP by either battler.
finally a cool mod.. good looks axe...........................
^Get the dick out your mouth!
Opener - MC Stiki....
Punches - MC Stiki....
Structure - MC Stiki....
Personals - Neither
Wordplay - Neither
Multies - Neither
Finisher - illynice
Weak battle!
MC StikiNicky Verse was eh.. Punches & personals could have been used alot better. Most of it was simply, but a few lines were creative.. gotta give you credit for that.
illynice Your shit was extremely stretched. After reading a quarter of each line.. i got bored as hell. Nothing was surprising. Next time, get creative..
Both need to elevate
But MC Stikinicky got this
V/MC Stik....
blah..lol yeah that was a real honest vote.. its funny you vote right after he just dropped a vote in your battle
uppin this for more votes..........................
^^^i felt those were ur two best lines.......some attempted wordplay.......weak punch........overall ur verse was ok.......it had pretty good structure.......flow was nice.......u had some metas.........u attempted wordplay, but most of it didnt come out.........i was surprised at ya lack of punches........they were either weak, wack, or played.........and the personals were pretty good........but ya punches were pretty disappointing.......Quote:
Originally Posted by MC StikiNicky
^^^i guess i thought those were two best lines........they had meta.......wordplay........punch was played......quit usin the fuckin capitalize thing, everyone knows u got multis, but it looks when u do that.......overall ur verse wasnt that good either.......u had wack structure.......wack flow........u had tight metas......tight wordplay.......no real punches that stood out.......no personals......Quote:
Originally Posted by Illynice
conclusion - mc stikinicky had a way better structure (thought i dont base votes off of that), better flow, and its sad for such a lack of punches, that he took it in that category as well........he had pretty good personals as well......illynice had tight metas, and wordplay, but that doesnt win battles, so mc stikinicky gets my vote......
VOTE - MC STIKINICKY
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Nice battle
flow/ you both had a nice flow goin on but Macabre had sum nice voc. with gud rhymes and a nice wordplay so i slide this to him cuz I feel that Illynice didn't had such a nice flow
punchlines/ Both of them had gud punches, Macabre just came thru harder and they were less played than Illynice
personals/Macabre definitely had more and betta personals cuz they came thry very hard and ill didn't had so much personals
structure/ I liked ill structure betta cuz it just felt betta than Macabre
Overall vote/ lMacabre (I'll poll this when I hit 100+posts) meanwhile take a look at my battles in my sig and VOTE plz....thx
thanks for the vote...upping again..i'll return the favour
aiight battlers.......pretty nice battle
Mac-nice drop..ur punchlines hit n also made me laugh, ur sturcture was aiight..nice flow....flaws,....werent ne flaws in my case but otha peeps prolly saw some
illynice-good drop..ur flow was aiight, ur punchlines hit n ur structure was way too streched homie...the flaws were that ur structure was streched so it threw off ur flow n ur punchlines didnt hit as hard
overall-good battle..props to both, but my vote goes to mac cuz he had sum better punchlines n jus gave me an easier read
v/mac
Return the favor n hit up my battles in my sig so i can close them..be really appreciated; thanx
Peace
hit up the battle vs JONESY UK in my sig it only needs 1 more vote
and i will come bak and return the favor
Fuck off...that's against the rules...drop a vote or get the fuck out.
punches - ill
wordplay - ill
creativity - ill
structure - MC
flow - MC
vocabulary - MC
opener - ill
closer - MC
personals - Ill
vote - ill
I feel he came better in his verse than his opponent did. Even tho I don't favor the structure that he picked. I still think he conquered it overall with his dominant wordplay...1ne.
No. Vote gone.
-Axe
macabre-
Here...hop on my shoulders mental midget...you're finally above me!
...you couldn't battle hard if you memorized "Lyrics for Dummies"
good opener my fav line good punch,but didnt rhyme
This idiot freeposts in battles..so he can receive the bad news..**
With the amount of battles he loses, he should quit rapping & start singing the blues!
nice punch was funny
How do you expect this retard to spit something decently..
...when he can't even read his own damn brain frequency!*
nice line, but stay away from the stupid, retarded jokes
Like a retard comedy show..we laugh at you cuz we feel bad...
..I'll wear you out then throw you down like you were a schoolyard fad..
good punch
Essentially, I'm your master and you're my footstool...I send you through hell..
Let's roleplay WWE...*BAM* there's a chairshot, and you got rung like a bell
decent closer, kinda funny
macabre-good battle i could tell u came strong,overall it was a good verse, punches was nice, good flow and structure, NO PERSONALS thats pretty bad
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ILL-yo could barly make urs out, couldn't even break it down man u need to work on ur structure and make ur rhymes acually rhyme ya kno, overall bad structure and flow, decent punches and sum bad tries at sum personals that couldnt com threw this time
VOTE/macabre
^what a dick-ride vote...the kid didn't hit me with ONE personal...and he said he used a bomb/taliban line...you call that creative?
please
now can ya hit my battle vs JONESY UK since i votes here PLZ
Damn Stop Swaying Votes Cocksucker That Was More Creative Than The Anything That Your Bitch Ass Had In Your Verse Im A Contact A Mod Bout This Its Pathetic Your Bitch Ass Is Swaying Votes
Err...when I said that I already had 5 votes, ya fucking idiot.
Macrabre.. if you post in here again
Your DQ'd, you have exceeded your limit.
Macrabre wins.