Slayer vs Matt g

No d/rs
No crews
10 lines at least
You spit first

Spit before 7 tonight

Dog, I don't think that you really want to battle
I'll have yo ass mixed up like an unsolved game of scrabble
you sound like you gay,you wavey like an ocean
if it was pussy in yo face, you would still choose lotion
you the type of person that like to take it up the butt :hump:
I should put a condom on a bullet and let it fuck you up
and when the bullet fly towards ya, you might think its a bird
but I garrented to have yo future spilled on a curve :shoot:
and when my bullet ride yo head you should know I aint kiddin
like spreeweels,when the bullet stop and you dead,yo head is still spinnin

I had to come easy on ya this is my first battle
but next time I would come harder.
Good luck

I will mix you up like an overspinning cement mixer
Then wrap up u and your name up, and theres no present fixer
You addicted fixed to gay sex you must like gettin it
When you think you like a girl you panic an start sweatin it
The only reason ya avy is a pic of a girls backside
Is cos you wanted ya rep to stay stable and not capside
Matt g ? Sounds like a name tht wud cum from tony blaire
Ya from mad town like ya name but im guna slay ya cos its only fair
Ya rhymes are weak, that why ya bite an eat cos they seem incomplete
You think ya rhymes are hot, but they not cos you bin on heat
Put ya rhymes under a prisoncell + av u under arrest like a federal maid
You aint ill But ya battles will be, ya just need medical aid

sorry that was so wack but a lost track of time, i had to spit in 10 mins. sorry.

but uppin for votes !!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes people............................................ ..

Aight seriously this was an easy win for Slayer.

Matt g- Ya rhymes were simplistic as fuck...you showed no signs of creativity and came with weak and played concpets.....punches and personals were whack......Smileys in battles are a definite no no...Also STAY AWAY FROM ALL GAY/SEX lines as they are MAD played...Also stay away formt he wannabe net thug lines like the shooting one you had

Slayer-You also had gay/sex lines....those are a big no no...be creative and original with your punches/metas/personals...you took this battle because the punches and personals you did have in your verse were harder and more consistent then your opponent
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Next time I will come harder.
I just wanted to see what you got cause
I didn't battle in a while. I had freestyled what i had wrote
but i will come harder next time.

I go know what Lyric was think on this battle you both had weak verse no hating or i would be wasting my time voting and shit but here how i think out this battle

Both of you need to shortin your lines cuz they are hard beathers and you guys need to work on ur punchlines and just everything but anyway I have to go wit Matt g cuz i was enjoying the bar when he said

Dog, I don't think that you really want to battle
I'll have yo ass mixed up like an unsolved game of scrabble

everything else you had was gay get yyour skill up son

V/Matt G

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Uppin a want this battle closed pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u had an iight verse

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Yeah slayer took this one with ease. I dont understand why matg didn't come harder even if it is his first battle. You guys both need 2 work on line relevance. Or 4 that matter relevance in general. 4 example. " if it was pussy in yo face, you would still choose lotion " makes absolutely no sense to me. You see if you want ppl to feel your shit its gottah be something they can relate to or at least understand. dont just throw words in wherever.. its gotta be thought out at least a little. u2 had decent personals regardless, i think there could have been improvements. Although that seemed like the area you guys had the least trouble with. Delivery aint too shabby but needs work and punches were fair. All in all an ok battle but slayer was most definately the victor, mainly because of his finisher about the red carpet! OOOOO!

Matt g: You had a nice flow with sum nice rhymes, you need to work on your wordplay and voc. tho, your punches were ok but I was not feeling they came thru hard, you did have sum nice personals but nothin original, you also need to work on your multis, your structure was aight

Slayer: you had a gud flow going on with gud rhymes and a nice wordplay, you had a betta voc than matt g, your punches came hard and that convinced me that you should get the vote, you had sum personals but nothin to great, you did have quite sum multis and they were gud also, structure could be betta
Overall Slayer (didn't expect that did you!) (insider)

Slayer you are pretty good about voting on other people's shit so I am savin you an up and givin some comments even though I can't vote.

This was definitely not your best piece. I actually think Matt g's shit came harder in the beginning and he had more meta's. BUT you had personals and he didn't so even though this one was completely average, my hypothetical vote goes to you. Matt G you had some pretty decent metas, both need to come more complex and creative. Hit up the links in my sig

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ok this was an weak battle

slayer u have an ok verse but u need to work on ur structure and ur personas was a little weak will the delivery was bad you need to bring it harder but anyways i say u need to work on that throw miore mutis and meta4s and wordplay in there it makes the verse better

Matt U need to elevate on ur skills and ur structure what was that damn shit was ugly and the flow was not bad but um work on ur punches and ur personals not much in there and ur punches was a lil played and leave the fillers alone u need more hard hitting punches and personals

Vote slayer

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