Battle Rules:
ten lines maximum, yo ..
spit by friday night at 12.
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Battle Rules:
ten lines maximum, yo ..
spit by friday night at 12.
*moved to Elevated cuz Young P is NOT elite*
Feebs..u shoulda knew that already
Ah Fuck 13th Disciple.
Lil faggot ass bitch.
You gotta edit my posts to be powerful.
Pussy.
And yea to feeble.
I dont care when we spit.
my friends coming over friday and i have a test tomorrow that i really need to pass..lol.. can we make this due saturday ? :(
your just a little kid, so i won't front ya wackness,
since you still claim "almost dope" after months of practice,
and by your current elevation, you need help it seems,
but i don't need to try, 13th killed your self esteem..
so kid don't fuck with me, instead be mad at him,
cuz im just here to help.. get you the fuck out of battling..
shut the fuck up midget.. act smart and hide ya hopes,
& lets stand back to back.. everyone be side you's dope..
its proven cuz... this feeble minded bitch is stuck on his feet,
and came bitching to me, when he was cut from elite..
Feeble had to step up, and lemme tell ya, this whores done...
Cuz he asks if I want a cookie...when he can't even afford one!
Clowning for fun, we all know this man'll be falling fast back...
When he loses support...of 13th's fucking dick in his asscrack!
Truth is Feebs is wack, and no Kyle, I ain't kidding...
Which is why his leagues run better...when he aint in em!
Holding supersoakers, only way dude'll have a gat to spray...
And say Feebs is garbage right?...Even your names leaning that way!
Now I'm making his dreams true, making Kyle black...and blue...
Told you to face the truth...but even he's turned his back on you!
yeah, upping. yo, upping you kids be sleeping..
shut the fuck up midget.. act smart and hide ya hopes,
& lets stand back to back.. everyone be side you's dope..
The bar that won it all....
Young P you put up a respectable fight. I give you that.
But insteada the same old fuck you wit supersoaker's stuff, Feeble came witty and funny. Almost like Im too good for you attitude. That won him this one.
No Poll's.....but it looked interesting....
No hate. Vote Feeble
Feeble took this for coming more consistent and creative with his verse....not a great verse by him tho....
Young P came real weak for his standards...not too much creativity or originality...and some of ya lines were mad played...like the gay shit and supersoaker.
Vote=Feeble
your just a little kid, so i won't front ya wackness,
since you still claim "almost dope" after months of practice,
this is not a punch, just a statement
and by your current elevation, you need help it seems,
but i don't need to try, 13th killed your self esteem..
so?
so kid don't fuck with me, instead be mad at him,
cuz im just here to help.. get you the fuck out of battling..
ehh decent
shut the fuck up midget.. act smart and hide ya hopes,
& lets stand back to back.. everyone be side you's dope..
meh
its proven cuz... this feeble minded bitch is stuck on his feet,
and came bitching to me, when he was cut from elite..
again, just a statement
you should refer to your own tutorial about making personals punches because you made a lot of statements here that were just worthless against young p
Feeble had to step up, and lemme tell ya, this whores done...
Cuz he asks if I want a cookie...when he can't even afford one!
this is not effective, for the fact that it's not sure that it is true
Clowning for fun, we all know this man'll be falling fast back...
When he loses support...of 13th's fucking dick in his asscrack!
ok diss
Truth is Feebs is wack, and no Kyle, I ain't kidding...
Which is why his leagues run better...when he aint in em!
not that hard
Holding supersoakers, only way dude'll have a gat to spray...
And say Feebs is garbage right?...Even your names leaning that way!
nope
Now I'm making his dreams true, making Kyle black...and blue...
Told you to face the truth...but even he's turned his back on you!
ok, not great but best of your battle
young p had a better verse, due to the fact he did
didn't just make statements and his best bar was
better than feebles best bar,
vote - young p
and if i have to hear any bitching because of this, then
fuck people for not liking the honest truth
Who cares if it's true.Quote:
Originally Posted by Savir
It's just an educated guess. :)
But atleast you came truthful.
Thanks for breaking the whole thing down as well.
thanks for voting. as for my tutorial .. the thing is, i already know all that about battling. i was just too lazy too think of punches for my personals... any more pointers?Quote:
Originally Posted by Savir
wait.. my tutorials taught you how to rap..
MHWAHAHAHHA^
A feeble alias.
:)
Your so cool Feebs
Ahh...
...That's bullshit.
Feeble...
...Change your damn custom text back.
That's not fair!
aight good battle....
feeble- i think u came rushed..and didnt drop the full potential of your verse.....it was still good but nothin made me saw wow or really laugh....nothin stood out..
i think you just rushed this one and this says nothin about your skills...take your time next time the flow was good and so was the structure
young p- had a good verse with good punches...the personals were there and they were pretty effective....the flow was good and the structure was also good.....use more witty lines in your verses...but good showing...u came ready
good battle but for punches and personals
v/young p
in response to that, my custom text is routinely changed as i battle 3-4 times a week... i'd permanently have to leave it as one thing. fuck that.Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
yes, my custom text said "have a cookie". happy, lol .
Nope...Still not happy.
It said ... "You want a cookie?"
:)
Now I'm happy.
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