10 lines
blind
(no bull shit)
check in
45 min time limit
ehh ya kno. . . .
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10 lines
blind
(no bull shit)
check in
45 min time limit
ehh ya kno. . . .
come on dogg check in why did you except then?
hurry up man wtf are you a pussy or some shit?
Put Your Dick Down U Bitch , Im Here For Fuck Sake.
finally man shit i was bout to battle some1 else is that a check in well it better be
checkin in. . . .
Verification:this nigga HOOD IMA MERK ANY FO ur PUNK AS FO SURE U SET IT UP NUCCA AND IMA SPIT 2ND U FIRST UNLESS U A BITHCY SHOOK :cussing: NIGGA
:cussing:
Thing:blind then we'll go
Verification:
Aaaah Thi Sbitchy Ass Nigga Is Shook Ok Bitch Blind Spit Set It Up
The Judge:^wack
Verification:
Ima Merk Ur Punk Ass U Bitchy Ass Nigga U Accepting Or U Shoook 2 Drop First Bitch
Thing:omg i made it and its a blindspit so go check in at frontlines
u sure that name fits u? i mean look at the way u type
verification is not clarification...
sound like ileteracy hit u wit the dunce stick 1billion swipes!
couldent verify basic knowledge like how ta wipe ya own ass
leaves the buttcrust a mile high...
shouldent provoke this kid hes elite & has an incredible wrath!
put ya n the past,rip off ya mask,then laugh as u vomit ass
i mean come on this kid suicidal...
verifying kinder,i love tha way u won this by adding like math!
give the verifyer a trophy cuz she picked tha name of the year
im so proud of u like something swell...
put ya threw hell,inbrace ya explanatory gift to b more sincere!
quick key in a sense. . . .
you have 13 more minutes to spit and dont look at my verse either remember its blindspit so ya cant feed. . . .
mother fucker what did i just say omg LOL
your a feeder man yer gay. . . .
I dint feed on you VERSES..you fool.
and sorry i made mistakes
. . enter & verficate your name, because you need proof of skill,
mastered this kid from top to bottem , But if you loose kid. your killed.
. . .I`l Shoot at will & wont boast, I`m only battling for my post.
because will he win 2day? Nay, unless you hire Ver as your Gh05t
. .I`m crushing you , I`m breaking you & your weak aight , look.
I`l speakwild & Don’t key-style . .Nah, drop down your .rhymebook
. . written in 45 Minute’s , & these’s word`s hurt, . . .done they.
Cos im splitting . . The new from old , Like From self to Opey
& your not adjacent , you stink & I hope this fruit can take hint,
elite? Well.. . your still a frontline , and wacknesse`s banned from this link.
Ver.
i`l get a mod to delet my other post.
omfg stfu before i kill myself cuz of yer straight up whackness LMAOQuote:
Originally Posted by Verification
dont worry you'll get what`s coming for your GREAT SWAY....
I.R
He didn't exactly sway, he was just clowning your verse.
2..
3rd
4th and oh yeah that link for yer last bar is whack cuz ive never been banned from there so wtf are you talking about omfg yer gay anyways and i never have even gone there in my intire life and never had too so yeah thats outta the way lol
uppin dis sheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee et
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5th uppin....................................
ill vote on this battle thing if u vote on this battle
cuz im tired of votein and no one repayin the favor iight u vote on my battle ill vote on ur's
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=119302
damn this was a totally one sided battle
thing u merked this kat fav line from u was:
verification is not clarification...
sound like ileteracy hit u wit the dunce stick 1billion swipes!
couldent verify basic knowledge like how ta wipe ya own ass
leaves the buttcrust a mile high...
iight i liked it though it could have been better
line from ver:
umm........I`l Shoot at will & wont boast, I`m only battling for my post.
because will he win 2day? Nay, unless you hire Ver as your Gh05t
. .I`m crushing you , I`m breaking you & your weak aight , look.
WEAK
breakdown:
flow:thing
mutlies:no one
punchlines:thing
enjoy reading:thing
structure:thing
opener:thing, good overall
closer thing, good overall
vote easily .... thing
please return the favor if u havent already done soo.
uppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggg and shit
uppin on this please /.//////////////////////.....................
decent battle.
thing- you came pretty good. a lot of people have that same style as you. i don't like it cuz it seems stretched. but you pulled it off in this one. your punches hit pretty well. you did your hw and hit him up wit sum nice personals. nice one.
verification- you took the flow and the structure in this battle, but i don't think that was enuff. your punchers weren't very hard hitting. you had a personal or two, but that was it. ur lines seemed played. but you still do good. but i feel ^he did better. props to both.
vote- thing...better punches
peace
^^^ima say those were ya two best lines.......they could have been worded better, but whateva......had some wordplay and a decent punch........overall ur verse wasnt that good.......ive seen way better from u.......this wasnt worded that well, there were a few metas, and some wordplay.......u had some ok personals, and punches, but nothin really stood out to me.......Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
^^^i guess those were my two favorite lines.......attempted wordplay, and a pretty weak punch......overall ur verse was pretty wack.......it had a few metas.......just sad attempts at wordplay.......ya punches were either played or wack, or both.......no personals......Quote:
Originally Posted by Verification
conclusion - in a pretty weak battle thing takes it with more metas, better wordplay, and less played and wack punches.......he also had some personals, whereas verifcation had none.......so thing gets my vote.....
VOTE - THING
aight i felt that thing took this one for better punches and personals
he had an ok flow and the structure was good. the opener and closer were both good. You had a good verse and you had a good flow that made your verse easier to read....good showing from you
verification also had a good verse but it was way too simple.....use more personals and complex sentences...elevate and get better...flow was ok and so were the opener and closer.....keep workin at it
v/thing for good punches and personals
Thing - You had some decent punches & personals. Structure was pretty good. Flow was aight, wordplay & multies coulda been used / used more. Punches were pretty consistant. Overall.. Decent verse
Verification - Some punches, but some were played. Structure was decent, coulda been better. Flow was good. Wordplay & multies also coulda been used / used more (like i told thing). Overall.. I wasn't feelin you that much, you came close though.
V/Thing
Thing came out..
..juss a little more consistant