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Brix Said:
Set it up my Friend. Lets give F.lines a look. Show them how to battle.
10-16 lines
no feeding etc
500 posts to vote
explained votes
Due 2moz 9pm U.S time
it'll be 2am english lol
Front Lines becoz it doesnt sleep.
we'll get all gay votes deleted
pz
so obey the rulez and drop well explained votes
-In-
G'luck Spit
damn you two shuold join deja vu.............................................goo d luck neway lol
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good luck to you as well Brix
-No time on this. Sorry pz.
Even though you're wack..You may get a chance in LLL Spit
If you put as much effort into battling..
..as you put into your Sig'
Bolds, scroll, smilies, & colours? yet you'll never stand out
Spit couldn't put peeps in a spin..
..on a fucking round-about
Last gasp of a trout..gulp..you'll never be the big fish
Said he'd eat all of LLL Jr up..
..& then he became the dish
At least she's not selfish..see we've all had a piece of Spit'
I opened the Door for elevation..
..but he still couldnt Handle it..te he
I guess Spits the shit..crap,excremant..whatever its called
Voters expected the worst from Spit'..
..but still managed to leave appalled
Compare:- I throw facts & Imperatives..you rep Executives
Your shits more over-looked..
..than distant relatives
Yea we've battled before..8 times..& ya still aint learned
Getting better was straight ahead of Spit'..
..then he did a U-Turn
Well hey..we both said Good Luck..neither was needed
Coz even if you had double the Luck..
..you'd still leave wack & defeated
sorry for the delay
check it,
we're known Public Enemies... so I Chuck D in ya mouth Openly <-- Dope
& put my foot in ya ass.... like Lugs makes Colonoscopy Scopes
on RB interviews - Don't Speak.... I know just what you're thinkin, No Doubt
Dickrider.... skillz get brought up & I'm the first name outta your Mouth
prolly gonna try to ride my Ass too... just cuz I took my Time Again
go visit Herbs Anonymous, $pitaholic.... & get off of my Heini-Ken
this is our fuckin 9th round at it... suprised this Herb didn't Drop Out
but like any Cannabis... we all recall the 1st & 2nd Round Knockout
Brix, Just cuz I constantly Son you.... that doesn't make you a Star
I told you to practice you're Keyin... and you went & scratched up ya Car!
UK Fags take one look at your sig... and they all get excited
but really it sounds like a Gay club to me.... 'Man chester United'
What more can I say? I guess we'll call this the Black Verse
cuz I smoke this Herb like Jays from a to Z..... & Roc this Fella worse
LOL
Best battle in F.Lines yet no votes?
1st
Upping
Brix, Just cuz I constantly Son you.... that doesn't make you a Star
I told you to practice you're Keyin... and you went & scratched up ya Car!
ha was good
you spit won cuz ehh well this line up there omg lol
i just felt that spit had punches more ya kno hitting
and ahh its apparent he won this
brix struc was off a lil but had some decent shit
i would say that brix barely lost ya kno
ne ways i think that brix had some basic shit but was ok
and umm well spit has the witty side of this battle came creative
i mean both had punches but spit had them on a constent level
and his flow was better to go wit cuz struc was ok better
i mean 10 lines wit brix choice of style is the limit
vote/spit
yo hit my battles in my sig
Edited to remove what doesn't belong...
^^yo born.... that whole thing was rambling LOL good call
uppin...................2
uppin
Uppin 3................................................. .......
Well, shit, gentlemen...
This is getting slept on like a giant fuckin down pillow after 10 beers, 5 hydro joints, and a long day's work doing manual labor!
Motherfuck!
Brix wins in a great fuckin battle!
This is probably the best one ya'll have had and it should be getting more fuckin attention...
I just feel Brix never let up, he hit hard and funny all the way...
Spit, I just feel you had a couple of drop offs,
prolly gonna try to ride my Ass too... just cuz I took my Time Again
go visit Herbs Anonymous, $pitaholic.... & get off of my Heini-Ken
this is our fuckin 9th round at it... suprised this Herb didn't Drop Out
but like any Cannabis... we all recall the 1st & 2nd Round Knockout
That was the weakest you had, but it really kind if cost you, my man.
Brix had the most quotables, honestly, I think I liked them all.
Spit's highlight was definately the "keyed your own car" line.
Fuckin brilliant.
But Brix had "U Turn", "fish/dish", "spit/sig", and...
The clincher,
I guess Spits the shit..crap,excremant..whatever its called
Voters expected the worst from Spit'..
..but still managed to leave appalled
That was just very, very good...
Personals flew in this battle, peeps who ain't Elevated or Elite need to be learning from this.
Peace
^^thanks for the feedback Born. Nice work Brix. Uppin 3!!!!!!!
I meant 4..... sorryQuote:
Originally Posted by $pitacular
aiight....tight ass battle, one of the best i seen in front lines...n since im new to battlin this might help me out sum....
spit-nice ass drop...good flow, good wordplay, nice punches, tight personals, n evrything bout ur verse was tight except fo dat lil line that threw it off but u still kept goin n came out great...tight battle n hope i learn sumthin from this
brix-anotha tight ass drop, the wordplay, the vocab was hot, the flow n the punchlines n personals were on fire...no flaws in this verse...ill i can say is teach me how to battle like that...j/k but tight battle
overall-tight ass battle like i said before but my vote goes to brix cuz his verse had more hard hittin punchlines n personals...but spit came close...
v/brix
n if u can return de favor hit up the links in my sig unda battles...be very appreciated;thanx
Peace
Uppin 5.............. and some shit yall might not have caught:
Don't Speak.... I know just what you're thinkin, No Doubt <- Don't yall ever listen to other music? Straight up out the damn song (don't speak) wit reference to the lyrics and band
Public Enemies/Chuck D..... c'mon I know yall get that
Cannabis.... 2nd round knockout....
anyway blah Brix ya killin me here LOL
Uppin!
Made a good battle as usual Spit.
4th
upping.
How gay is this?
^pretty gay so why don't you help others out and return votes on links maybe that way some peoples shit can get closed just a thought.....breakdown...
Even though you're wack..You may get a chance in LLL Spit
If you put as much effort into battling..
..as you put into your Sig'
^hmmmm...i assume the punch will be coming within the next two lines..
Bolds, scroll, smilies, & colours? yet you'll never stand out
Spit couldn't put peeps in a spin..
..on a fucking round-about
^ok theres the punch...meh ok wordplay...ok punch...
Last gasp of a trout..gulp..you'll never be the big fish
Said he'd eat all of LLL Jr up..
..& then he became the dish
At least she's not selfish..see we've all had a piece of Spit'
^big fish trout is a no .....the rest is good...
I opened the Door for elevation..
..but he still couldnt Handle it..te he
I guess Spits the shit..crap,excremant..whatever its called
Voters expected the worst from Spit'..
..but still managed to leave appalled
^Hehe that wasn't a bad punch although you really might wanna put some effort..
Compare:- I throw facts & Imperatives..you rep Executives
Your shits more over-looked..
..than distant relatives
^hmmm aight wordplay good crew thingy...yep...
Yea we've battled before..8 times..& ya still aint learned
Getting better was straight ahead of Spit'..
..then he did a U-Turn
^meh this has been done....
Well hey..we both said Good Luck..neither was needed
Coz even if you had double the Luck..
..you'd still leave wack & defeated
^hmmm ok closer......not your best but not bad...lacked hard punches..
we're known Public Enemies... so I Chuck D in ya mouth Openly <-- Dope
& put my foot in ya ass.... like Lugs makes Colonoscopy Scopes
^meh creative put i onno...meh ok opener...
on RB interviews - Don't Speak.... I know just what you're thinkin, No Doubt
Dickrider.... skillz get brought up & I'm the first name outta your Mouth
^hmmm....song allusion not bad...lost the flow a little though..
prolly gonna try to ride my Ass too... just cuz I took my Time Again
go visit Herbs Anonymous, $pitaholic.... & get off of my Heini-Ken
^this has been done i swear....somewhere ..sorry...
this is our fuckin 9th round at it... suprised this Herb didn't Drop Out
but like any Cannabis... we all recall the 1st & 2nd Round Knockout
^but like any canibus..YOU SPELLED IT WRONG!!!....
Brix, Just cuz I constantly Son you.... that doesn't make you a Star
I told you to practice you're Keyin... and you went & scratched up ya Car!
^lol thats old and played i spit that in my early days lol...
UK Fags take one look at your sig... and they all get excited
but really it sounds like a Gay club to me.... 'Man chester United'
^ooooo nice punch.......but will he end it well?
What more can I say? I guess we'll call this the Black Verse
cuz I smoke this Herb like Jays from a to Z..... & Roc this Fella worse
^no that wasn't such a good ending....
Close battle i'm a have to give it to brix for more creativity and better lines.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=2&pp=15
^return fav thanx.......
vote spitacular.
came harder, with decent punches. the man chester line was arrite, and the other your gay line was arrite, but people need to quit with those kinda lines, seriously. shit gets old really really fast and im tired of those lines, lol.
bi detained just didnt come with the heat... ive seen him come dope a few times one of which i think was against a vet, avalon or koalatee if im not mistaken. but he needs to come dope like that often and elevate...
spit won this.
5th & last
Uppin cuz a good battle shouldn't be slept on!!!
This is fucking ridiculous.... I don't care if I get DQ'd for uppin this. VOTE! you goddamn herbs
Upping. Your right $pit. We have both upped it 6 times now. So we're in this together buddy lol.