you know the rules...30 mins as soon as you check in...good luck
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you know the rules...30 mins as soon as you check in...good luck
ite......check in..........................................3:35 eastern
ite watch as i rip him...for the opener...look on top of hiz sig...on top of da pic...
LEAVE YA LINKZZZZZZZZZZ
ite...watch as i rip em!
Lemme give u advice, you better 'prey'(pray) before i 'catch you'
Now take a look at ya sig..im da one in da back...den guess whoz u?
Call him the terminator, the way im "herbing" this new ass emcee....
N call me Bryane Pat n' Joe, da way im killin em from "sea 2 shining sea"
Watch as I cut through this dinox bitch...as if it were a sonic boom
Dis bitch cant hear me coming....like a Mazda car (whipser) "zoom zoom"
Like fruit in a grocery...this bitch has just been but on bargain-hez fresh
But he didn't noe dat pple wud "eat" em...n dat mc's wuld rip out hiz flesh
I killed this bytch wit mah opener..1st 2 lines...now letz c a framing device
This bitche's chances of beating me are zero pecent,like rollin a 7 on a dice
yo u cannot feed off my verse!
:) good luck.........
u have 5 minutes remaining.....n u cant feed off my verse!
i'ma 'lyrically-abuse-you', send my spit right through-you,
then i'ma 'act wack' cuz i've beat you already just like 'you-do'!
you're battlin dinox dog i think its best-you-quit,
you'd still be 'uncool'(uncle) if you had a 'nephew-bitch'!
'squash this turd' leave him wit 'pressed-shit', don't test-this,
i 'expose these pussies' like 'undressed clits'!
i drop this fresh and i got this kid dribblin-mold,
this 'cats starvin' like 'felines' starin at 'kibbles-in-bowls',
glare-at-nines, resign and still have extra sparin-time,
impare-ya-lines, kill ya cuz ya 'ever-green' like i'm 'tearin pines'!,
ok...............uppppiin.........n i will return favor :)...we both will!
yeah.......................................uppin.. .......(1)
plzeeeee vote......n i WILL return favor..................
uppin............................................. .(3)
uppin............................................. ........(4) vote plz
Lemme give u advice, you better 'prey'(pray) before i 'catch you'
Now take a look at ya sig..im da one in da back...den guess whoz u?
nice, i liked how u brought the sig into ur opener....
Call him the terminator, the way im "herbing" this new ass emcee....
N call me Bryane Pat n' Joe, da way im killin em from "sea 2 shining sea"
haha...nice... i understood it...
Watch as I cut through this dinox bitch...as if it were a sonic boom
Dis bitch cant hear me coming....like a Mazda car (whipser) "zoom zoom"
ok...not THAT nice...but ok...u could work on second line
Like fruit in a grocery...this bitch has just been but on bargain-hez fresh
But he didn't noe dat pple wud "eat" em...n dat mc's wuld rip out hiz flesh
nicee
I killed this bytch wit mah opener..1st 2 lines...now letz c a framing device
This bitche's chances of beating me are zero pecent,like rollin a 7 on a dice
o man...beautiful closer...
8/10..gooood shir for just a newbe
i'ma 'lyrically-abuse-you', send my spit right through-you,
then i'ma 'act wack' cuz i've beat you already just like 'you-do'!
i liked the first..liked how u made fun of his name..haha..but could work on your second line
you're battlin dinox dog i think its best-you-quit,
you'd still be 'uncool'(uncle) if you had a 'nephew-bitch'!
didnt get the second line...ok..just a filler..
'squash this turd' leave him wit 'pressed-shit', don't test-this,
i 'expose these pussies' like 'undressed clits'!
loll...it wuld do good in streets..but sex jokes r played on rb
i drop this fresh and i got this kid dribblin-mold,
this 'cats starvin' like 'felines' starin at 'kibbles-in-bowls',
ok..didnt really find that nice..
glare-at-nines, resign and still have extra sparin-time,
impare-ya-lines, kill ya cuz ya 'ever-green' like i'm 'tearin pines'!,
ok..pretty good closer..
7/10
i really felt lyricallz shit..he had nice punches, and beautiful creativity...nice baTTLE...i enjoyed it...
vote- lyricallyabbusivee
yeah thanx for the vote...but i dont know how you didn't get those lines especially since you a 'lightweight' and its called wordplay
uppin............................................. ........final
what happens if somebody can't vote on the poll but votes?
ehh nothing to good from either.. but id have to say a close battle.. but.. hmm lyrically u like.. BIT off his sig.. it is his rhyme or line i should have said. but seriously both were not to good. Both of you guys coulda had a dope drop if you would have revised your shit before posting it.. yes you CAN do that.
Breakin it down.
Flow. Lyrically took this one hands down every line flowed good except the second line. the "guess whos you" you should have reworded it and that line would be flawless.. seriously
Punches. Ehhh this was a hard one to choose but after studying the two verses lyrically took this one because mor abundant punches. It seemed that Dinox didnt do aswell
Structure. Dinox you get this one because your lines were short and simple. Lyrically your lines were also good but.. ehh too stretched.
Personals. Lyrically got this one almost every line he posted was a personal and the ones that Dinox dropped wernt any good but had plenty potiential.
Opener. Lyrically because his was biting off the sig.... but it wasnt played like Dinox's
Closer. Ehh Tie niether one hit hard at all
Vote.. Lyrically
Hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116816
Dinox.. up again and you are DQed.
You are allowed 5 ups.. every post after both verses are considered ups and you're at six.
uppppppppppppppiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn (3).........
upppiiinnnnnnn.......plze leave ya links...........i will hit it up.......sleeeepppinnnnnn on this!!!!!!
last up....and i will return da favor.....promise.....
Lemme give u advice, you better 'prey'(pray) before i 'catch you'
Now take a look at ya sig..im da one in da back...den guess whoz u?
Lol good opener and personal
Call him the terminator, the way im "herbing" this new ass emcee....
N call me Bryane Pat n' Joe, da way im killin em from "sea 2 shining sea"
ok line
Watch as I cut through this dinox bitch...as if it were a sonic boom
Dis bitch cant hear me coming....like a Mazda car (whipser) "zoom zoom"
Lol another good personl line toward his sig
Like fruit in a grocery...this bitch has just been but on bargain-hez fresh
But he didn't noe dat pple wud "eat" em...n dat mc's wuld rip out hiz flesh
kind of played but still a good line
I killed this bytch wit mah opener..1st 2 lines...now letz c a framing device
This bitche's chances of beating me are zero pecent,like rollin a 7 on a dice
lol good closer
dinox's verse
i'ma 'lyrically-abuse-you', send my spit right through-you,
then i'ma 'act wack' cuz i've beat you already just like 'you-do'!
Ok openr good , ok referance toward his name
you're battlin dinox dog i think its best-you-quit,
you'd still be 'uncool'(uncle) if you had a 'nephew-bitch'!
Didnt really get this line are all...
'squash this turd' leave him wit 'pressed-shit', don't test-this,
i 'expose these pussies' like 'undressed clits'!
not that great of a line but ok.
i drop this fresh and i got this kid dribblin-mold,
this 'cats starvin' like 'felines' starin at 'kibbles-in-bowls',
ok line....
glare-at-nines, resign and still have extra sparin-time,
impare-ya-lines, kill ya cuz ya 'ever-green' like i'm 'tearin pines'!,
Bad closer
Ok
this was a 1 sided battle. Dinox didnt really have anything that caught my eye. could of had a better verse i think. Lyrical had good personals almost his whole verse made me laugh lol Dinox needlevate on his punchs and personals
vote- Lyricallabbusiv
Quote:
Originally Posted by lyicallyabbusiv
Dinox had mostly wordplay, and wack punchesQuote:
Originally Posted by Dinox
he had maybe 1 good bar, but eh... Elevate
lyricallyabbusiv didn't come that great neither
he was a little more complex with punches & personals
Not by much though... he gets my vote.. But Elevate
V/Lyricallyabbusiv
well ima have to go with lyricallyabusive on this one.....Dinox...you came a little too basic, I did get your wordplay but that wasnt enough...you have to come with more creative punches and harder hitting personals..your opener could have been worded better....a couple of played lines and a kinda weak closer, you need to come a little harder next time.....keep at it
Lyrically:you had a couple of stretched lines but if flowed alright...some good punches and metas....you came a little more original but you could work on wording as well..structure was ok and you had a nice closer...I thought it was just more of a complete verse, though you coulda thrown in some more personals and herder punches....good job...
V-LyricallyAbusive...
return the favor...
check my sig...