Checkin in, rules in BS
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Checkin in, rules in BS
checking in...my fault for de wait but im here n u droppin 1st right
yo homie where u at...shit i wanted to battle today not tomorrow..
ya buddy i wanted to battle yesterday but u took too long.. i'll drop mine now and whenver ur ready go for it...
This is bullshit ya’ll I can’t take it anymore, like “oh his shit is wacked out, cracked out, I think its worse than before.”
Well guess what bitches I don’t give a fuck what you say, “his meta’s were luck and he shouldn’t dog on bein gay.”
Ya you’d say that wouldn’t you Cope, ya that’s right I saw you and Snake suckin dick for dope
I’m new to this site but at least I’ve been consistent, half you nigga’s shit is fuckin nonexistent.
Ya’ll bitched about structure, so just to be sure, I spread this one out like your girl’s legs when I fucked her
Is my shit too graphic? Should I bowdlerize my material? Fuck you little bitches I hoped some1 cummed in ur cereal
I guess this is me turning over a new leaf, not to be cliché, but I didn’t beef in this battle, so what else can I say????
even if loco doesn't drop one i still want some feedback..
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^uppin for feedback since loco punked out
hold up homie good drop but its my turn....................
Not to freepost but its been like 4 days man so drop it tonight or forget it
i know yo but if been waitin fo u..so here it go...
This homie think i would actually punk out...
Makes me wonder wut de fuck he spit about...
You is stupid kid,i mean look at ur name..Beano...
Ladies n Gents we got anotha Jin tryin to teach Chino...
You spittin sounds like u was already fried, so imma REFRY ur beans....
Cuz i know u started shakin soon as i made the scene...
U say me n Snake...who de fuck is snake..
De only snake i know was the one UR bitch was suckin without much debate..
So i conclude this battle by actually havin sumthin to say but its 2 much..
But it dont matter to u so...develop sum STRENGTH n try n see if u ever PUNCH...
I was talkin to Cope dipshit and it took 3 days for that pile of shit?
damn homie...it neva took me 3 days fo dat shit but i dont expect u to believe me so jus wait till the votin start n we'll see who can talk shit
Peace
or we'll just sit around and wait for u to fuckin spit somethin, either do it or don't ur just fillin up a battle slot
uppin for votes C'mon now we need some votes. I will return favor with honest feedbac
uppin this fo sum feedback or sum votes.........................^^^^
Aight....my vote and feedback
Beano
This is bullshit ya’ll I can’t take it anymore, like “oh his shit is wacked out, cracked out, I think its worse than before.”
break ya shit line by line....not bar by bar...this bar had no punch or personal....filler
Well guess what bitches I don’t give a fuck what you say, “his meta’s were luck and he shouldn’t dog on bein gay.”
This is a fake personal^ Since you posted first...how you know he's hatin on gays...plus this was a weak punch and personal...filler
Ya you’d say that wouldn’t you Cope, ya that’s right I saw you and Snake suckin dick for dope
whack....stay away from ALL gay/sex jokes as they are mad played
I’m new to this site but at least I’ve been consistent, half you nigga’s shit is fuckin nonexistent.
no punch towards your opponent..jus a generalized one that is useless.
Ya’ll bitched about structure, so just to be sure, I spread this one out like your girl’s legs when I fucked her
nope...no punch...stay away from sex lines
Is my shit too graphic? Should I bowdlerize my material? Fuck you little bitches I hoped some1 cummed in ur cereal
stay away from cum lines too..no punch towards ya opponent
I guess this is me turning over a new leaf, not to be cliché, but I didn’t beef in this battle, so what else can I say????
again filler
Southsideloco
This homie think i would actually punk out...
Makes me wonder wut de fuck he spit about...
Extend your lines...makes the flow choppy...punch was weak..personal...meh...not that good
You is stupid kid,i mean look at ur name..Beano...
Ladies n Gents we got anotha Jin tryin to teach Chino...
ok bar...personal was ok and punch was meh
You spittin sounds like u was already fried, so imma REFRY ur beans....
Cuz i know u started shakin soon as i made the scene...
kinda weak...first line was meh..ok..second line was filler
U say me n Snake...who de fuck is snake..
De only snake i know was the one UR bitch was suckin without much debate..
whack...no gay punches...shits MAD played
So i conclude this battle by actually havin sumthin to say but its 2 much..
But it dont matter to u so...develop sum STRENGTH n try n see if u ever PUNCH...
1st line is filler..second is meh
Vote=Southsideloco for more and harder punches
Beano...focus on dissing your opponent instead of generalizing your lines...makes your shit look prewritten
Southsideloco...work on extending you lines and evening them out...
To Both- Try and put a punch/meta/personal in every line instead of using the first line as a set up...Also up ya creativity and originality so you verse hits harder and is not so played...STAY AWAY FROM ALL SEX?GAY lines....
Hope this helps
cmon frontlines...stop sleepin on this yo uppin(2)again..............
Beano- I didn’t like your style at all. You shuldn’t make a verse as if you were talking to someone else about your opponent. It causes your punches to be off a bit. Your flow was good but your structure needs a little bit of work. Your punches didn’t’ really connect and you had no personals. Overall, it’s ok. 6/10
Southsideloco- you came decent. Your punches were slightly better. Your flow was ok and so was ur structure. Overall you connected a little better than he did considering you had a much better style. Not a bad verse. 7/10
Vote- southside…personals and slightly better punches.
Drop some feedback on this please. thanx:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118945
peace
Both verses were wack.
Beano - You have made your verse as if you was talking to anyone, a mean you could be dissing the queen for all we know, you need to make ya disses personal to your opponent. Stop with the gay and sex lines cos it is just filler, concentrate on dissing not praising yourself.
Southsideloco - Your verse wasnt absolutley great aswell, the lines were to short in places and then all of a sudden they wud strech. You had better punches but still were not hard hitting. You acctually aimed your punches towards beano which was better than praising yourself.
Overall- Both need to concentrate on better personlas and aim more to diss ya opponent. Stop with the gay and sexual remarks cos its just filler and dusnt hit hard.
Vote - Southsideloco : Because of better punches and they were more personal towards beano.
it was generalized cuz i was tryin somethin new, i didn't have any need or reason to diss em.. so whatever niggaz. The snake and Cope comments were towards some1 else (Battlesnake and Cope) so call it filler if you want but u don't know what thew fuck your talking about. uppin
I cant vote but checc this i was confused by this shyt right chea but uh.....if I could I'd go with Loc since I cant vote no explaination really needed but for feed bacc sake checc......honestly beano didnt really come to batle he just showed up.........loco hit him with a few punches but honestly they were just jabs............well I cant vote but a lesson to both hit harder
yo FL i jus need 3 more votes to close this battle...cmon stop sleepin n vote...drop a link n ill return the favor jus drop sum feedbacks n votes.......uppin(3)
southsideloco gets muh vote for better flow
overall but this was a close one to judge b/c both
were not to good at all
Vote=southsideloco
Ayo return the fav. vote on my battle with shortay
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Yo u should put the rules in here too so people voteing can know what they are too. I'm not gonna go look in BS's archives for the fuckin rules for this battle. That way if some1 broke a rule then the voters can vote for the guy who didnt break any rules. I bring this up because south used beano's shit against him a little and if it was a blind spit then i gotta vote for Beano, but since I dunno the fuckin' rules I'm gonna vote for south and here's why:
aight beano .... your structure was actually pretty good which in most newby's thats umusual so i give u that. but dawg your punches were like weak as fuck. Your rhyme was average, average vocab, ... both can be better but they weren't horribly bad. man you didnt even use a fuckin' personal, c'mon man u cant battle in here, not use a personal and expect to win!!!! that shit just doesnt happen unless neither people do. maybe that shit flew at that other site but no here. fav line "Is my shit too graphic? Should I bowdlerize my material? Fuck you little bitches I hoped some1 cummed in ur cereal" ... lol
South - u used his shit against him which i dont like, but you actally had personals which was good. Your punches hit a little harder than beanos but that doesnt say much. you rhyme was a little elementary, but is was straight. fav line "You is stupid kid,i mean look at ur name..Beano...
Ladies n Gents we got anotha Jin tryin to teach Chino"
Structure - tie
punches - south
personals - south
metas - tie
rhyme - beano
v - south
re-pay the favor and vote on my shit ya'll or i aint gonna vote in one of urs again! hit up the links in the sig!