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aiyo this bitch cant touch me , iam on a different level
he some gospel music ,iam somethin like heavy metal
i'll beat this fello , i put the banger to his frame ,
now he aint got no mind , like him and nothin switch brains
iam insane , to even let you battle me
cuz the shit i be typin be causin casualties
you mad at me , fuck it, i dont care about feelins
cuz i make crash down like them two government buildings
and this shit anit even hard , iam spitin average
you can spit ya best , i'll still beat you faggot
yo shit i forgot i had this shit...gimme like 15 20mins tah make mi shit...this my check in also
Im Flowin-true you just blowin-dudes couldn’t follow in my footsteps if he owned my shoes
Rip my-foes-in-two im known to leave a hole-in-dudes forgetfull bitch your just prone to lose
Dismantling-Qucker you cant handle-whats-sicker Theory fail to take shots when i mangle yo liver
Thers Thangs-to-consider when im Damagin-spitters…like Post strikes SylicoN wont stand an deliver
I bomb-Vets your whole Reps gone-next Theory thinks we feelin him when we say drop your text!(jus quit)
Poppin techs? You dun contest Run stressed when i flat out blaze this duns best like sun beds!
Ingest-ya-best …Cliques? I Dismiss ya sets, got this battle wrapped up aint even christmas yet
when you step to flash you’ll regret the text! Votes for you are fucking twisted like dyslexic sex
His Mind’l-Rot fuckers Rhymin-shot dropped on this board the whole site is rocked
I m Rhymin-hott to Ignite-ya-spot like ‘Shakespear boxing’ this writers blocked!!
The Game? Im the impressive-Owner kid the Jest-is-over…..my Sick bars infesting closers
Crash N burn like testing-rovers My best-is-Doper you just shit outta luck like digesting clovers
uppin for votes and shit 1
mutis flash
wordplay flash
creativity-flash
opener-flash
closer-flash
punches-flash
flow-flash
personals-flash
vote-flash
I just wasn't feel plague verse he was trying to be short and sweet about it and it was short and dumb like this
i'll beat this fello , i put the banger to his frame ,
now he aint got no mind , like him and nothin switch brains
go back to the 1 st grade
so my vote goes to Flash
v/flash
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uppin once again 2
yo what the fuck is up with people post voting and not poll voting....wake the fuck up people
im bout tah go back tah urbanflows cause this site sleeps way to much
uppin for votes 3
Flash takes this shit pretty easy...He won with better punches and personals...flow was jus OK and the structure could be better...but other wise had a pretty solid verse...Much more consistent with punches and personals and metas...
Plague603 you came way to simplistic and played...stay away from all gay and sex and wannabe gangsta jokes....try and expand your lines and be more creative and original with your verse...Keep elevating
Vote=Flash
Please drop an honest vote here guys...thanks.... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113978
like lyric said, plague you just came way too basic...you didn't have anything that really stood out in your verse. you should look at some other battles in elevated or elite for examples of how to use better punches, personals and wordplay
flash-you dropped better in this battle, your verse was okay but remember you don't have to overload it with multi's...but overall decent verse, better punches personals and wordplay...you stayed at your opponent more, hit him more directly so in my opinion you take this battle
aiyo this bitch cant touch me , iam on a different level
he some gospel music ,iam somethin like heavy metal
Nice Punch
i'll beat this fello , i put the banger to his frame ,
now he aint got no mind , like him and nothin switch brains
lol its Banga and weak punch
iam insane , to even let you battle me
cuz the shit i be typin be causin casualties
Blah
you mad at me , fuck it, i dont care about feelins
cuz i make crash down like them two government buildings
good punch
and this shit anit even hard , iam spitin average
you can spit ya best , i'll still beat you faggot
omg tight closer dawg
8/10
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Im Flowin-true you just blowin-dudes couldn’t follow in my footsteps if he owned my shoes
Rip my-foes-in-two im known to leave a hole-in-dudes forgetfull bitch your just prone to lose
Nyce Multis and punch
Dismantling-Qucker you cant handle-whats-sicker Theory fail to take shots when i mangle yo liver
Thers Thangs-to-consider when im Damagin-spitters…like Post strikes SylicoN wont stand an deliver
line is nyce but streched out
I bomb-Vets your whole Reps gone-next Theory thinks we feelin him when we say drop your text!(jus quit)
Poppin techs? You dun contest Run stressed when i flat out blaze this duns best like sun beds!
lmao TIGHT SIK!!!! no comment
Ingest-ya-best …Cliques? I Dismiss ya sets, got this battle wrapped up aint even christmas yet
when you step to flash you’ll regret the text! Votes for you are fucking twisted like dyslexic sex
ehhhhh...speachless
His Mind’l-Rot fuckers Rhymin-shot dropped on this board the whole site is rocked
I m Rhymin-hott to Ignite-ya-spot like ‘Shakespear boxing’ this writers blocked!!
Nyce punch
The Game? Im the impressive-Owner kid the Jest-is-over…..my Sick bars infesting closers
Crash N burn like testing-rovers My best-is-Doper you just shit outta luck like digesting clovers
Tight lines dawg to many multis tho they cuz streched lines chillz wit the multis
10/10
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Vote-Flash
Vote- Flash
Plague- Elevate Kid..Your PUnches Were Bad, Dont Talk About Yourself YOu Gotta Diss Him..Wanna Talk Bout Yaself Go To The Cypher Forum..Flow Was Ok, Wordplay Wasnt, Vocab Was Weak, PUnches Missed...Creavitity Lacked, Nice Structure Tho
Flash- Ok verse, Punches Hit Every Now And Then, Flow Was Ehh, Could Be Better, Your Wordplay Was Decent, And Vocab You Lacked....Your Structure was Strechted = Bad Structure..Ok Verse..Cant Beat Any Member Of Arson Ill With That :mad:
Vote Flash
Hit THis Up
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117755
why do you have theory in ur post???
in all in ur verse
biter or recycler
either one u will be banned
bitch!
uppin for more votes....stop sleepin on battles people
hmmmmmm.....one-sided battle.....weakk battle 2..but sum lines had me rollin.....
flash takes this easily..
flash- work on structure...other than that....it waz good...i liked ya punches...flow was ok....but ur punches easily got this one for u.....i liked ya wordplay 2...it was okay...
u took this in every category...hands down...pretty weak battle tho..
plague-u need 2 ELEVATE kid...ur shit waz weak...punches were wak...but ya structure was better than flash's...datz da best from u...everytin else laked man...wat else can i say?......
vote- flash...easily taken...
flash- battle sum1 more elevated .....lol...:)
i love easy battles to vote on. lol. alright. obviously, flash had a little bit of everything and Plague had a little bit of nothing. got the rhymes, but thats about it. no one wants just words. put in punches that actually hit. comparisons between gospel music and heavy metal isn't an actual punch. lol. so as i said, flash takes this one for an overall better verse...
vote-Flash
peace