you kno the rules
no d/r
no crew
10lines
and you kno the rest
verse due 20min after chekin :shoot:
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you kno the rules
no d/r
no crew
10lines
and you kno the rest
verse due 20min after chekin :shoot:
chekk/////////////////////////////////////////////////////
I get an allergic reaction everytime that I tell a lie
Nigga, you ill, damnit!! I need ice for my swellin eyes!!!
You lines are like apples with teathmarks, you can't denie their bit
N' you couldn't get national exposer if you were jannet jackson's tit
Ya not in my league, couldn't get near my gold if you was a bandit
If opposites attract, then you and a good verse, are like the + and - on a magnet
run your mouth, that juss means you speakin for all queers
if the good die young than you're prolly twenty one.....in dog years
ya dicks like salt though, bitches take it wit a punch
i'm too lazy to drop a proper closer, so suck my dick
g/l
yea ok.............................
you really expect to win kickin that weak ass verse//
c'mon man really you should've let me go first//
ur punches is weak ....and ur style is familiar//
the reason you got swollen eyes is because my punches hit ya//
nigga you really a rookie....and how can you call me a queer knowin
u act like a pussy//u shouldnt of battled me dogg cus ur gonna fail//
nigga i spit tough bars like i eat jail cells//u can eat these shells if u wanna
get tough//uy can tell by my sig i aint scared to buss//and y should i even
waste my time//when i can just leave you in the back like bones and spines//
im gonna end it kno this clown was jokin//and if his flo was made of bones,
that shit'll be broken
ite this goes to the godfarther...
.i loved that punch about janet jackson dope,
lmfao..also he had a better strucutre and flow,
as just blaze had played concepts and fed abit,
of godfarthers verse wich i s newbish,
also the //// makes your verse look newbish you dissed,
but they wrnt personal or hard punches,
v-godfarther
plz both hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117483 god hit it even if you cant poll just feedbak........thx
flow...godfather...some of his lines were a little forced but just blaze had a lot more forced lines than him
punches...godfather...hit a lot harder and had mroe like the 'janet jackson tit' line, that was good
personals...just blaze...got it by just a little...ok personals but they were better
wordplay...godfather...had more and most were good...i liked that line by just blaze though...the one bout the 'broken bones'
multies...just blaze...not good multies but he had some while godfather didn't have any
vote...godfather...overall it was better with punches which i thought won it for him
hit up one of my battles plz and vote honestyl
plz make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&page=2&pp=15 thx alot.................
uppin
uppin 2
lol...weak battle...
JZ took this with better punches wordplay and just a better overall verse
as soon as i read the apple line in godfathers verse i stoped reading....No Hate Just a vote
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I think godfather dominated although it was a little more funny than personal, but I like funny. The only line i was feein from just baze was his last one, but I can't vote not enough posts so sorry just droppin an opinion.
ok now I change my mind about wanting to battle Godfather..he smoke the shit out of this battle his punchlines were very personal and he kept focused on the topic which was a diss.
Vote: grandfather....I don't wanna battle you no more
ok why not are u getting scare of me that just not like any emcee to back down
vote
Close this plz want more battless
voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
yoooooo
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tHATS LOOKS LIKE A KNOCKOUT
I think that Just Blaze took this one because of his punches, although his structure was bad he still got this one
its still a knockout guy
uppin
Godfather got this hands down.
Both came pretty weak! But,
Godfather actually had a decent
punch here and there.
The janet jackson one gave me a laugh.
Structure was pretty close, but again
Godfather had better! he only had 1
mistake, and justblaze had a few more.
Anyways.. i'm givin this to Godfather
Due to the point he had harder punches
And punches are what win battles. ya know!
V/Godfather(2)
very onesided....
Aiight...just blaze...i wasn't feelin' ur verse bro..ur punches flow and structure were all very basic...your wordplay was ok...but vocab was very elmentry.....5/10
Godfather2...yours was more complex..punches actulay hit and flow was ok...basic structure and wordplay but ur vocab was much beta..7/10
v/ godfather2....
next time poll vote hexen
Opener - Godfather
Flow - Godfather
Punches - Godfather (personals too)
Disses - Godfather
Closer - Godfather
OverallEnjoyment - Godfather
Godfather straight up ripped the kid...
the reason you got swollen eyes is because my punches hit ya
^^^What the fuck kinda of a line is that???^^^ it made me laugh it was simple and stupid... lol..
I loved godfathers line with the janet jackson tit part, nice punch...
Blazes concepts were all played, and his punches were weak... Godfather had nice concepts and his punches hit pretty hard... I wasnt sure what he was thinking wit the last line, but its kinda funny he used that and still won... lol.. Maybe that makes his verse that much better cause its witty and makes fun of him by saying, your not even worth waisting another punch over...
But anyways my vote goes to godfather...
V/Godfather
ok god some nice punches in there alot of ur verse made me laugh which is always a good sign and althur closer was crap ur opener was good
jus blaze had a good flow but that isnt what wins a battle his punchlines were mostly about guns which is annoying and not original
neither of u used personals but my vote goes to godfather
vs touch to gold
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117127
vs impendance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116219
but can i get a poll vote
Yo i think it goes like this -
punches- godfather 2 had sum real funny punches
personals- nice pesonals from godfather but none from just blaze
flow- godfather 2
structure- just blaze structure was weak, godfather 2 was strong
rhymes- godfather 2 had better rhymes
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh sorry i forgot my vote
vote goes to godfather 2
(explanation above^^)
Godfather had a gud flow with a gud wordplay, need more variation tho, your punches were also gud with nice multis, you need to work a bit on your personals, structure was aight, vocabulairy was aight................
Blaze: your flow was a little bit off cuz I didn't felt your rhymes, you had sum ok punches but they didn't came hard as godfather's, you also need to elevate on your personals cuz I hardly saw any, you had a ok structure, you also need to work on voc.
Vote: Godfather(2)