The Bible Code

The Bible Code

Introduction


A Genesis written 3000 years ago, by a being surpassing our existance
we all imagine him as GOD, however my perceptions put up a resistance
What is this heavenly creature - that writes these future predictions
with technology with mystical features, giving us futeristic visions
I belive they are evolved beings, who visited ancient generations
traveling the universe exploring, and using us as petrol stations...
writing our future in code,with machines that explore throught time
in theory its all possible,according to a unique mind of Albert Ainstain
we have existed for many centuries, our technology just started to evolve
from the mysteries of the universe to our creator so much more to solve...
however this code - cerries a curse which spells out the human extinction
terrorists, World powers and nuclear arms all causing tremendous friction
And when we face our dark hours, not far from now according to the source
earth will face Armageddon, "End of Days" coming from nuclear force...


The Bible Code (The Creator)

"The Distinction between past, present, and future is only an illusion
however persistant." - Albert Einstein , 1955

A code exists that writes out the human past to the future we await
Obviously written by an intelligent being , thats witnessed our fate
and if the future is foreseeing, than these creatures are way ahead
but why is it interfering - why does it care if we are dead...
Centuries ago before time was remebered - a mysterious code existed
from the first world war to Sep 11th all the details were listed
Who gave us this monument , was it GOD? as religion guides us to belive
or were we visited by extra terrestrials who decided to leave
with technology way beyond our imagination , left us a present
gave us an outsight into our future, their way of paying rent...
did they alter the universial pattern by showing us their face
Religion was born from these beings, it could soon end our race...

Braking The Code ( the secret book )

The Code was finaly cracked, by a Mathematician from the Isreali nation
filled with amazing fact, from the JFK murder to the computer creation
The world was shocked, as code clearly predicting the German Invasion
from the comet collision with Jupiter to the Rabin assasination
One fact stood out as the outstanding inscription that had the world shook
a mesage" Horror will be created , after the opening of the secret book"
as the statement stated , the secret book was opened by a computer
now like all hope's faded, casting a strong shadow over our future...

Apocalipse ( The End of Days)

"But thou, O Daniel, Shut up the words and seal the book until
time of the end" - Book of Daniel 12:4

Prophecy of great distruction, nuclear holocaust and more
the code states Apocalipse isn't coming, its already at the door
when we have the tools to understand, time of the end will follow
atomic mashrooms will grace the land, making the world hollow
Armageddon will emerge in the world, as good and evil collide
war will be followed by the devil, who will take us all in hes stride
The code predicts time will stand still, in less than a decade
and all the evil that we done , it shell be repaid....

Controlling Destiny

Is the code a prophesy , or just probabilities leaving us clues
maybe theres more than one path, and its up to us to choose
we have evolved to solve the math, now we must take conroll
if this was trully a gift, its only there to stop our fall
Perhaps these intergalatic travelers will return to visit again
to leave us with such gifts , they must know the potentional of our brain
But as the world evolves its nuclear arsenal, and terrorism brings pain
all the directrions we chose, seem to point to nuclear rain
but we must understand that we have evolved enough for extintion
and the next war will be the last, as a great mind said in its vision:

"I dont know what World War III will be fought with,
but i know World War IV will be fough with sticks and stones" -Albert Ainstine

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First of all, I want to watch how I comment on this piece. Overall, I think the rating is anywhere from a 7.6-8.5/10 rating... You really stayed on topic. Its nice to see writings from all aspects of life and not just another shoot em up type of piece. Very deep writing (in certain spots)

aight eki....i'll reply later...right now i cant concentrate on what
im reading...cuz of all the shit going on over here...i'll edit a reply
later...peace

Nice essay-like piece. I saw some repetition but overall you progressed well. Thought I saw some of a double rhyming scheme but it wasn't consistent - would like to see you do that. Flow and vocab were both alright. Original piece - that's a plus. Thought you picked some nice quotes too. I liked the one you ended with especially. Nice work again Eki. Keep writing.

upin 1 :)

upin 2...................................

This was pretty much hella tight from begining to end...The downfalls with a piece like this is it may come off as some kind of book report you know?...like your just stating a bunch of facts one after another.....but the things you were saying were deep as fuck....its hard to point out a specific line..but i really think that ""The world was shocked, as code clearly predicting the German Invasion
from the comet collision with Jupiter to the Rabin assasination"" was a good one....The lines were pretty stretched, but i think it is possible to this over the right music....if thats what this is intended for...otherwise this is a beautifully written essay

thought this was nice and original.... and had ome very deep aspects to it... which i liked... thought all the verses were pretty consistant... but i prefered the last verse, dunno why, jus did...lol.... but you really got alot into this... maybe cos of the length..lol... nah, jus alot in it.... well constructed.... the length put me off a bit, but ya didnt really fall anywhere.... all in all a solid read.... the only thing i aint keen on is the bible, co im a heathen..lmao...... tight read Ek'.... keep droppping em'....

uppin...................................

This is hands down my favourite open mic EVER... 9.9/10

It's so refreshing to see something new and original like this... I've never read anything like it and it kept my interest from beginning to end... I like the way you challenged popular belief and showed some great storytelling in the process.. you should do this audio... having quotes from Einstein throughout was very dope indeed...

As for vocabulary, this gets top marks... I liked the line about the atomic mushrooms... dope stuff... your storytelling ability is awesome, and you narrated the whole thing like you were some supreme being watching everything... the only downfall in the piece was the flow well off at some points, but its nothing compared to the good points...

I've read some of your other stuff and your fast becoming my favourite open-miker... if thats a word :D

good work!!

^^ cheers man :) from another wog

uppin..............

^^ drop a link :)

Deep dude. Do you like philosophy at all? I think about stuff like that all the time and it was nice to know that someone could drop a piece with it in mind. I give it an 8/10. I liked how you stayed on topic. Dope man.

This is a great open mic you have a really philosophical perspective on life and death continue to use lines like that in your battles and your sure to win them. Great meaning, deep and spiritual and yet still very powerful and gets straight to the point keep up open mics like this!! hope to read more of your stuff Eki good luck wif your open mics.

8.9 / 10

Oh Eki... if you were asking me to drop a link... im too lazy to find it, but if you want, you can check these out:

wogzta & FormulaMC - The Origins Of The Two

or the Instant Collab...

both feature me in it (lol) so there ya go... or you could save the favour for one of my upcoming solo open mics, up to you...

thanks for offering tho!!

ps. what did you mean by 'another wog'... I thought i was the only one!! :P

nah man :) am here to ..From Melbourne .... I already gave feedback for both of those...

damn what a nice drop .. really feelin it .. id say 10/10 ..

^ cool Eki... PM me with ur msn or something... lol

Stoppin uppin your shit ever five minutes! you are preventing other good materials(some terrible) from being viewed from the top.
Anywho,This was okay :), it's nowhere near "Perfect" as these clowns make it to be..
Your concept was a bit played out,but you managed to handel it well.
Your flow and wordplay was nice,but the shit just dragged on,I can see this being a wonderful decent length size verse.
I'm happy to see you progress :)
Keep up the good work :thumbup:
If you think I 'm "Hating" with this comment..well... Lmao...
I'll kill you :evilgrin:

real deep stuff. good overall..... the only thing wrong was the flow. when i read it it sounded like u were preaching instead of rappin. any 7.5/10 good stuff

it alright

I agree totally with Dev...

I started reading it, and i was caught from the 1st two lines.....

You did not use too much vocab, but u didnt use little of it...

I did not see allot of internals and multies...But that was substituted by everything ells...

All in all...Is was a great piece...

uppin for wogzta for a beat :)

Thats some real nice shit man. Very insightful, had a consistant flow to it, and you stayed on topic very well.. What i liked most was youre use of division to concentrate on different aspects of the topic. You presented your images well, and created a sense of atmosphere in the piece by starting off with a mention of the bible. And THEN emphasising what you meant, by adding in information about past wars, tragedies etc. Quoting helped too, as it allowed youre verse(s) to be understood even more so with an accompanying context.. Very dope drop, and my only beef with the piece is that it did sound a little like an essay.. But a dope drop nonetheless .

"Centuries ago before time was remebered - a mysterious code existed
from the first world war to Sep 11th all the details were listed"
^^ You told the story well.. and btw, Im just wonderin if this is true. or u just came up with this bible code idea...

Good job, and if u get the time peep my OM piece
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=126573

Thanks