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code-187 pop you up to 7th heaven i would beat you if i was only eleven.
not gonna try you a baby maybe i should finish you off now.
You see i aint trying so just lye down and start dieing.
If you take a look closely your ego is ..................... this big but your equipment is dis big ..
i give you punches you take them in the chest .
on rap battles you only a guest .
fuck off you a pest.
you taking tips of victoria secret really you just a idjit.
you aint having a grave you having a pit
Dont stand up just sit .
Im gonna be the one having the standing ovation . just remember i didnt try
U need to learn how to rap, while I was born with the nack
im Burning cats and its ur turn to get smacked
touch of golds only flow is the sperm in his sack
we had to adjourn because the dumb fuck posted in bitch slapped
u say u could beat me if u were only 11
but with a verse like that id say u were about 7
t.o.g's got less brains than a vegetable,
an after ive fried the iliterate fuck
hell know battling me is regretable
yall know who this, fuck t.o.g that wiggers neglegable
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Touch To Gold
You need to drastically improve, no real punches or flow. And I wont even mention your structure. Read more battles and find out the basics in W.E.C
Code-187
Not your best I've seen, punches were'nt that hard. Flow coulda been improved but you were more creative and you did enough to win easily...
v/ Code-187
Go and poll your vote on my battle....you forgot. Link in my sig
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yo ite this battle wasnt very good code did wat he had to,
in my opinion i thaught touch was wak here,
no punches watso eva that hit hard....wak flow,
shit strucutre and everythin seemd wak soz man,
but you gota elavte,.....code did it here,
not rly 2 many good punches but he did enuf,
also had alot better flow and strucutre.
make sure you hit this as oi took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...3&page=2&pp=15 thx alot........
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If you take a look closely your ego is ..................... this big but your equipment is dis big ..
I thought that was cool ^ Nothing great, but just a cool attempt at a line at least. IMO Code didnt have a flow, flow was off, lines were too short to get any real content and he had no reeal concepts or punchlines
Vote - Touch To Gold
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come on VOTE
leave battle links and ill get back atcha with honest opinions
yo homie...this was an aiight battle cuz it was sorta to 1 side...t.o.g- didnt have much of a flow n not ne real punches, 187- had a nice flow, nice punch, n creativeness.....overall i say 187 won this battle
vote-code 187
n if u got time hit this up n vote..my 1st battle-http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=118059
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aight ....this was an okay battle...touch of gold didnt have any good punches or flow...but 187 had better punches and pretty mucha better flow
vote- code 187
This has 2 go 2 code 187, he had the better flow,punches and everything else,
Vote= code 187
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Code-187 you took this one with better punches and they were hittin alot harder..
Touch it seemed as if you were goin for multies more than punches which you should of gone more for punches and personals....
overall it was an aiight battle seen both do alot better bu no one can be perfect in every battle......
\/0te.....Code-187...........
Upp this battle ya'll........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...65&page=1&pp=15
Gud Battle
Flow/I felt that code had a better flow b/c he had sum nice rhymes in their with a lot of variation and a gud wordplay, I didn't felt a gud flow with gold
punchlines: They both had sum great punches but I thought that the punches from code just came harder, gold also had sum gud punches but he hadn't such as code
personals: gold had gud personals while code just tried to have personals, gold you just need to work on your punches, code, you must work on your personals
structure/ They both had a gud structure goin on so..
Originality/ code was more original than gold cuz he had sum nice lines in there and gold had to many lines which were played
Overall vote: code 187
code 187 had this one his hits were harder and his flow was miles better, the other guys flow and structure was non exsistant.
187 had some ok wordplay so I vote for him....
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Touch of gold come on man you really need some help yo ur whole verse was played i mean u can do better than that and all the spaces in ur verse why that made me say fuck this verse its shit in structure and punchlines and and personals i realy think u bit from someone that was weak lmao
Code You had a ok verse here u can improve some like when you try to use personals try making it a lil bit more better you know but one more thing work on ur punches some was weak and i wasn't feeling them.
V/ Code
return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117633
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121451 return th favor
I'm not even going to do the category breakdown cause code got in every section except wackness....
Gold - Your verse had a wack rhyme scheme, wack punches, and wack everything else... Bo hate intended here just being honest.. You need major improvement.. Nothing was hard hittin.. You want to hurt his feelings, and have people be going like damn, that was sick.. na mean? I just wasn't feeling your verse.. Go to wackness Emergency center and get some help then come back and battle..
Code - Your verse wasn't anything special, but why waiste good material on a weak verse like that.. Your punches at least hit.. and your structure was good, flow was good.. You took this battle with ease.. Even though your verse wasn't that great..
That was your best line, and it was pretty decent, a little bit played but decent.. That line alone could have won this battle..Quote:
Originally Posted by code-187
My vote goes to code because his verse was constructed much better, and he had some ok punches.. Gold didnt have anything, except a wack verse.. good battle code.. Just make sure you come harder against the next person..
v/ code-187
Peace.
Touch to gold, your verse was whack. You punches didn't hit hard at all. You used too many short obvious replies to lines.
Code this wasn't too good either, but you did enough to beat him. Your flow and structure was better and you hit harder than he did.
Vote - Code
P.S 'you taking tips of victoria secret' that's bitten off x's verse on 8 mile
Vote honestly on my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117125
touch of gold you were quite played out, and punches nor personals hit very hard. You should work on your vocabulary. Read a book with a dictionary at hand than come back 2 rap battles and see your improvement. Check yourself and polish your skills homey.
code 187 your flow and punches came much stronger than t.o.g's did, but I expected a heavier murking for such an opponent as t.o.g. Your structure was clean and I liked your rhyme style! Vocab was good too! Personals hit'em up. All around better performance by code 187.
Vote/ code-187