no limit to number of lines(MUST BE ABOVE OR 10 AT LEAST)
no recycling
no feeding
no biting
no crew or d/r votes
1 hour to think of a verse
agree to deez terms and check in............good luck....
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no limit to number of lines(MUST BE ABOVE OR 10 AT LEAST)
no recycling
no feeding
no biting
no crew or d/r votes
1 hour to think of a verse
agree to deez terms and check in............good luck....
Chizzeck
should be done in a bit....good lukk
vane is already competing against being non par....futile repetitions carries him far?
cranes and solar flares couldn't help him drop hot bars...sealing rhymes in jelly jars?
doctors can't fix his emotional and mental scars...tearing him limb from limb all apart
V's rap far off like pluto and universal stars...hitting him as bullseye targets with darts
i'm a pan out da 300 degree oven, non tangible by hands....hoe should of been banned
nigga's getting washed out like tide been used on my pants...frightened to go but ran
red ink ain't da only shit flowing through bleeding lines...while immobilizing his spine
da paraplegic posted on blocks with hov-a-round signs...only paralyzed pussy in time
vane spell your ass with an I without da e pimpin....ya watch died and life ain't tickin
nigga in RB worst legends naked and limpin....for da hits I was hitting and bars strippin
yo yo yo.......
*stops the waitin*
we be debatin, will vane have ye out of breath like lung displacement?//
and a-k can't handle the heat on his body like eskimo's on vacation//
ask-a-vet.. vane'll have ye bars closed down like fuckin alkatraz//
'A' couldn't come first if we was rappin to the alphabet//
rappers flee, perminantly see cos i got ki's (key's) that a dope//
typin ish up, an you always cummin after I like the letter O//(keyboard)
its simple and plain, i got vanes that'll touch the vain on ye nekk//
am playin with-a-tech, in this race am number one like lanes on the left//*
come to this battle on the school bus, am brutul, according to survivers//
vane'll have you hittin more barriers than blind formula one drivers//
have you in the dumpster, pull out a four and bust at bins//
count my wins... another 'match' that ive ended like a gust of wind//**
*race track...lane one is on the left, 2 second to left..and so on
**just incase you didnt understand this is a match as in one you light...
my bad i went to get sumpin to eat half way through
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uppin.... if you want feedbakk vote, juss drop a link
Nice battle but quite hard to decide. I think vane just got the better of ak. Vane had smooth punches that i enjoyed reading, i think ak had nice punches but didnt seem to be hard hitting like vanes. Ak just needed a better flow cos i couldnt get to grips with it. Both had nice multis.
vote = vane
Nice i got to agree with slayer vane came harder in this battle maybe it was an off day for ak but this battle was not hiting on much u know but i can say that vane have this battle hands down
flow,wordplay,mutis, meta4s, punches, structure = vane
personals, cravtivy not much, vocab = Ak
Overall=ak
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i thank you for the votes, will repay when i have time -- hold me to it
2-0 uppin
lol ok then 1-0.. blah im not really bothered about votes though, nice battle A-k, keep elevatin
here it is
Metaphores:both
punchlines:vane
structure:vane
flavor:both
overall:vane
best line
v/vaneQuote:
come to this battle on the school bus, am brutul, according to survivers//
vane'll have you hittin more barriers than blind formula one drivers//
lol i agree^^^ ak im not frontin but u did have a tight verse but ya vocab and structure was so simple from my point of view while you were spitin lil simple rythmes vane was usein killa vocab against you he also had way better punches but ak your verse was full of multis which ended in streched lines i wasnt feelin dat
vote/vane
plz return the favor in my battle against Diverged
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^^^^^^^well..........i know i lost......dis time i couldn't think of anything.....so.....big deal....plus dis da first time I ate and put off my rhymes when da thread was started......all in all no matter what I agree i lost......it'll jus make me better in future battles.......thanks for da input......anyways
Punches: Vain
Metas: Vain
Creativity: Mixa
Flow: Vain
Structure: Vain
Vote: Vain
Vain had 2 punches i liked, the eskimos won it for him
please hit this up honestly u too,k sorry i cant poll eh, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117412
damn, i can see this battles been on here for a while.
well vote goes to AK
reasons:
Ak- u had a good verse mayne. I liked the flow, easily red, and the structure and punches were all good as well. Both verses were actually pretty good. U came better with the personals and u had more of them.
vane- good verse as well. U had a well structured verse. I like the flow as well. every thing else was either average or alittle below. U didnt have it in this battle this time. Lines seemed alittle stretch. Its weird, Ak looks like he had some long ass lines, but they didnt sound stretch, on the other hand urs did, and ur lines were shorter, but wutever.
Vote-AK
but good battle to both
Ak- u had a good verse mayne. I liked the flow, easily red, and the structure and punches were all good as well. Both verses were actually pretty good. U came better with the personals and u had more of them.
vane- good verse as well. U had a well structured verse. I like the flow as well. every thing else was either average or alittle below. U didnt have it in this battle this time. Lines seemed alittle stretch. Its weird, Ak looks like he had some long ass lines, but they didnt sound stretch, on the other hand urs did, and ur lines were shorter, but wutever. had to agree with everybody
Vote-AK
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122858
yah i agree, ak did come better
xplinations
vane- u had a good verse, i dunnno y but i swear the eskimo thing is played to me for some reason,neway, you had good punches andyou flow was good too
simple vocab even tho the battles are based on punches n metas. nice metas
ak- you basrely came ahaedn in this, almost every line was a meta, and they fit well together too, good punches, a little over with vocab, a little, but i think battles are based on punches as i sed,
flow was consistent, lines matched up perfectly almost
nice battle to the both of you tho
peace
shit, did i put a poll vote in the wrong one, haha wow imma dumbass, i admit it, if i did, can a mod change that to ak's side thanx
Fixed.-ILLunatic
This battle was aigt, but...
ak-mixa: I liked your metas, first off. Some of them didn't hit hard enough, however. Besides that, work on ur structure and don't stretch ur bars like I used to do. Better structure=better flow, usually. Keep elevatin'.
vane: U had a strong effort and better structure. Besides that, ur punches didn't hit harder and you weren't creative enough. But keep up the effort and check out ur opponents profile and previous battles for good personals. Keep elevatin'.
Vote: ak mixa
*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*
My Assessment
ak-mixa: decent spit i felt you were laying it out like a templete as if punch,personal,meta,punch.personal etc. not trying to blend it in properly with a meta punch or personals with wordplay but anyway still decent for wat you had it was good keep at it and youll elevate fast.
vane: man you had a few goodies but then you kinda lost me plus dunt put explanations for your punches if ppl dunt get em then its not worth writeing so dunt explain unless its pronounciation thats different overall flow , structure were aight just work on personals and punches.
Overall: both were just below average not wack but still nothing special was produced but both need to keep at this and elevation will come easily.
My VOTE: ak-mixa
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id say ak got it but her shit was long as bars
other cat seemed to lack a lot of shit that ak
seemed to bring more of like better punches
and good vocab so blah vote/ak mixa for hitting
harder and man fix yur struc and both elavate
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punches goes to ak mixa i felt they landed better and worked
more effectivly as for vane had weak punches and needs to work on em
personals id say also this goes to ak mixa i felt he got him person
wise on a more direct level, as for vane attempted but didnt connect well
wordplay both had ok wordplay slightly in favor of ak mixa but ak mixa
had fucked up struc which his flow could of beem much better in a sense
structure id say this goes to vane eventhough his struc didnt help
much with his flow but it was better in a sense of mind, work on struc though
multis both were tie on this but ak mixas multis were a little more understandable as for vane sorta lost track of the battle at hand so it effected
injoyment didnt really like neither but ak mixas was more injoyable and
overall nice battle but ak mixa won this due to punches, personals and flow
vote/ak mixa
vote on my battles
whats the score? this guy above dont even know what wordplay is... nice battle anyway whatever the score is
damn no edit, and somebody at he top odf this pafe just c&p a vote....
Good battle in alll...I liked each persons for different reasons though. Vane took tha punches on this one but mixa used better Creativity which keeps me interested..Both coulda took this one but I think Mixa has it because his was easier to read and kept me in depth morre.. V/a Mixa
This was an OK Battle...
Ak came with a lot of multis but his punches were mediocre. He lacked in personals and his stretched lines made it hard for his verse to flow. If you shorten your lines and concentrate more on punches than multi's, you might get a better reaction from voters.
Vane had a few good punches but nothing special. He didn't have that many personals and the ones he had weren't that good. His verse flowed ok but a few spots were off a little. His wordplay was OK but I think this is where he was the strongest. You were pretty good in this battle, I just think it would have been a little better if you connected with a few personals......
Vote - Vane
Ak you came in with solid structure. Your flow was pretty hype but you fell off sometimes because you dragged it on, couple of lines. . .You have good delivery. You had good punches that were delivering well. Personals were there but weren't hitting as hard as the punches. Vocab was good. Creativity was decent too. Good verse!
Vane you were pretty dope aswell. You had tight metas and pretty hype similies too! Your flow was crisp. The verse was structured well. Only thing I noticed was that your personals weren't really present. What the deal? You had good multis and your wordplay stood out! Diction was alright. Truthfully I liked the 1st half of it better, but all in all a tight verse!
Props 2 both good battle
Vote - Vane
Grimey battle
ok ak mixa got this...
he had better punches as well as some ok personals, while vane focused n wordplay and his punches didnt hit him. Flow was good from both but structure goes to vane. But battles arent won by structure , they are won by punches. AK beat him in punches and thats why he won thsi batttle...goo job thoiugh
v/ak
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flow-Vane
wordplay- Vane
mutis- AK
meta4s- Vane
punches- Vane
personals- Vane
creavtivy- Vane
vocab - Vane
Overall my vote goes to Vane. A couple new concepts in his rap and some alright flow... Good battle overall
we be debatin, will vane have ye out of breath like lung displacement?//
and a-k can't handle the heat on his body like eskimo's on vacation//
ask-a-vet.. vane'll have ye bars closed down like fuckin alkatraz//
'A' couldn't come first if we was rappin to the alphabet//
LMAO~
I think Vane hit harder with his punches and had good wordplays...
AK had nice structure and storytelling, but not as good punches...
Vote - VAne
Vane is disqualifed for posting in this thread 6 times after the verse were in.
And as you all should kno, each post after verses are concidered up's.
And you are only allowed 5 up's per battle, so ak mixa wins by disqualification.