iight dawg its set tha rulez iz
10 barz max
no crew votes
no d/r votes no hate votes
no recycleing
no prewriting
3-0 = KO
4-0 = TKO
spit 30 min after check in
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iight dawg its set tha rulez iz
10 barz max
no crew votes
no d/r votes no hate votes
no recycleing
no prewriting
3-0 = KO
4-0 = TKO
spit 30 min after check in
hey this is not a check i was gone for a while i need to finish a battle
iight dawg w/e check in when ur " done " ( dis aint my checkin)
hey I need some votes on my battle so if ya'll vote on mine i'll vote on ya'lls
yo just to let you kno ur breakin da rules but its iight i will
yo its closed i couldnt vote but yo u took it all the way
checkin in cuz dis boy hasnt n hes scared of me....
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
in the 8th line it was soposed 2 be and not aint
i spit early cuz i gotta go pz
YO ya shit is pretty good but wtf y hasnt tilleyedie checked in and spit you should put 4 a no show pz
fuck that ive been busy my dad needed help making a new room
ill spit.. CHECK!
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
YOzLyricalKilla
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
^^^^ok opener and ok personal.....^^^^^^
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
^^^^^^ha ha @ that line good personal but not on flow that good^^^^
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
^^^^^^^^^^Weak Very Weak^^^^^^^^^^^^^
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
^^^^^^lol @ that line good punch personal and vocab^^^^^^^
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
^^^^^^^ok closer^^^^^^^^^^
Overall- 9/10
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TillEyeDie
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
^^^^^ok personal but you this line is blah^^^^^^^^
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
^^^^^^^ha ha @ this line this is sort of gay bad!!!^^^^^^^^^^^
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
^^^^^^weak personal no punch^^^^^
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
^^^^^nice line good personal ok punch^^^^^^
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
^^^^^^bad closer not a hard hitting punch niether
Overall-5/10
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my vote goes to YO because he got at TillEyeDie alot more he had harder hitting punches better flow structure was better and easier to read he also had funnyness aswell which i like alot he had a good opener and he had a few multis and he had alot more personals that killed TillEyeDie....yea so if i could poll vote i would vote for YOzLyricalKilla but dont worry this vote still counts....pz
thanx 2XL thanx 4 the honest vote and explaination yea i kno it counts dawg dont worry thats 1-0........... uppinx2
uppin x2.....come on dont sleep on dis bitch
flow...both...decent flow from both...tied in this category
punches...both...decent punches from both...some not that good...but i liked the 'no eyebrows' line and the closer was decent from yo...and the 'hug' line was decent from diverged
personals...both...not very good personals...bad from both so it was a tie
wordplay...n/a...i didn't see any at all i think
multies...n/a/both...either one i don't mind
vote...yo...overall his was better as it was more advanced while divers was more basic
hit up the battles in my sig plz
structure-diverged
flow-YOz
personals-YOz, you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son// i liked that
punches-Yoz
opener-YOz
closer-YOz
my vote goes to Yozlyricalkilla bc his verse was all around better than diverged
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
aight thanx Sik and Mouse 4 the honest vote thats 3-0 youve just been KOed and lyrically killed by me like i said in the call out now lets get some more votes so i can TKO him
what a dumbfuck.. are you on crack.. or wer you borned addicted??.. jeez you suck my shit took bout 5 minutes.. your shit took what a day and a half??
Overall: -Yoz- I felt personally that YOZ won this one. His punches just hit and made the battle a winner. I felt that Diverged was so concentrated on swinging at the verse of YOZ he just blew it. Throw better punches at him. Don’t throw punches at his verse. Throw them at him.
Flow/Structure: -Diverged- Your flow and structure was a bit better than Yoz. You kept constant with you were trying to say and it made a better structure for me to keep up with. Yoz, you had time to fix up your structure a bit but you lacked on that.
Personals: -TIE- I’m not sure really. Yoz the whole asian thing is pretty played out, you needed to swing at him somewhere else, and Diverged, you concentrated too much on what he said rather than just finishing him up. So you cancelled each other out and this was a tie.
Punches: -YOZ- Yoz you had some dope punches. They swung at him, and probably made him think about his verse before he dropped it. But as I said before Diverge you need to punch right at the guy. Don’t punch at his verse.
Good Battle.
appreciated.. but umm.. to let yall no something.. HE DIDNT PUNCH...
yoz, your verse was garabge
you had stretched ass lines
you had elementry flow
you need to step up yo vocab
you didnt have no personals
your punches was weak as hell
you had aby disses, you need to elevate
i will give your verse a 5/10
till/diverge
your punches was weak also, bbut towards
the end of your verse you started to step
up your game and that is what shifted the battle
into your favor, your flow and structure was
not stretched either, and your verse and vocab
wasnt as elementry as yoz
so, my vote goes to Tilleyedie/diverge
ok thats still 4-0 cuz u voted after Kyto thats a TKO but u got one vote so ima keep on thanx 4 tha honest votes ppl
Damn both ya'll were weak, I think tileyedie took it barely.
Yo started off rhyme spit, hit, kit, then spit again wtf? but i liked the writtin kit part it just needed to be worked better.
Yo rhymed gangsta twice then son and won, then when back to spit????/ dam dog
Die what was up with the pretty - baby thug thing? that was weak but the rest was aight. I give it to Die cuz of his punches were better.
lmao Waz....
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n SPIT, is it because none of ya punch lines eva HIT//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing KIT, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 SPIT//
^^^^^^Dawg come on dats a multi lol be real 4-2 uppin im killin dis cat
Rules State ... 3-0 = KO ... 4-0 = TKO ...
It Got Up To 4-0 .. So YozKilla Wins This ...
Mod's Fuckin' Suck On This Site .. They Don't Do There Jobs ... Shit's Worthless ..
WILL A MOD CLOSE THIS ... SHIT!
thank you god but still lets get some votes untill dis shit closes
Killas rhyme:: ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
ok opener but coulda been better , try to throw in multis then jsut using the ol spit, hit,shit,clit rhymes or w/e
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
UM what does shaksta mean really??? and try to make it easier to read and understand, but ok
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
This is pertty played bah but it still flowed pretty good
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
I like how you tried personals witht eh asian thing and this was one of your betters couplets(?)
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
_once again you used the spit shit stuff but still it was okkkkkkkk
Tills rhyme::
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
OK opener but the fate things is pretty played
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
This was hard to understand at first but it madew me laugh so it was good
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
OK you help your father thats awesome but thats doesnt make any sense so whatever you were getting at i missed the bus, if not for the hard to understandeness of it probably would have hit harder
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
pretty weak, you already called him a baby so shoulda come up with some something a little better
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
OK very poor closer , starwars=no way to make it good, you also said force 3 times and it really lefta bad taste in my brain
overall it was pretty close but my vote is going to lyricle because he was more consistent and orginal, tills best line(the hug one) was better than any of lyricles but was overshadowed by his other rhymes
vote:killa
plz return and vote honestly on my battle in my sig and also i have a batlle against alcatrakz(yeah hes a vet) at the top of front lines so vote on that even if aginst me
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thanx dawg i voted in the one in front lines ill hit the rest up tho come on this should be closed dats 5-2
umm your a dumbass its not over till the poll closes unless you poll vote the fucking votes dont count.. what a loser
lol w/e dawg any wayz poll or no poll i TKOed you pz
its 1-2.. .. learn how to actually battle.. my vote was from a RESPECTED person thats about to have a crew.. none of the ppl that voted for u had 400+ posts
no offence to yoz lyrical killer.....but ur shyt here waz garbage dawg....no hate
ayo dawg y havent u checked in n spit, is it because none of ya punch lines eva hit//
afta you read dis y dont you take out ya writing kit, and listen 2 the reponses and learn 2 spit//
wtf.....
ive seen ya pic dawg u a wing asain wit no eyebrows and tried 2 look gangsta//
lol dawg you aint Jin you aint gangsta final dont fuck wit me cuz im a shaksta//
2nd line is saddd
you lost more battles then youve won //
so what makes you think you winnin against me son//
wak....a 1st grada culd think of better...
that asain pride shit needs ta change cuz ua name is till I die//
aint i jus bernt you u herb and left like you were eletricfied//
ite.....decent...nice werdplay
im done wit dis cat i aint even tryin spit//
i didnt even do well and im positive ive won dis shit//
simple...
overall....4/10...verse waz 2222 simple...childish
u suck.. damn.. u shouldnt spit early nor fucking late
this bitch iz from yonkers.. but yet tilley holds ya fate
better opener dan hiz...
this bitch got originality.. hes a pretty, and baby Thug
Yeah hes Pretty babyish to be a thug.. so poor baby ya need a hug?
wakkk
Fuck thati dont babby sit! i aint ya bitch nor ya mother soo why bother
This Bitch Get His Panties In A Knot.. Because I Help My Father
wak....
He's Brave 14 and He Wanna Step Up A Couple Of Years
Fuck It I Hit Hard In The Head.. Now Hes A Baby.. Wiping Tears
ok....2nd line killed it
He It Dont Matter That I Force Rhymes.. Cuz I Force You
It Dont Matter.. I Force This Win.. Still My Name Aint Luke!
__________________nicee closer....good...this got u da win
total- 5/6 outta 10....
WEAK battle...both liked like u didnt even try.....both of yall told me 2 hit up this battle...so this aint a d/r,.....but both need 2 elevate some.......1..no hate
lol D dawg it dont matta bout 400+ they voted and dats all dat mattas LA thanx 4 the honest vote its coo dawg i wont take it personal