will a peer vs. se7en

u spit first
no c/h/dr votes

10 lines, dropping in a few minutes........................................... ...................

(verse)

Ayo,

In every battle there’s a loser, but he has to be a wackness abuser
Cause the only time he could be the shit, is if he’s in a pooper scooper
Juss call me the doc, this herb cock, isn’t close to being hot
How can I tell???............cause he has no avatar that he can rock
Will a peer, peer upon the wack verse he’ll put up after I drop mine
He’ll probably go back on E-Bay, so he can purchase more rhymes
Property of wack Mcs, is the title, this guy holds close to his nuts
So every time people say how good are you, he looks down in disgust
Enough murdering Mcs like this kid, shit I’m be his new demon
I’ll give him a ladder, a rope, and a new brain, so we can call it even

*(lol, I love the ending)

*no biting and drop ya verse soon within 30 minutes, I juss keyed this up*

better have a backup cause u gon wanna quit
wait u do u sit on the corner & sell chiclets
check the facts cause u guessed the wrong sex
dumbass wrote a hot check 2 buy a fake rolex
this kid fake he got his whole verse off of raplyrics.com
do u work 4 saddam cause u killin urself with ur own bomb
if ur sigs 4 real then what happened to ur free time
because that shit sure as hell wasnt an ill rhyme
fuck it whatever that verse was keyed rally fast
it doesnt matter though at least urs was surpassed

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seven won this battle for sure even thogh both of you played on the whole taking your lyrics froma website which is not good.
will-a-peer you shoulda dropeed pucnhes instead of just rhyming i mean who cares if he bought a rolex??not me
seven your structure though i could feel it was a little off
but you had better punches than he did and overall came harder

vote:seven

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aight.


Multies:7
Personal’s:none
Punches:7
Flow:7
Eye Opener’s:none
Vocab & Complexity:7
POLL Vote___7

this battle was one sided in my opinion. I liked 7's verse
in the beggining and End, but the Middle was Choppy.
He had much better lyrical Punches, which WILLAPEER..
you need to learn. go with more personal's and make the
punches somewhat funny to read, it will keep the reader
interested. aight. just a little advice. :thumbup:

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MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.

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Se7en took this pretty easy..He came with some goos punches and metas...I thought Will a peers verse was wasy too played and simplistic....Too many played lines such as sex jokes...and too much filler.
Se7en had a few nice lines...nothing really standout..but more than enough to take this battle..opener and closer were good..mid was decent too
Overall vote=Se7en

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will a peer, ur verse jus seemed lazy an u didn't have anything that stood out. Ur worst line of the battle was:
fuck it whatever that verse was keyed rally fast
it doesnt matter though at least urs was surpassed
This was a bad closer

Seven,
Ur flow was better an it seemd to have been put together better.
In every battle there’s a loser, but he has to be a wackness abuser
Cause the only time he could be the shit, is if he’s in a pooper scooper
This was a good opener
vote=seven.

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Se7en came wiv some personals.. an they were used to make fairly effective punches.. will a peer was jus generally dissin an while thas not particularly clever in itself ya didnt even drop a single original hard hittin or witty punch..

no quotables an not much creativity used but Se7en did the job.

VoTe = Se7en

Drop a vote on my battle wiv Eki in Elevated.

Se7en has sum nice personals while will a peer had sum played personals and also played punches which didnt' came so hard as Se7en; Se7en also had a nice flow goin on and had a betta structure; Will a peer you need to work on your personals and direct punches, your flow was aight, but you need to be more original

v/Se7en(I don't have enough vote but when I do I'm gonna poll this aight; just take a peep at my battles in my sig, aight, peace out

can yall point out his personals cause he doesnt have any

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Se7en took this 1 pretty easy wit a all round better verse which included a gd structure nice punches which hit hard at times but sum were played or missed ..........will a peer u really need 2 elevate ya verse man go check out the wackness emergency centre or summat as ur rhyme had an ight structure but your punches and dat were very weak and there is plenty of room 4 improvement.......so in this 1 ma vote has 2 go 2 se7en as he came a whole lot harder