Yaaa-Boi vs Daffer22

20lines max
usual rules
I spit 1st

gud luck man

checkin in....

ight checkin go when u ready ,.

I've battled insane mothafuckaz like you before and come through easy
My verses throw u around like a roller coaster and make u feel queasy
Don't you say I don't know a punch line cuz ur insults are painless and measly
So don't u be thinking u can get away from me bcoz u won a battle by zero to a bias three, this is me,
I'm not gonna be beaten by some knob from GAY land
Tear ur insides apart, would u still be gay if I replaced your sex gland?
You've been jacking off your boyfriend don't offer to shake my hand
I'll drown u in your countries quicksand
Poll results came through - u got no friends, bitches like you got the world's highest suicide rate (trust me) so this is your end, I cause injuries that hospitals can't mend, don't even try and defend
That’s right I am already in history cuz I'm wanted for killing all fake mc's
Your verses just slip away like grease
Perhaps I should mention your mum she puts the o in obese
One, two, three, four, five .... 100, I just counted your mums chins
Fat bitch looks like her face has 20 Siamese twins
There’s a place to put your raps and its a better trash disposer than the bin
I'll wipe away your fake grin and I give this verse a little spin
Think you ever gonna win? Plz stop using Henn, cuz it's fuckin you up man

your turn, gud luck man...........................

man i think its about right u take a litte time//
just sit right there, take some notes and name ur paper 'Learnin to Ryme'//
cuz in this class with me ull learn all u need to know//
how u ganna tell me "Man, you better show"//
son im the teacher, ur gettin schooled ho//
Daffer22? man really, who the fuck u think u is//
i guess will see after Boi's quiz//
Man im the one that gave u the 22 on ur name//
cuz u didnt pass my test so here som advise, work on ya brain//
How u ganna say 'Who the fuck wants some, dont be scared//
fight me, come out blacked eyed, vision impaired//
this battle is over, the war is over u wantin declaired//
like when ur pastor was fuckin ur mom, and u found out, still no one cared//
Peace of cake, bitch start prayin//
skill with the desert eagle leave ur bitch ass layin//
on the bead, face down... dont u realize at the party//
ur not the kid, or the one laughin, ur the clown//
never learned to swim, so u wer jus left to drown
Lesson 101 to Boi's school of rythim and rymes//
schools out bitch, roll over and die//

peace

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upppin for the 5-6 time shit i dont know but just vote and ill return the favor

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ok plz vote this is the 11 uppin com on guys drop som feedback

Yaaa-Boi you have upped this too many times man, you should be DQ, but hey I'm not in to that shit so here's my first upping (1) (leave links, return the favour)

^^^YOU FORGOT TO POLL VOTE IN MY OTHER BATTLES. YOU HAVE MORE THEN 100 POSTS..PLEASE. POLL THE SHIT INSTEAD OF DROPPING A MEANINGLESS VOTE. THANKS. IT WOULD BE APPRECIATED. ON GAME KID.

anyway. I hate the fact that YaaBoi Upped this 846264169417643018 times.
it get's Kinda Annoying. Do what I do. Drop Votes For Other People and Put
your Link in there. I hate people who dont appreciate your Votes. You spend time
voting and Annalyizng there battle then droppin a Vote and they Dont return
the Honest Vote back. It get's Annoying.
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here it is.

Multies:Tie
Personal’s:tie
Punches:daffer
Flow:daffer
Eye Opener’s:none
Vocab & Complexity:daffer
POLL Vote___daffer


YaBoi, i think you have alotta Potential, you just didnt Type your Best Today.
your flow was aight, but the bars weren't equal, but some of your punches
were good. i like your first 2 or 3 lines, then you seemed to fall off focus..
alotta people do that here..even me. daffer. your verse here was better then the Other Battle i peeped of yours. Your Punches connected Much better and Flowed better...

RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.

Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148

Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468

Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532

Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900

uppinnggg votessss (2) Don't sleep on this (return the favour, leave links)

uppiinnnggg vootteeesss (3) Don't sleep on this........

man uppingg this thing for the 4th time, don't sleep on this

upppiiinnnggg vvooootteeessss (DON'T SLEEP ON THIS)

come on ppl.......................................

AYO CALM DOWN HERR'S A VOTE
FAV LINE FROM DAS:

Quote:

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So don't u be thinking u can get away from me bcoz u won a battle by zero to a bias three, this is me,
I'm not gonna be beaten by some knob from GAY land
Tear ur insides apart, would u still be gay if I replaced your sex gland?

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fav line from yaaii:

Quote:

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Daffer22? man really, who the fuck u think u is//
i guess will see after Boi's quiz//
Man im the one that gave u the 22 on ur name//
cuz u didnt pass my test so here som advise, work on ya brain//

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breakdown:
structure:boi
multies:das
flow:boi
v/yaa-boi
he came harder adn better flow and strucuure than das
and das i barley knew when your lines ended damn

Daffer22........you didn't have too much structure and your punchlines weren't even there. You could use a little work

Boii............your shit wasn't that goo either but you had more structure, more of a flow. You fell off at times but you had better punchlines

Vote:Yaaa Boi

not bad from both.

Daffer- ur lines were stretched. your punches didn't really connect. i didn't like your style. your vocab was decent. and ur flow was a little off. ur metas were a bit weak too. work on that. 5/10

Yaa-Boi- ur lines were a bit less stretched but your flow was better. ur punches were decent and ur style wasn't bad. the vocab was good, and you had sum nice metas. decent drop right there. 7.5/10

vote- Yaa-boi

hit this up in return plz: 'Urban Reelist vs Me'
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112882

^ a few more too close.

pz

let me review

Metaphores:boi
Stuctures:boi
punchlines:boi
flavor:boi
overall:boi
fav line:this battle is over, the war is over u wantin declaired//
like when ur pastor was fuckin ur mom, and u found out, still no one cared/

v/Boi

Damn, so many uppins, it's blinding...

Daffer: Ur banned, enough said.

Yaa-Boi: Ur verse was aight. I've seen better from you, but you hold a good standard generally. Your punches need to be more personal, but your metas were good.

Vote: Yaa-Boi

*Vote on my battles and I'll surely return the favor.*

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic

Wow. Yaaa-Boi is a fucking loser. He's being DQ'ed against someone banned for UPPIN too god damn many times.