ite man,
10 lines,
spit within 25 mins most,
normal shit.good luck.........
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ite man,
10 lines,
spit within 25 mins most,
normal shit.good luck.........
checking in............................................yey yey............
ite easy merk but fuck it,
little faggot..this sites for talent..you'll never get by,
got a wasp on his jumper...and thaught he was fly,
even when i was a newb i never came as weak as this herb,
cause even if i get 5 vote and he gets none.....
......................hes still getting more credit than he deserves,
my rap style is perfect..face it prick you ent worth it..now feel my affect,
even when your spelling is rite..spell check still says its incorrect,
i hate it when little newbs come on the site..and think they run the boards,
but you huh ive seen iller people in empty hospital wards,
i come explitic....i ent clean my hate bars come filthy,
the judge has reached his verdict..has the opponent lost?...
........................definatly GUILTY
.......................................
ok ok its on
Ya lyrics are weak and useless like blunted swords,
Ya like silent turntables mute and speachless, showing no record.
Your starting ya death early... only 16 years old,
which reflects that ya skill aint gnarley I'll beat ya full fold.
I was told your tone deaf with one ear like Vincent,
Potato heads I'll mash ya whole crew in an instant.
You've lost, your locked down, get used to packing fudge,
Bitch i'll put you down cuz im the one and only judge.
I got ya now, running scared in disbelief,
and I caught ya guilty, red handed, lying about ya speech.
uppin 1................................................. ....
uppin 2................................................. .........
1st..............................yey yey...............
Over all this was a one sided battle...the judge came with wittier punches even if one or two were played...but still more consitant with more complex ideas.
Guilty came pretty good for a newb...some good lines just not enough for the win...but good job...
Vote TJ
I'll edit this with a link for you'z to hit up...thanks
Won't let me edit...sorry for the Free post
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113714
already done my man............................2nd................ ...thx
Punches Structure Flow etc all went to The Judge
""i come explitic....i ent clean my hate bars come filthy,
the judge has reached his verdict..has the opponent lost?...
........................definatly GUILTY"" execlent line nicely dont
Vote-The Judge
plz return the favor in my battles against the ce and my rematch aganist x-acutor thanx pz
poll vote homes........................3rd.................. ............................................
i cant vote but:
vote = judge
breakdown:
punches = judge..more clever
flow = gulity..judge structure was crazy
multis = judge
personals=judge
vocab = none..both need to elevate
overall = judge came with a better verse, cuz he used more creativity
vote on this yall == knowledge vs slayer thx
peace
4th poll vote plz peeps............................................y ey............
Judge takes this with more consistent verse...
Better punches that hit harder...
More creativity in his verse...
Other guy just came too basic to win anything...
v/ Judge
Pz...
man that last line was killer that right there alone could hav won it for judge but good battle by the both of u
Creativity on one side...boredom on the other..
Now for any rational thinking person it'll be quite clear which battler goes in what catagorie.
I must say.. Judge came alright.. some funny..creative lines..
Mediocre punches.. but pretty enjoyable none the less.
GUILTY was way to simple...on all aspects..
No real punches or even attempts at it..well i guess that depends on what you consider a attempt.
Let's just say for Fl.. he tried.. hard.
But failed none the less.
Judge simply typed up a better verse.
the judge took this 1
he had an overall betta verse and came a lil harder
4 a newbi i was impressed wit sum of guiltys punchesa and personals
overall the both had nice structure and flow but the judge takes it nice verses
both ya
pz
up like my nob when i saw your mum............................................... ..thx
The judge takes this battle easily and surely, wit punches and more wittieness
Personals-Judge, juss had more direct personals so that I seen
Punches-Judge, he hit harder and had more wittier punches, some made me laugh, others were blah but good punches overall
Structure and Flow-Tie, both were easy to read
Wordplay and Vocabulary-Judge, he had both categories....................
Conclusion-Nice battle, Guilty needs to elevate on his punches and wordplay......................................Judg e is str8 maybe make better punches but most were good...............
Vote-Judge
Since I took time on yours, please drop a honest vote on my battle, please drop a honest vote..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115918