Se7eN v.s MadMC

Rules:

12 lines
Blind Spits due in 40 minutes
No hate, d/r, bullshit, or crew votes

check in dawg................then key up a verse

check in dawg

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check in dawg ************************************

I'm dumb haha i found it but it wasnt there earlier!
alright clock starts now

(verse)

I’ll make this guy seem un-doubtful, like a pen that can’t squirt ink
Have him wanting to be filled like a space that says “insert link”
I’m lyrically magic, it’s tragic, that I had to up and fire you
Cause the only way your part MC, if ~MC~Donalds hired you
This guy’s battle verses are senseless like a speach spoke by the pope
Only time he can be dope, is when he’s rolled, licked, and then smoked
Guy begging to get a battle, guess his herbness runs in his heritage
Naming the list, he’s talking shit, can’t spit, and agrees wit gay marriages
Ending this pending controversy on why this kid is never gonna make it
Cause he couldn’t get people’s attention, if he had a mic and was naked
I’ll end this verse, and curse out and blurt till this guy closes his mouth
He’s more scared than a virgin, wit a girl that wants him to go down south

you know what how bout less than 40 minutes
like 15 unless your too slow!!

se7en go check in....
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115919

heres mine:

this is my first bout to make yours look like the worst you sound like a bitch with a purse
my connections disconnect disrespect leve you wrecked matta fact i got a tech to detatch your head and neck
when my lyrics hit you you'll get whipped, flipped then slip I'm fully equipped to inflict sick shit like tales from the crypt
your a fuckin tough talker I'll make you a rough walker you'll be left walkin awkward
like a highly trained slut/stalker
I'm the pimp of the nation your the king of masterbation who's full of frustration
you just received all the pain and shame
I just spat sickness and quickness at you like acid rain!!!

now we need votes

I gotta admit your shit was pretty tight!
mine wasn't long enough

here I gotta give a couple more lines it wasn't long enough so votes don;t count yet

I'm probly half your age but twice as viscious
I'll throw hard lyrics at you like dishes
stick to being a little girl and keep singin bootyliscious! (destiny's child)

whatever i fucked up a bit VOTE PPL!!!

Se7en took this...he jus came more creative and original...also had harder punches and personals in his verse...Madmc work on ya structure...cause it effects your flow..try and even it out...Not a bad verse from you tho Madmc...jus try and be creative with ya punches/personals/metas...you did have a few ok multis...but make sure that your multis are also punches..dun use them jus to have multis in ya verse...Se7en good drop

Se7en drop an honest vote here...MadMC drop an honest opinion since you have under 100 posts....Thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115653

we need votes so ppl if you read for this then FUCKING VOTE!!!!!!

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hmmmmmmm
7 takes this no doubt....he had better punches.....better flow...n most of all creativity...his punches had meaningz 2 em.....n if u understood em...they were pretty funny........
madmc- ur opener waz wakkkkkkkkkkkkkk.....no offence.u didnt really try...ur punches were pretty weak....ur flow was a bit off....and u really have 2 work on ur structure
one-sided battle
punches- 7...easily...good shit
flow- se7en....easier to go with..kept the rhythm
structure- 7...its visible
creativity- se7en...put meaning bhind punches
vote- se7en
:)
one-sided
plze hit this up dawg....thnxx
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115933

uppin x2 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

yo people vote more if you check the links peeps drop

uppin x3 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE

Se7en/ you had a great verse, your flow was hot with gud wordplay, just like lyricallyabbusive says you had creativity man, yur punches came thru hard with lot of variation and gud multis; your personals were aight; you had an ok structure

MadMC; 1 word man-ELEVATE; your verse was whack, you had no flow, your punches were played, no variation at all, no creativity or originality, your personals-where ar they, structure was so-so; have to work hard man
Overall vote: Se7en
Return the favour man: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114243

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Yo Se7en since i took time for your battle, check mine aight, thx
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114243

uppin x5 please vote people VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE VOTE
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Seven came off withthe doper verse....
MadMc needs to elevate...
Seven had some good multi's going...the gay marriages line was a dope punch along with some really nice wordplay...good fucking drop...you had strong bars...every line hit for the most part...and to be honest I was a little surprised.
MadMc You had a weak drop...you didn't have any timing to your verse and most of it wasn't even directed at seven ...you were just kinda saying a bunch of threats and trying your best to make it rhyme...practice practice practice.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115453

7 took this on creativity, originality and strength of punches. i was esp feelin the following:

"I’m lyrically magic, it’s tragic, that I had to up and fire you
Cause the only way your part MC, if ~MC~Donalds hired you"

and

"Ending this pending controversy on why this kid is never gonna make it
Cause he couldn’t get people’s attention, if he had a mic and was naked"

very good punchlines. and his timing was alot betta then these battle mcs on here who seem 2 write endlessly. good structure and flo.

man mc seemed 2 b overconcerned with multis and had no reel substance


vote ---> 7

yeah ima have to agree with the rest of them...madmc it looked liek you didnt really try your vs me is alot better.

Man... *sighs-tries to concentrate* ...how could u get mercked that bad MAD? Dawg, this battle was one sided, its hard to understand y u wanted to battle se7en in tha first place, maybe it was cuz u were confident an wanted to earn respect, well i give u props for tryin but ur verse was crap... Se7en came harder in almost every aspect of battle, his flow, his structure, every punch was on point, where your verse just sounded as if, u didnt care what went down this battle... you did have some good multis an vocab was good, but seems like u tried too hard, like u force ur shit.. Well newayz, my vote goez to se7en... good luck both of u!

return tha favor, an peep tha links in ma sig!

This was a one sided battle... Se7en had better punches, wordplay, structure, and everything else there is. He is jsut better than the opponent. That is a god enough explination, cause it is easy to see who won this battle...

Vote - Se7en

Winner - Se7en

( G/L in our LLL battle Se7en.. ;) )