10 l
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no h d/r
no bull
45min due limit
if u fail 2 drop you lose i win
no feed
no bite
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no herbish
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10 l
blind
no h d/r
no bull
45min due limit
if u fail 2 drop you lose i win
no feed
no bite
no recycling
no herbish
check in
and dont no show
checkin in
lol damn wow rules but ive seen lyrics battle so i think this will be good sry to freepost but when ya both spit ill vote poll wise cuz by then i will have enough posts but only if you vote on my battles in my sig...thanx pz
You throw feminine punches cause jus look...thery're all misses
Your like the special olympics cause you throw retarded disses (discus)
I extract abstract verbiage and inject it into your clogged veins..
Lyrically breath for the first time let the oxygen numb your brain
÷Thìñg÷ can't compare...Subtract bitten rhymes and its "Are you tryin?"
In Addition, every line that he spits leaves whackness Multiplying
Whyd you make an alias...You we're doing fine as .::It::. dike
But the ÷Thìñg÷ is .::It::. dun matter cause ya merked twice
Damn yo posted a shitload of rules..But only one stands out
You broke it..Can I get my win now?Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
"makaveli" must be ya only way 2 ressurect "circus freak shows!"
this kid worships a legend but 2pac dont suport"1 lyric"wont own
tries 2 advertise ownership wit his title but spelled "dont" wrong!
.. ..i will fuck wit u & also rip ya fuckin "make up" head off!
i hate ya characteristics and all ya "IJL"ya not the clown "It"
if u mastered in text physics u still wouldent inpress "carson jet"
if ya captured a punch u would easily fondal it wrong & get K O`ed
u was a target for the unknown & just got a L probe stuck n ya ho
fuck you "joker"off of batman cuz im the bat & ya the ball
wit this verse a homerun ya "laughter"just got soned.. ..haha
Uppin..drop a good vote and a link and it will be hit
up2
lyric took this 1 quite easily in my opinion thing ur shit was played and had fillers and ATTEMPTS which didnt cum off well.....u had alrite punches but not as hard as lyric....both structures were good so no prob in that department....
lyrics finisher got it 4 me as it made me laugh and was strong......
overall lyric gets it 4 cumin harder on the punches and personals nice verse tho thing
i 4got 2 drop ma link sorry 4 tha freepost but cud u both hit it up plz wit honest votes thnx both ya
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115684
pz
up3
i agree with Anies lyric had much better flow punches structure and he did have that closer which was funny things verse was very played and tried to hard to come down on lyric which made a fool out of him
Vote-Lyric
Lyric
You throw feminine punches cause jus look...thery're all misses
Your like the special olympics cause you throw retarded disses (discus)
^^Good opener but played...nice flip though
I extract abstract verbiage and inject it into your clogged veins..
Lyrically breath for the first time let the oxygen numb your brain
^^Okie line not much of a punch...but nice filler
÷Thìñg÷ can't compare...Subtract bitten rhymes and its "Are you tryin?"
In Addition, every line that he spits leaves whackness Multiplying
^^LOL good line i enjoyed that
Whyd you make an alias...You we're doing fine as .::It::. dike
But the ÷Thìñg÷ is .::It::. dun matter cause ya merked twice
^^Good line
Damn yo posted a shitload of rules..But only one stands out
Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
no herbish
You broke it..Can I get my win now?
^^blah
Thing
"makaveli" must be ya only way 2 ressurect "circus freak shows!"
this kid worships a legend but 2pac dont suport"1 lyric"wont own
^^Blah
tries 2 advertise ownership wit his title but spelled "dont" wrong!
.. ..i will fuck wit u & also rip ya fuckin "make up" head off!
^^Didn't rhyme an was a gay punch
i hate ya characteristics and all ya "IJL"ya not the clown "It"
if u mastered in text physics u still wouldent inpress "carson jet"
^^Not bad...pretty witty
if ya captured a punch u would easily fondal it wrong & get K O`ed
u was a target for the unknown & just got a L probe stuck n ya ho
^^Started off good but didn't finish
fuck you "joker"off of batman cuz im the bat & ya the ball
wit this verse a homerun ya "laughter"just got soned.. ..haha
^^Blah
Over all Lyric won with moer consitant punches an actual punches...most of thing lines were just filler and didn't really create a hit...if this is an alias for'it' i would've expewcted much better
Vote Lyric
up4 Yoz your vote please
lyric - structure was good.......flow was on target.......vocab was good.........nice multis........i was likin alot of ur wordplay........most of ya punches connected.........personals were nice.......
thing - structure was good......flow fell off a lil......vocab was ok........some of the multis were aight........i didnt really like most of ya wordplay........more of ya punches would have been better, but some of them didnt rhyme........ok personals......
breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - lyric
vocab - lyric
multis - tie
wordplay - lyric
punches - lyric
personals - lyric
conclusion - this was a pretty one sided battle......lyric takes this in flow, vocab, wordplay, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote........
VOTE - LYRIC
^^^uhh i cant poll cause it says u have to have 1,000 posts to poll......
so i apologize for that.......
thats just my feedback.......
this was a good battle best I've read in a while
Punches and Personals-Tie, both came strong in this category and had nice personals and punches
Flow and Structure-Tie, Both had a nice flow and regular vet structure
Wordplay and Vocabulary-Lyric, he came stronger and felt his verse was more wittier, this is how lyric won
Conclusion-Lyric and Thing were tied until it came to vocab and wittieness and he won the battle this way
Vote-Lyric
Last uppin
aight.
Lyric had better Punches clearly..
the flow was kinda off when reading THINGS...
your wordplay was funny and Liked the personals..
Over-all both of your verse were nice. but yeah..Lyric just Didnt have AS much
Writers block as THING on this One. LoL..text..::cough::..is gay..
My bad for freePosting..i tried to click STOP..but it was too late..
UpPiNg#2 for you guys i guess...but anyway...
RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.
Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148
Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468
Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532
Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900
Thanks. Greatly Appreciated. PzZz
werd my man lyric got this one,
dogg your elavateing beond belief atm.
insatnt cud use you,,,,,,,,,,,lol..pm me if you got msn,
basically lyric had so much more dope punches
also threw alot of personals,
strucure was simple but if ya like it like that woot,
nice verse man.......thing work on punches dawg and flow,
........
1000 posts was not in the rules so I polled the votes that should have been polled.