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After you check in theres a 20 minute timelimit.
Standard rules.
Blind Spits, 10 lines, blah blah blah...
Checking in...I guess tha time starts after we both check in...waiting on you
Quickity splickity keystyling...
I thought hoes weren't supposed to drop flows? God knows...
The RB was entertaining...
But John Dough made the fun froze...
Your rhymes need more care than mansions with maids...Or tangled hair with braids...
Your rhymes wouldnt be ill if they were tested positive with AIDS...
JD belongs on the RB as much as enlarged breasts on nuns...
Your skills need quick rounding up, like desperate men with guns
Gay clubs...your dick rise like muffins, but your rhymes still stay at nothing...
The last time "Dough" was liked was taking cookies out of the oven
You like building things? Like verses...which can be looked at as trash...
This kid should be beyond LeGos, and LeGetAPlaneAndCrash...
lol...I started typing my verse right after that...so fine you get away with it this time. You have until 2:40.
69..Tha first hint of whackness..was tha numbers in ya name
& to sum it all up..after he drops..all his buddies get AIMed
Leave u slained & departed..Dumb? no..I think he's retarded
Cuz tha Grim Reaper was waiting for u fo' tha battle started
So u like male sixty nine? I bet u even got that queer sound
Only way u'd win this..is if tha polls were flipped upside down
U a heavy weight kid..yeah right..a fucking feathers denser
When Junio drops..all tha arrows point to RB.com Help Center
Weed this bitch out..Even tha dictionary defines u as a herb
& when I typed "whackness" into search..came up with ya verse
good luck
iight favline from
junio:
Your rhymes need more care than mansions with maids...Or tangled hair with braids...
Your rhymes wouldnt be ill if they were tested positive with AIDS...
JD belongs on the RB as much as enlarged breasts on nuns...
Your skills need quick rounding up, like desperate men with guns
iight favirote line from john dough:
Leave u slained & departed..Dumb? no..I think he's retarded
Cuz tha Grim Reaper was waiting for u fo' tha battle started
So u like male sixty nine? I bet u even got that queer sound
Only way u'd win this..is if tha polls were flipped upside down
break down
john dought won cuz he came harder than junio
but yo junio keep battlin u good just need to battle me iight
so
v/john dough
RETURN THE FAVOR IN ME VS SOUL JA PLEASE
Not enough posts to poll, but here's what I thought.......
John Dough took this.....he came with harder punches, more creativity, and better personals...Junio, yer punches came across weak...and didn't show much creativity...yer structure also needs work...elevate...My vote > John Dough ( better punches, personals, creativity, and an overall better verse)
Thanks for tha votes so far...
Uppin for votes...#1
2....vote...I'll return it
With an honest one....
Omg....vote please
This should be closed
Come on
Vote...and I'll return tha favor with an honest one on yours....4
john dough clearly killed junio.
junio: every concept was played or obvious. be more creative with your shit....
you lost because every one of your punches were just ehhh. work on creative shit..and i dont mean that wack Legos closer. think about it....ur shit wont hit hard if everyone else has already thought of it or read it before
dough: you came tight...didnt really like the closer...but u didnt need anything incredible. you came ill and confident...real non challant.....and merked him. harder punches that were clever and had more attitude.
vote dough
^^help this site out and drop votes for other's.Quote:
Originally Posted by John Dough
dont be a HYPOCRYTE asking for Honest Votes
then not dropping HONEST votes.
Im just trying to get people to VOTE more Often.
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Aight. Both of your Verse had Good Flow. I like John Does Punches
Better merely because they were Funnier and they seemed to
stand out Much More, Personal wise for some Reason. It Didnt
sound So TextBooked with Punches like Junio's. Junio, your Punches
aight But you could Lenghten the Punch with a Personal Diss, then
Expand Your Finish of some of your Lines and Create a new Bar.
your Bars Almost Sounded Like a Stand Up Comic with No story, Just
the Punch. Complexity and Vocab, Which Doesn't really matter depending
on punches abd Style goes To John Doe. Over-all i thought John Doe's
verse was More Interesting to Read And had More of a Stand Out style.
vote-Jonny
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RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.
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nice battle. you both came pretty nice. so this was a close one. junio had
some nice lines. i saw a couple played punches but its still commendable. you
both had ur strong points. john came with a better structure and flow. the punches
seemed about equal. and john came with the closing personal. so add them all
out and john comes out on top. props to you both.
vote- John.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112882
^slept on like crazy. its sad. been up for a month now.
pz
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Last uppin..come'n vote
yea...vote john. This was clearly an easy vote.
Junio...as phoeniix said, you came with a lot of played concepts which resulted in me realin feelin any punches to the fullest. John on the other hand...came with some nice stuff. John had the funnier punches which increased the overall enjoyment, so imma vote for John Dough.
One question...are you John Dough from PBA by any chance?
Return the favour both of you, and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
jonh dough definetely got this with a much better verse
he had the best line in the verse with this one...
junio also had a good verse but all his shit was too simple and noit that complicated at all....exampleQuote:
U a heavy weight kid..yeah right..a fucking feathers denser
When Junio drops..all tha arrows point to RB.com Help Center
overall a good battle butQuote:
JD belongs on the RB as much as enlarged breasts on nuns...
Your skills need quick rounding up, like desperate men with guns
dough- had the punches
had personals
flow was good
structure was also good
everything on point
overall good verse
8-10
junio- ok pucnhes a lil played
ok personals
flow was ok
structyure could have been better
sum lines were forced
ok verse
6-10
overall john dough gets this battle for better punches
hit up the sig please i voted on this one