alright
minimum 6 barz MAX 10 Barz (12-20 lines.. but u knew that)
no feedin, dickriding, crew/hate
no spit first or second, just post a verse
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alright
minimum 6 barz MAX 10 Barz (12-20 lines.. but u knew that)
no feedin, dickriding, crew/hate
no spit first or second, just post a verse
tell this fag to mind his own business and just let me be
but he begged to dick ride, does anythin he can in battles to suck-seed
I'll rip you in bunches, your rhymes are 'crap' and I 'run shit'..
You'll be done quick, I've jacked off 'harder' than your 'punches'
yous a fake, makin~up~lies, bout’ the phrases he ‘played’gerized,
your punches are like pussys tryin ta stay~alive, the way they escape~yer~eye
I'm Charmed as Savage mah Skillz Surpass urs Easy wit Equistic Defying Realistic Demizing...
Quelude betta than Mines??i'll make you ~Swallow ya Pride~ like ~Cannabilistic Lions
Watch it, My verse is Monumental An ~Eiffel(eye full)~Tower Maybe That Distinctly Changes Your Surroundings To Make it like You Died in France,
Ask The Doctors for the Results, Cause I M clearly better then U like ~eye-exams~,
U Musta Missed This, U Wack, Not Even Sick With a Bad Case Of Syphlis,
I'll End Ya ~Exsistance~ Cuz Quel Has No ~Presence (presents)~ like a Jewish Kid On Christmas
Im Spitten ~Red-Hot~ Hits Causeing ~Head Shots~ That Shred Tops Like ~Mislead Cops~
This Kids Dead Knocked, Cuz I Did Tha Oppisite Of His ~Genitals~ I Made This Thread ~Drop
i know u aint gonna stand me up for this battle
Shit.....we ain;t even agree..i said you set it up and obviously you did but i never checked in or nothing...I'll drop but i got shit to do...I got to pick up a bitch right quick so I'll get at you later... For anyone reading this thread: Check the bitchslap....I wasn't even sure he would accept my challenge. I'll be back.
o no doubt, my bizzle
Yeah...yo "bizzle"...I'm a go ahead and key up real quick and serve this fucking herb.
nigga i know YOU aint talkin shit......... just key sumthin up lil bitch ass nigga
S Dizzle..S Dot..All over Sean Carter's jock!
Your rhymes is faker than butter by the maker's of country crock
Cause my philosophy Is merk or be merked by a whack emcee
Ya death's confirmed at check in..now I'm re-writing history
Take a minute to breathe....oops ya dead I stole ya breath!
Verse took a minute to read..and I could tell you stole ya text
When your recieved..you hear the crickets and leaves..yo go figure
Your more hated than B-Rad yelling.."I'm one Bad NIGGER!" (malibu's most Wanted)
And tell me where in the fuck could you find this "Dirty Bean"
The same place you'll find a site where this herb's 17-3
You wish ya bitch ass could flow...you~show~ya~wordplay~like~this
Need some get up and go? Get you a line out my sig..
That's the only way you'd have the energy to compete....
I got to grab my bitch and eat..I'll leave this verse incomplete.
uppin 1
jus didn't like all the capitals and symbols and junk in sdizzles... much easier to read the other one... he came at you pretty hard sdizzle and you lacked personals... i thought you had a better vocab on the argument... but that ish don't matter when his structure is so much clearer than yours...
vote = quelude
uppin 2
yo nice battle you 2..............quelude damn MAN INSTANT..............................woot........n o cnt vote im in ques crew but jst stopped to say nice battle..............http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ighlight=judge
Punches-SDizzle
Personals-Quelude very nice
Flow-Quelude
Structure-Quelude like magificent said it was much easier to understand
wordplay-SDizzle
Vocab-ehhh SDizzle
Overall-Tied
this is a close battle but i feel this should go to Quelude because of his structure and his personals
Vote/Quelude
o yea not 2 freepost but ill vost poll wise when i get enough posts iight pz!
yall niggas voting for him cuz of his structure...... lol wut has the world come to
no not really even if his structure was like yours his personals come down hard on you like he got at where you are from ""And tell me where in the fuck could you find this "Dirty Bean"
The same place you'll find a site where this herb's 17-3"" those is wut really gave him this battle other wise you both are good
uppin
Uppin for the merkin..............................
uppin 4 my main man sdizzle, if u can do it queleude, i can do it 2
Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...84#post1203684
sdizzle: Your verse was decent but the structure sucked. Alot of your lines/punches were played. Some of your shit was really nice though like this line:
I was feeling that. Next time though, work on your structure because it makes it easier to read and judge.Quote:
Quelude betta than Mines??i'll make you ~Swallow ya Pride~ like ~Cannabilistic Lions
Quelude:
Your vocab wasn't as good as SDizzle's but your structure was way better, your punches connected better, and you had some nice personals. Some of your lines were filler but overall it was a nice verse.
Vote-Quelude
No Hate, return the favor.
guess im uppin
sdizzle - structure was wack.......flow fell off due to the wackness in the structure.......vocab was nice.......good multis........wordplay was pretty good.......it seemed like u were more focused on gettin wordplay than punches.......i didnt see to many connecting punches.......ok personals......
quelude - structure was good......flow was on target......vocab was ok........some of the multis were good......wordplay was pretty good.........most of the punches connected........pretty good personals......
breakdown -
structure - quelude
flow - quelude
vocab - sdizzle
multis - sdizzle
wordplay - sdizzle
punches - quelude
personals - quelude
conclusion - quelude takes this because he had better structure, flow, punches, and personals, so he gets my vote......
VOTE - QUELUDE
uppin
isn't the only reason i voted for him..... but it was honest and i hope you would do the same for me... plz vote for the battle in my sig...thnks