KareLess *Verses* D'cyple (VERSES ARE IN. NEED VOTES)

B]D’ cyples Verse[/B]

Now don't think I won't hit you because I'm popular, I got p 90 rugger to pop at ya, catch you
slipping I'm give you what I got for ya, my clip loaded for 16 shots for ya, ever had a hot gun
on ya waste and blood on your shoe because the nigga went and said the wrong shit to you, homie
you ain't been threw what I been threw you not like me and I'm not like you.

I'm like an animal wit it when I spit it's crazy, got semi-autos to put holes in niggas try to play me,
One shot is not enough you need at least an uzi to move me, after four bottles of don
the kid start to feeling woozy, I write my life you write what you see in gangsta movies, I'm
gangsta to the core nigga you can't move me, I find my space at the top I got this rap shit
lock, I never heard of you but yo heard of me I murder you, I spit shells at your convertible
lotis you notice I put hollowtips all through your door you not prepared for me the kid is back. I know you like that I know you like that.

My Verse

thinking your iLL but thats only cuz u got Poor-Health
And wut the Fucks a battle 4 when u only talk bout Your-Self
I aint Religious,fuk Decyple's. i'll put ya head to Rest like box's of NyQuiLL
I will, Merk those and throw Bows. So how are u making Sense witta Broke Nose
Bitch Hoe..I'll kick you off ya high Horse like the Logo for Polo...
This battle was a fuckin god-damn easy ass win..
Jesus told me i merked u..And i no jesus dont sin..
Look i spelled No wrong but who really Cares..
I was served wrong only cuz my food came Rare..

StYlE SwItCh...

-Hope you Don’t like Sukin on Dick cuz Ya Loss is Under my Belt-
-Im raping you in this battle just like the way ya Child-hood Felt!-


Uppin for Votes...

Oh, and he Bit 50 cents Verse. But i Still Want Votes to Win. POLL VOTES.
UpPiNg dAmNiT..


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vote = Kareless

Reason: Simple, the otehr dude bit!

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kareless mind telling us why you have 5 active battles going on?????????????

thinking your iLL but thats only cuz u got Poor-Health
And wut the Fucks a battle 4 when u only talk bout Your-Self
lol...made me laugh, first lines played, second was creative though, not really hard hitting
I aint Religious,fuk Decyple's. i'll put ya head to Rest like box's of NyQuiLL
I will, Merk those and throw Bows. So how are u making Sense witta Broke Nose
lol damn, first line shoulda came second so there was more of a punch, pretty tight frist line though
Bitch Hoe..I'll kick you off ya high Horse like the Logo for Polo...
don't get the one liner, but nce punch all the same
This battle was a fuckin god-damn easy ass win..
Jesus told me i merked u..And i no jesus dont sin..
lol blah...just a bit too concieted, but nice bar
Look i spelled No wrong but who really Cares..
I was served wrong only cuz my food came Rare..
lol hahaha
-Hope you Don’t like Sukin on Dick cuz Ya Loss is Under my Belt-
-Im raping you in this battle just like the way ya Child-hood Felt!-
lmao...first line was nice, second was alright

Vote - Kareless -- alor better than fiftys anyway lol

so good to be bakk on a site where i can laugh at lines, nice drop loke stay up

Yeah i loved his 2nd line when i spit it the first million times

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ryan

Oh and fuck a vote.. this a plain free post... La di da mother fuckers WHOOPIE DI DO

ummm right i need some posts to

:noob:

any way...i give this battle to Kareless..there ain't a whole lot to say here...Kareless actually had his bars directed at his opponent.....Dciples verse was really weak...he had an o.k. style..surprisingly I was able to flow his verse somewhat but he had no direction with his shit at all and he was just saying shit off the top of his head it looked like...Kareless won this battle for actually battling...I really don't know what else to say.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115453

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm yeah whatever i need some postsss

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Originally Posted by OutCome

Oh and fuck a vote.. this a plain free post... La di da mother fuckers WHOOPIE DI DO

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why are you beeing a bitch. Unless your Upping this For Me :thumbup:
And Rare. This Battle is Old As Fuck. It just Never Got any Votes.
that's the answere to your Studip.."your Line is Played" remark.
come'on Kid. Why are you Beeing another SouthRidge Kid..
acting all Uppidy do Da and Shit...LoL..You should Drop a Fucking Vote.
anyWays.
UpPiNg fOr vOtEs...POLL'S are appreciated..

Yeah i know.. because im the only otha mother fucker here ABLE to poll vote.. Soo g... If VANEdroped ONE poll vote.. WHo did the other come from? Hmm i FUCKING imagine...


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UpPiNG my 3rd..
And OutCome..It couldn't have Been Vane..It was QeuLude..LoL..
AnyWayz..
I need More Votes Damn it..
vote vote vote vote..

iight im puttin it like this...since all these bitches in here aint votin i will...

my vote goes to kareless cause he had batta flow...punches and mulis...

hit the shit up in my sig and i will return honest votes back...

an check out my songs on the other link

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Read rules... this wasnt explained - Trapt Wit

personals: Kareless had sum nice personals in there
multis: Kareless had sum multis which were nice
punchlines: D'Cyple your punches were played and they didn't came thru hard, work on that
structure: they both had a gud structure
wordplay and voc: Kareless had dud wordplay and nice voc., didn't feel that with D'Cyple
Overall vote: Kareless
D'Cyple you need to work on your punches and personals, aight?

UpPiNg #4..
Please drop[ a fuckin vote...
this battle has been up forever.
drop an honest vote, and i will return the honesty..

payce.

Kareless took this....good punches and personals in his verse...flow was off at times..but it still was ok...
D'Cyple came with punches more played than his name...lines were mad stretched...and a lot of his verse seemed directed at no one...rather than at his opponent...
Overall vote goes to Kareless for a verse with much harder punches, personals, and metas in his verse.

Please drop an honest vote here guys...thanks http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116562

tHiS Is mY 5tH AnD FiNaL UpPiN...
PLEASE DROP A HONEST VOTE. POLL IT

well i got your link to vote, but unfortunetly i can't poll vote cuz of the gay rules on this site. oh well i'll give an opinion and it will at least up the battle.

basicly kareless took this in every concievable catagory. d'ciple's verse, bitten or not, was just horrible. he talked about himself and had a simple ass rhyme scheme. he even rhymed the same words at some points. it wasn't great from kareless but a blind monkey with no fingers could have beaten that simple shit from d'cyple. lern some wordplay and some complex punches and get another rhyme scheme. also, find a better rapper to bite from cuz 50 basicly sucks at writing lyrics.

vote- kareless

are yo fucking serious?... the kid used 50cents verse on the "Till I Colaspe" beat... SHUT THE FUCK UP gayness kids

vote - karefree.... cuz he didn't bite...

Caesar - On3

Polls Reset.
Closed.

KareLess you are on a tight string.
Next time you set up a battle,
and your opponet doesn't post in the thread BY THEMSELVES
You WILL be BANNED