Alright........the rules..........
10-12 lines
3-0 is a KO
no d/r
no hating
no unexplained votes
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Alright........the rules..........
10-12 lines
3-0 is a KO
no d/r
no hating
no unexplained votes
u know the deadline
Good Luck
yo yo
you wanna step to me? your a fake mc
about to get snuck like im drunk as fuck and runnin amuck
why we battlein you lucky i aint beatin you up
tryin to spit garbage like a verbal dump
too bad your a two pump chump hittin on a girl that r kelly wouldnt fuck
really i seen her dog i upchucked
go move on to boys youd have more luck
aight ill stop and leave this as written
im tired of givin you a lyrical ass kickin
peace
Bitch yer wack as fuck....and I'ma help you see like Lasik
Move up these ranks?...shit...yer' ass flunked out of basic
Face it, yer styles complacent....not worthy of a mention...
stick to yer day job....cuz' yer rhyme's hardly gut-wrenchin'
I would admire the effort....but your sentences make it hard...
cuz' after this merking....you'll narrow yer intrests to just cars...
'Nat-as' good as most herbs....faggot yer way outta contention...
on a downward spiral....while only yer age is catching ascension
'All Evil All Tha Time'?....you should probably change yer schedule...
i'll admit yer consistent....due to the fact ya wackness is perpetual
uppity............................................ .................................................. .................
biting aye nastas.....tsk, tsk...... Looks like someone's been watching the behind the scenes battleS on the 8 mile DVD. ...."Battle you???....bitch you're lucky I don't beat you up!
myself included, vote for somber due to complete wackness of opponent.
lolll
vote-Somber
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iight my vote goes to somber
cuz he had more puchlines, more multlies and he killed natas
ayo natas u need to battle more iight so
over all
v/ somber
Vote gone.
-Axe
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natas not much to say bout you, CAUSE YOUR WACK AS FUCK,
THATS ALL I GOT TO SAY, IF YOU GOT A PROBLEM WE WILL
SETTLE IT. PIECE.
somber, you had an aight verse, but good enough to beat this
wack ass wannabe emcee, its just plain and simple you took every
catagory, piece.
my vote: somber
hit up any of my battle, thanks.
Vote gone.
-Axe
aigh fukkers-- ill admit that was a wack lyric-- but i been studyin hard soo soon ima take all you to school--- belive that-- oh yeah and somber did kill me right here lol soooo uppin
uppin this shit---- and dont worrry genisis -- we be seein each otha real soon--------------
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Satan backwords needs to watch his step with the biting...
That's pretty close, man...
Stop that!
Came ok with the multi's, too many really...
Only halfway decent line was "R. Kelly" and even that didn't make a lotta sense, just struck me as funny for some reason...
Somber, nailed this with wordplay, metas, a good personal shot...
Just merkage, merkage, merkage.
The opener alone would probably have taken this.
The closer definately finished him off.
Not to mention the format was twice as nice, helped flow, better presentation.
Easily: Somber
Peace
Somber took this easy
Natas615- you came basic as fuck...played rhymes and weak punches, personals, and metas..even out you lines/bars....this will improve your flow and put mor emphasis on your punche, personals, and metas....try and also be more creative and original with your shit....ass some witty lines
Somber- Not a bada verse...you had OK punches and metas...maybe up the complexity and wittiness to make them hit even harder...clear the filler in your verse and try to put a punch in every line...not a bad drop tho
Vote=Somber
Please drop an honest vote here..thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120685
nata had a weak verse he had weak punches and all that shit and really i say you need to just elevate this was really a one sided battle
somber you took this all the way and u did by ur punches and the personals and they can be better like one ur personals you need more and forget about the filler leave that alone but decent verse that my comments
V/somber
return the favor
lol..
Natas - if you even go to this site anymore, elevate like a motherfucker..seriously. I didnt see any personals at all, punches were weak..maybe, just maybe you had a little flow going. Try to keep an even set with your lines man, some were long, others really short..most of your punches were pretty general..work on creativity, structure, personals, and punches.....basically everything..dont quit though man, keep elevating..
Somber - lol, you had a nice verse man, especially liked how you played on his name, very creative. You merked this guy pretty bad, your highlight lines were 'Nat-as' line and your closer..very witty and creative. Personals hit hard and flow was perfect. Couldnt really find any flaws man, very nice drop.
Vote, obviously / Somber
Yo battles was okay...Natas yo battle was iight because most of yo shit was confusion, I mean it rhymed and all then you seemed to lose me when your lines were longer then the other so it didn't seem like it rhymed to much...(you no what the fuck I'm sayin)
Somber your shit was confusion too. Most of it i didn't get, it was like you knew Natas in person and yaw decided to battle and you got the dissin somethin we didn't know about.
He works at a auto shop?
most of all, my vote goes to somber
somber had good flow...had punched this kid real hard...dam this was creative...great word play...good personals
natas better work on your on your punchlines cause they were wack...confusing...confusing...confusing....elevat e then you can rebattle and maybe win...maybe
somber=hope this vote helps you
cause your the one that i pick