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10 Lines
Blind spits
Normal rules
No hate votes
1/2 hr,
This is my check in. Check in and agree
check....oh almost forgot...
You're Merked Again
???...right...you tryin ta fill up ur 50 characters? k...forgivin
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
Yeah..thats twice now..
So spit ya little verse
And leave.. :rolleyes:
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Intro...
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Dough: A deer, a female deer, bitch,
Kay: A drop of golden sun, check it
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Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;
Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;
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Nice verse Johny boy, never battled nonamen00b, jus Kuniva, Proof n Chugs4Life, but they may as well be named "nonamen00b".
By tha way, the Irish dollar is a "Pound", not insultin anyone's intelligence, jus lettin yall know.
I gotsta go, Be on tomorrow, votes???
Arrite nice battle both yall. Here goes.
John lol nice stuff. Really liked ure wordplay, and ure punches came hard. Flow wasnt the best, but pretty good. This line was one i liked...
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
Funny shit man real good. Nice stuff.
Kayohh, arrite overall ure verse was weak, no effence. Acutally yea offence.
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
That was a weak excuse for a personla in my opinion. Ure flow asnt too good, and ure punches were pretty weak. As john said, He merked you.
If it aint clear enough........vote is for john. Mos def peace, niuce battle fo both.
"You're Merked Again"
John Doughs verse:
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
^^ I dont get it sorry, prolly just me
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
^^ Nice
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
^^ Ok personal ...
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
^^ ok punch
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
^^ Pretty good punch again
Overall: Nothin standout, but constistant punches and personals
Kayohhs verse:
"Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;"
^^ Aight
"Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;"
^^ Aight, kinda corny
"Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;"
^^ The only good part about this bar was my name in it
"W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;"
^^ If it's true then it's a decent personal but if it's not - WACK
"He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;"
^^ Nice multis but not a very good bar, ok
John Dough had more hardhitting consistant punches... Kayohh did much better this time but he's still a lil bitch that got merked.... twice
LoL..no that personal is not true..
...Its fake...And Intox..
Get on AIM
That is a hate vote, outlined in the rules as not to count.
mods should erase it. and im not makin excuses
That is not a hate vote... you got merked ... i broke my shit down
If this is a hate vote than so is yours against my battle wit .iLL.
If this vote doesn't count than neither should yours, you wack faggot
You never said in ur rules no hate votes, i checked. So, mine would count, even if it was a hate vote, which it wasn't. Why would you come to elevated jus to vote on this battle? Happened to stumble across it?
OK, this one was a much better battle...
best punch:
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
^^LMFAO at this.... but fix ya structure, get rid of the commas
John - you should have took this one too, judgin by your skill level... but ya opener was misleading (acts like a punch, set up like a punch.... where's the punch?) and I didn't really feel much of the verse though I did like this:
"Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!"
but the rhyming was iffy...
other than that, nothin worthy of a win.... so....
Kay - obviously heated from your last battle, you took it out here and did fairly well. Your comma-based structure was so aggravating that I almost gave it to John... but I'll give this one to you for better punches, but clean up your structure. That is all.
vote - kay
pretty good battle but John Dough came much harder. Kayohh didnt have many good punches he had more filler type shit. the best thing about his verse was the multies in the last bar, and his structure. other than that he had a lame played verse. John dough had good personals, good flow, and his punches were solid and consistent. both verses could use more multies but if your punches are better it really doesnt matter much.
VOTE_JOHN DOUGH
OPEN Battles IN Sig(I TOOK THE TIME)
Aight then uppin this
1-1 I guess..lol
But lets get some more votes
Uppin this...
1-1 still...
les see some explained votes.
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
ok...kinda weak
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
blah weak
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
ok
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
played concept
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
Mad played bar
Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;
ok...ok multis
Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;
ok
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
lol nice...but whats with the fuckin commas?
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
weak..played
He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;
good
KayOhh wins this...He had more punches and creativity...JD came too played and his punches were weak
PLease drop an honest vote here..I took the time for yall...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115298
Uppin this...
Les settle this, its good battle,
Drop some links...
Uppin...
Drop links, I'll check out ur battles.
Okie battle vote john dough
John dough...your first bar i didn't understand...but your punches and personals were more consistant and creative...over all a good verse
Kayohh...your verse was weak...nothing really stood out to me the lines could've been harder if you wolud have re-worded them. But nothing really stood out to me.
Return the faver and both of you hit up my soft focus battle vs daz....thanks
Lets not sleep on this anymore,
By the way, this guy changed his name,
It used to be "John Dough", jus so there's no comfusion on the personals, aight?
up...
noah artic, i really didn't like your structure it completely took away w/e flow u were goin for and either i was distracted from that or sumin cus i didn't even read any good punches
kayohh i actually could read your structure and could pic out your flow, so das bout how it goes. i understood your punches the first time through alot better and in a real battle das what counts. but dont put a space between your verses.
over all i jus didnt like artic's verse some dumb lines and real hard to follow. kayohh had a much better flow and more understandable punches.
vote- kayohh
hit up w/e battles i got goin on in my signiture pleez
Kay had good multis... Dough had punches... who do you think I'm gonna vote for..?
Fuck breakin it down...
Verb.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
^^^^Mods, this is a bs vote, les get rid of it....
My vote was bs..?! We'll let Verb break it down...
John Dough...
U hurt yourself when u spit..first rapper I've seen in a cast
I can't remember shit..
..And I'd still rather have my past!
Fucking stupid... I understood it... but it was fuckin stupid... 3/10
Ya trapped in wackness like it was tha matrix..you ain't a vet
Kay's on tha phone to leave..
.....But I pulled it from tha outlet!
Hum... nice try at a punch... it was newbie like but ok... 3/10
Ya money's my slut & ya talents ya money - whored ya wealth
You don't believe me? shit..
.....Just click his sig..& see for yourself
ok personal... and... Verb says 4/10
That must suck,elevating forever..yet u haven't left tha ground
Kid I herbed ya tha first time..
.....But its tha same in both rounds!
better personal... and Verb says 5/10
Thinks he's tha shit,3-0 rec,when "nonamen00b" was his best win
You wanna know tha outcome of this battle?
....Peep my check in..
I like... nothing fantastic... nothing great... 5/10
Total: 20/50
Kay...
Dough: A deer, a female deer, bitch,
Kay: A drop of golden sun, check it
El Garbo... 0/10... It was a line... don't act liek it wasn't...
Time ta eat again grab, utensils, a pada papa n some, pencils,
This "John Doe" wrote the same shit last round, must be usin, stencils;
Hum... a pencil/stencil line... Verb says 1/10... Played says the world...
Listen to tha, sound to, this lyrical "knock-out" in, round two,
You betta be ready fo Irish "dough", cuz Im feelin ta, "Pound" you;
first of all... no. I'm not even sure what kind of corrolation you were trying to make but it was garbo... If you were speaking of money... English would've been the way to go... cause only part uses pounds in Ireland... all of England uses it... just bad usage... 2/10
Last time he paid Intox to knock my, verse thas full, of, personals,
But this time Ima rob him of everything, miniskirt g-string, purse n all;
only good line you had... 5/10
W/e he writes back will, not be rap, jus give up this time, don't react,
PM'in me, "I love your dick!", this explains his, cocky act;
backfired not to mention the stupidity of the line... 2/10...
He jumped at every, curse in ma verse, wave bye as his, hearse disperse,
Now hes hidin climbin back inta his shell, like a chick, birth in reverse;
1st line... BLAH... 2nd line... could have been worded better... 4/10...
total: 14/60...
do the math...
Vote Dough... again.
Kay Ohh bro.. you know the rules.. you can only up 5 times and every post after both verses are posted is considered an up.
Sorry but you are DQed.