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12 Lines
Blind spits
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Didn't know you set it up, sure
time limit - 30 minz from check in,
I'm checkin in, agree to time limit???
Sure..don't matter to me..
I'll key it in 10 minutes ne ways
ten minutes, eh??? where is it at?...come on, its obviously already written
Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled
I clipped this bitches wings..so how can u be a flyweight?
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!
U heard me right..ehh..theres lots of gays in Britsh Colombia
Ya one of em..
Ya partners gave up fingering u..now they double thumb ya!
But ya elevating great kid..thats why u yelling out "save me!"
Cuz Kays going straight downward..even more than ya avy
3-0 rec? I'm impressed..but now you'll have one on tha left
Cuz if losses were God's grace..shit, I'm a leave ya ass blessed!
Peep what Kay goes by,cuz tha way I win this,it'll be tha same
Punches hit u so hard..have u saying "I'm Kay Ohh"
(Highlight sig for tha rhyming words)
good luck ;)
stfu..bitch I had other things to do..
My bad..sorry..it took 15 minutes..
I don't see ya verse any where..
hmm..its probably already written
...faggot..shut your mouth
No herb votes..explain or they'll be taken off
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Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;
From your, paps when you was younga, up the, ass with a cucumba,
I know its sick, ... but there's a, vast amount of wonda;
And, suspicion that you liked it, I mean I'm, thinkin u didnt fight it,
But enough with that, back to tha rap, and, flippin that vibe I kick;
Despite his past, Ima whip his ass, fuckin him up with lyrical, tae kwon doe,
Now its Impossible to identify him, even on tha file he's, named "John Doe";
I realize he's hit hard from, ma thesis, but ya better, believe this,
I'll mould this "Dough" inta cookie, crumble it up n jus eat, tha pieces;
I know he pre-writ it, but I wanna see it, mista "I'll key it in 10, minutes",
Your daddy started opennin ya up, but I as ya can see I jus, finished;
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There ya go, John Dough. Now lets see some explained votes.
Aight John Dough took this... Pretty nice verse
Intro:
"Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled"
^^ Decent punch
"I clipped this bitches wings..so how can u be a flyweight?
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!"
^^ Ok
"U heard me right..ehh..theres lots of gays in Britsh Colombia
Ya one of em..
Ya partners gave up fingering u..now they double thumb ya!"
^^ Ehhh ... ok ... u prolly meeant thumbIN ya
"But ya elevating great kid..thats why u yelling out "save me!"
Cuz Kays going straight downward..even more than ya avy
^^ Good play on the avy
"3-0 rec? I'm impressed..but now you'll have one on tha left
Cuz if losses were God's grace..shit, I'm a leave ya ass blessed!"
^^ Ok
"Peep what Kay goes by,cuz tha way I win this,it'll be tha same
Punches hit u so hard..have u saying "I'm Kay Ohh""
^^ Nice idea but sounds like shit
Not a bad verse... some good punches stood out ... 81/100
Kayohh:
"Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;"
^^ wack - you're not Snoop Dogg
"From your, paps when you was younga, up the, ass with a cucumba,
I know its sick, ... but there's a, vast amount of wonda;"
^^ Seriously comon, this was so wack
"And, suspicion that you liked it, I mean I'm, thinkin u didnt fight it,
But enough with that, back to tha rap, and, flippin that vibe I kick;"
^^ Is this all good be this wack or are u gonna throw a punch?
"Despite his past, Ima whip his ass, fuckin him up with lyrical, tae kwon doe,
Now its Impossible to identify him, even on tha file he's, named "John Doe";"
^^ Still weak but atleast you attempted a personal
"I realize he's hit hard from, ma thesis, but ya better, believe this,
I'll mould this "Dough" inta cookie, crumble it up n jus eat, tha pieces;"
^^ You tried a personal again but it was wack
"I know he pre-writ it, but I wanna see it, mista "I'll key it in 10, minutes",
Your daddy started opennin ya up, but I as ya can see I jus, finished;"
^^ And you topped it off wit another stupid ass line
Kayohh needs to visit Wackness EMergency Center and learn how to throw punches and use metapphors/ personals... EVERYTHING
Vote - John Dough
Uppin #1......
Kay Ohh's starting shit...lol
With people that could crush him..
And not think nothing of it...lol
swayer...jesus...
you didnt even need to up, we are already up, ur jus "uppin" ta sway votes...
whatever...this is bullshit
Yeah..I swayed alot right there ;)
Riiiiight...lol..trying to make excuses
Why he loss..thats # 2 for me
John Dough Was Cool I Guess....
Kay-ohh Was Wack...
Match To Johnny Cookie Dough :laugh2:
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Uppin this shizzy
pretty much merked....i vote for john dough
he came pretty good..other dude was really really wack..
i cant poll yet so explanation is wack...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114851
vote there
John - Witty punches, wordplay, it was all there. Nice well rounded verse, it's good to read decent drops in Front Lines...
Kay - you need to focus on punches instead of rhyme scheme... if this was a freestyle contest maybe you would impress peeps, but that style don't work for text battles. Sex punches are played as hell too, so elevate
vote - john
John.:. ok verse it had a bit of every thing, your flow was aiight a bit patchy though..
Not a bad opener and closer but they were ok, some good punches but some missing aswell..
Kay.:. Good verse it also had everything init, your flow was consistant also a bit patchy.. aiight opener but made up your closer was wack! however you had some great punches but some non-hittin aswell...
\/0te...Kayohh
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...14#post1194014
hit dis up please............................
Rascal...you just copy and pasted spits vote you fag
Jesus...one fuckin vote against you, and ur dissin, fuckin pussy. Thx fo tha vote Rascal.
John: ok verse it had a bit of every thing, your flow was aiight a bit patchy though..
Not a bad opener and closer but they were ok, some good punches but some missing as well
Kay: Good verse it also had everything init, your flow was consistant also a bit patchy.. aiight opener but made up your closer was wack! however you had some great punches but some non-hittin aswell...
vote...Kayohh
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kay ohh took this battle with better punchlines and wordplay.. i felt like john doughs verse was good by kay ohh had better lines
i liked this lines from ko
"Its tha K...A...Y, O, double H,
Don't take it out on me, that you recieved a, troubled rape;"
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ko got this
ko- started out slow but picked it up
good punches
no personals
good flow
good structure
nice verse
6-10
john-came too elementary
good punches though
no personals
didnt like the flow
didnt like ther structure
ok verse
5-10
v/kayohh
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Quote:
Originally Posted by John Dough
Erm no spit voted for you i didnt......
i wrote a longer explanation.............
ijust called the battle as i saw it......
Aight, 4-2 fo me. One more ta close.
Uppin....
I'm votin' for John dough, his personals and punches came stronger than KAYO's. and don't be tellin me this was too short an explanation, read the shit yourself and you'll see there's nothing else to say about the matter.
peace
^Nice..I like that vote..except it looks awfully familiar...hmm?Quote:
Originally Posted by retard101
And it won't be 2-4 for long..
this is too f#cken suspicious kayohh got murdered, don't sweat it John Dough ya know you beat this fool. By the way I aint dick riding for votes but can you please vote in some of my threads, shit one of em doesn't have a single vote. Just call em' how see 'em.
peace
What the fuck? Shit is goin down here...first i'm up...then im down...hmm.
This is dumb
Maybe cuz ya votes were all bullshit...
Uppin...4th or 5th
Lets get this finished guys
Need more votes..........
noah artic, i really didn't like your structure it completely took away w/e flow u were goin for and either i was distracted from that or sumin cus i didn't even read any good punches
Most motherfuckas in frontlines..don't know how to battle
I'd show u an example..
But just peep Kay's verse..he's pretty much got it handeled
~~~played heard before in other battle
This fag was born a homo..And guess what..he'll die gay!
~~~also all gay stuff is played and u used alot of it
kayohh i actually could read your structure and could pic out your flow, so das bout how it goes. i understood your punches the first time through alot better and in a real battle das what counts. but dont put a space between your verses.
over all i jus didnt like artic's verse some dumb lines and real hard to follow. kayohh had a much better flow and more understandable punches.
vote- kayohh
hit up w/e battles i got goin on in my signiture pleez
this battle was good
but the vote should go to kay
he got some metaphores and some punchlines
hey John,you had some good stuff too
but hit the structure quite better so
plz vote for KAY OHH
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
Noah Arctic is DQ'ed for uppin' 7 times.