y0!
~ 10 lines ~
~ Blind Spit ~
~ No Biting, d/r, hate, etc ~
..Drop 30 minutes after we both checkin..
This is my checkin.................HoLLa BaCk YouNgIn!!
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y0!
~ 10 lines ~
~ Blind Spit ~
~ No Biting, d/r, hate, etc ~
..Drop 30 minutes after we both checkin..
This is my checkin.................HoLLa BaCk YouNgIn!!
[QUOTE=.iLL.]y0!
~ 10 lines ~
~ Blind Spit ~
~ No Biting, d/r, hate, etc ~
..Drop 30 minutes after we both checkin..
This is my checkin.................HoLLa BaCk YouNgIn!![/QU
K dawg I'm checked in. so what we both drop in 30 or is somebody sposed to drop first
...This battle was a joke from the ve-ry beginning//
...Only my second line and I'm al-ready winning//
...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'//
...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head//
...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements//
...Ya done son, time to 'checkin' to TD Waterhouse for retirement//
...Up to my seventh line, and this shits already over//
...I'm the cop so pull over, you gunna need more luck than a clover//
...JONdough, pretty creative, so you reppin a bakery?//
...Fake emcee, my rhymes the illest, As Seen On Tv//
^^ there's the quick 10 lines...spit homie, dont dodge this..
I'm confused? I dont 'buy your cheap kiddy scripts'
bitch, the only place you ever made 'cents' was 'Nickle'odeon
you're 'shootin blanks', Ill's style is what 'sterile dicks' spit in fallopians
Got this 'hater grinnin', say "Jon could tickle odiums"
when Im done, yer eyes pits and palms'll trickle sodium
I 'reap' the benefits off 'stage' and stand with 'sickles on podiums'
only times your rhymes are 'dope', are when you mix 'em with opium
ILL you wanna battle??? then stick to yer Pok-e-mon's
Or I'll be 'force'd' to move you, Im the lyrical O B Wun
:shoot:
GOOD LUCK
peace
ill wins cuz jon doghs words are to big i dont know what they mean
mak, explain ur votes man...damn..read the fucking RB rules, it helps
you're not serious??? Ignorance isn't an excuse. and if you didn't know what that meant then get a dictionary. While you got the 'bible for the illiterate' on your lap why don't you re-read this battle and then give your opinion.Quote:
Originally Posted by makaveli-rest
and ill dawg that wasn't to say I was dissin you, I liked your drop man.Quote:
Originally Posted by JONdough
yeah i know man, that mak dude is a fucking herb...nice spit yurself..btw, these freeposts count as "ups" .. so we're both at 2/5 ...
anyways..
UPPIN :laugh:
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wow...Jon definitely had the wordplay section of this battle.....but iLL threw hard punches and he had the personals and structure part of this battle.....jon u can cut the bolding also....and the quotes arent too necessary...i know how it though...i used to do that alot too......here's the line that won it to me though...
^nice....the dough line at the end was kinda expected...but it was good also...Quote:
From Ill:
...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'//
...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head//
...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements//
Punches - iLL
Personals - iLL...the name disses
Opener - iLL
Closer - iLL
Wordplay - Jon....work on making harder punches...
Structure - iLL
Vote - iLL for having harder punches and a hard hitting verse overall.....Jon u had a decent verse.....but u need work on making ur punches more effective feel me....no hate....
peace
ill =
...This battle was a joke from the ve-ry beginning//
...Only my second line and I'm al-ready winning//
ok start
...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'//
...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head//
nice lines
...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements//
...Ya done son, time to 'checkin' to TD Waterhouse for retirement//
good
...Up to my seventh line, and this shits already over//
...I'm the cop so pull over, you gunna need more luck than a clover//
ok
...JONdough, pretty creative, so you reppin a bakery?//
...Fake emcee, my rhymes the illest, As Seen On Tv//
nice
duce squad =
I'm confused? I dont 'buy your cheap kiddy scripts'
bitch, the only place you ever made 'cents' was 'Nickle'odeon
you're 'shootin blanks', Ill's style is what 'sterile dicks' spit in fallopians
Got this 'hater grinnin', say "Jon could tickle odiums"
when Im done, yer eyes pits and palms'll trickle sodium
ok
I 'reap' the benefits off 'stage' and stand with 'sickles on podiums'
only times your rhymes are 'dope', are when you mix 'em with opium
blah not good punch
ILL you wanna battle??? then stick to yer Pok-e-mon's
Or I'll be 'force'd' to move you, Im the lyrical O B Wun
ok
ok, ill your flow was good and also was the structure, punches came really hard. this was a very good spit!!
umm duce flow was ok but patchy, structure was nice, punches were alright on times.
vote = ill < better overall spit.
[CENTER]PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE ON THIS BATTLE. THANKS
p=1188595#post1188595]http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1188595#post1188595
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SORRY THIS IS THE LINK , OR JUST GO TO FONT LINES AND ITS AGAINST TILLEDIE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...95#post1188595
Vote - ILL
duce forced everyone of those multis, killed the whole verse
plus that nickleodeon line was gay
Unbelievable,
People
Pretending this battle
Isnt
Noticeable..
!
VOTE PLEASE, i will hit you back wit an honest one!!
^^ once again...
dis was a very onesided battle....
ill...ur punches came hard but some were a bit played.....flow was basic....structure was ok...wordplay was effetive...personals were basic...overall 6/10
JONdough...punches came very week...no flow......structure was very very basic....wordplay was simple....personals, there were none...overall 4/10...
keep it up both of you...
v/.ill.(simply bete alround)
you lose