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Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion[size=1](sig)[size]
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...[size=1](sig)[size]
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
^^^y u post ur verse twice???
now to the battle.............this was an ight battle overall both came wit good punches and personals.......both stuctures were ight 2........but overall ma vote goes 2 Freeman as his punches hit just that lil bit harder......oakley ur verse was gd 2 but lacked 1 or 2 dope punches i loved personals by both......flow was good in each verse aswell n e ways nice battle yall and keep elevatin........
dont tell me to elevate...your the worlds worste....
thanks for the vote...
uppin
Freeman
Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
so-so opener..
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
lol, good comparison
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
had a nice beginning, but kinda weak at the end..
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
lol, nice bar here
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
ehhhh..weak..
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Oakley
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
had a good idea at the beginning, but it seemed like you were just trying to find a word that rhymed for the 2nd line instead of giving it some thought..
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
not bad..liked the first line
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
ehhhh, played..
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
hmm..ok ok ..not bad..
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
nice bar, but doesnt really have a lasting punch for a closer..
Overall, this one I'd have to give to Oakley..he just came harder..both had great flow and nice creativity..dont get me wrong, this was a close battle, Oakley just impressed me more..n/j to both :thumbup:
Vote ~ Oakley (btw, im almost at poll vote dawgs, if it aint decided by then, i'll be back k..)
Hit me back, thanks..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114198
uppin
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Pz...
i think the battle was ight, Oakley had it on lock
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freeman
Oakley son, My verse is like the sun.. So a hope your UV protected
Burning through your retinas...
... Leaving your eyeballs dissected
not too bad, 5/10
Silly mother fucker.. This kids right here starts beef with sig makers
Talking so much shit...
... Over him id believe the newspapers
could of been worded better, 5/10
Kid you dont compare.. Your just an artist stuck without a brush
Its like ive got 4 Aces...
... And you got a low flush
not really a punch, 4/10
Have you running out.. Leave this bitch fleein like a coward
Im plugged into the mains...
... While your just battery powered
again just filler, 4/10
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
ok personal, 6/10
overall 25/50
oakley
Freeman?
glad u aint locked up..woops i dropped the soap
Accidental is the only way this kid could come dope
second line was good, 5/10
Freeman sway's..even in his font he posts...
Only time he get's poll's is from Italian's vote's..
nice wordplay, an wittyness, 7/10
This kid's a joke....He ask's "How can I improve?"(wackness emergeny)
It's simple...WWW.com'it an Order some anal Lube...
nice setup, didnt pull it off, 4/10
Every one say's it...Your record?...Your not Puncturing Emotion(sig)
Your set in your ways of battling Herb's for promotion...
not too bad, 6/10
And stop ur boastin...Soft Focus, your hardly mentioned..
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention...(sig)
nice personal, best bar of battle, 7/10
overall 29/50
both y'all please dont be bitches an vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114714
freeman - structure was good........flow fell off a lil......vocab was pretty good........some good multis.......wordplay was nice at times.......some of the punches connected........good personals......
oakley - structure was good.....flow was pretty good......vocab was ok...........multis were good.........wordplay was ok.........punches were pretty good..........personals were nice........
breakdown -
structure - tie
flow - oakley
vocab - tie
multis - tie
wordplay - freeman
punches - freeman
personals - oakley
conclusion - freeman takes this in wordplay and punches so he gets my vote.......personals were very close as well.......and i think freemans closer won this battle......
VOTE - FREEMAN
yo since i took the time to leave my honest opinion id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114734
thanx........
Both Of Them Shits Was The Wackest Shits Ive Ever Heard
Winner = Freeman
Oakley- You Had A Nice Verse, With nice Punches. Your Flow Was Dope, And Your Structure Was Nice And Short. Your Personals Were Nice, And Your Vocab Was Ok. Stay Away From Sex Punches And Such.
Freeman- Nice Verse, Your Punches Connected Hard, And You Flowed Nicely. Your Structure Was New, And Good. You Had Nice Personals Too, And Vocab Was Ok. I Liked The Sig Makers Line.
Oakley
Punches- B+
Flow- A-
Structure- A
Personals- B+
Vocab- B-
Overall Grade= A-/B+
Freeman
Punches- A-
Flow- A-
Personals- A-
Structure- A
Vocab- B
Overall Grade= A/A-
Vote= Freeman, In My Opinion He Came Harder...
oakley ate you wiff the personals son
ok my brake down:
Freeman you came oright man. some good punches in there but didnt really attack him if you know what i mean. If you used more personals in your verse you would have won this .
Oakley you came with that line on WEC and it was good and attacked his crew. I felt your verse hurt freeman more. And isnt that what battling is about?
Vote Oakley:)
No hate
uppin
You will get banned for that bitch... 1 line voting...Quote:
Originally Posted by DaNkSta
Uppin... its 3-3...
Pz...
Damn Free, you ugly, big nose, and you suck at rapping. Oakley took this one, although his wasnt good, he had better punches, better personals, better meta's, flow, you know... everything. Vote/Oak
^^ do you wanna get banned... fag,,, read the rules on voting, ya herb.... anyways... heres how i see it.... quite a close battle... but most catagories were jus edged by freeman... tho ive seen much better battles... free your personals brought more wit. as did ya punches, but you could have hit harder... but i vote on punches and like i said yours came that bit harder so vote=free... but it was sumwhat disappointing all round...... lataz...
only newb's say this was a wak battle....
thats sayin summin, ne ways i came bad here....
uppin....
Punches: Free, Oak used a lot of played gay jokes, so this goes to Free. Oak would've taken this if he didn't have thrown played punches in there.
Wordplay: Free, the battery powered bar/line whatever was nice.
Multis: Neither, y'all need to use multis seriously
Personals: Tie, Oak had the font line, Free had the sigmaker line
Opener: Oak, better opener, the UV line was pretty weak
Closer: Free, ended with a nice personal, Oak's was alright, Free's was just better.
Vote - FreeMan
Oak, I've peeped a few of your battles, and you were doing good, this battle didn't even compare. Use more creative punches, add a little wordplay. Free, add multis to your verse, it'll correct the flow, make it on point.
You could Font size it in 10 and still lack the attention
Oak's best line
Damn dawg just quit.. You really aint cut out for writing scriptures
So my advice to you is...
... Pack it in and stick to pictures
Free's best set of lines (Don't know what to call it)