ite man come hard...
10 lines,
spit with 20 mins..........
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ite man come hard...
10 lines,
spit with 20 mins..........
checkin in man.......................good luck.........................hurry up 2.......
ite quick key doesnt need much 2 merk him,
little faggot fuck this newb....no wins about to be beat,
cause with i record like 0-4..even your avy's callin "defeat",
you aint shit..already been banned probally for nicking my ryhmes,
cause your like a telephone advicer the way....
........................your studying my lines.........
little coward smash this prick up untill hes truely devoured,
my rhymes are sweet...leave your's to be tangy and soured,
so fuck this prick..spit on his lip so he can taste my flow,
cause to be honest ive seen colder shit..from an ice show...
..quick merk.........
kid
ive seen alot of rhymes but you've got to be the worst in flows
your rhymes read like something a retarted person wrote
your new to rb but already your weakness is old
kid your raps slow and like a "consitaped persons bowel" movements they dont flow
and kid you cant find a trace of intelligence out of ya head
your iq's lower than scores of retard that took and algebra test
yeah only god can judge you and we know the verdict in that
it reads.. guilty on all counts of being wack!
just give up rap dude no one respects your crap
look in the dictionary youll find your picture under the word wack!
aiight i know this wasnt the greatest battle ever.. but just drop a vote and links
Not enough posts to poll, but here is what I thought.........
The Judge took this one... Came harder on his punches, and had more creativity. Also had a good personal. Illynice I felt didn't come hard enough with the punches. The 'constipated' line seemed stretched, and was played, as was the closer...Creativity was also lacking...had two punches about retards, and the personal on his sig, felt was weak...... My vote>The Judge better creativity, personal, and overall better punches.
uppin.............................................
Illy Got this, Good efforts by both...
That retarded Line was Nice, good Opener,Your wordplay was pretty horrible though...
Ok personals....Some were Played...flow..Lotta shit was stretched,
Structure- Not good but it was better than Judges......
Judge- Yer flow was messed up by that weak structure, U came w/ punches most were played,,Illy just has more humerous punches and personals...Your wordplay was better than illy's but he just had u beat becuase of his use of creativity and humor...
V/ Illy
nice battle by both...............................
vote then plz................................m-m..i aint swaying but that vote was abit wak man...........
woo, close battle. Not that both of you were good, but at least it was matched up fair. Id have to say illy took it with a few good punchlines and personals. But he had maybe the wackest flow ive ever seen, and should really work on that.
judge, ur flow was also wack, but you did have a few punches, but no personals.
v/ill
^no personals wak ma wak.......................................omg wat u on about i had far more personals man........................omg
Are you fucking retarded?!!?!?!? Herb...Quote:
Originally Posted by MichaelMadness
Judge
little faggot fuck this newb....no wins about to be beat,
cause with i record like 0-4..even your avy's callin "defeat",
Nice enough opener... 6/10
you aint shit..already been banned probally for nicking my ryhmes,
cause your like a telephone advicer the way....
........................your studying my lines.........
Nice punch... 6/10
little coward smash this prick up untill hes truely devoured,
my rhymes are sweet...leave your's to be tangy and soured,
Nice concept... 7/10
so fuck this prick..spit on his lip so he can taste my flow,
cause to be honest ive seen colder shit..from an ice show...
Nice closer... 7/10
Overall... 26/40
Illynice
ive seen alot of rhymes but you've got to be the worst in flows
your rhymes read like something a retarted person wrote
Played... Weak... 4/10
your new to rb but already your weakness is old
kid your raps slow and like a "consitaped persons bowel" movements they dont flow
and kid you cant find a trace of intelligence out of ya head
your iq's lower than scores of retard that took and algebra test
Wack... Didnt rhyme... 3/10
yeah only god can judge you and we know the verdict in that
it reads.. guilty on all counts of being wack!
Played... Herbish... 3/10
just give up rap dude no one respects your crap
look in the dictionary youll find your picture under the word wack!
You already rhymed wack in the bar above herb... 4/10
Overall... 14/40
v/ Judge
Pz...
basically all you said was that he was a newb, just accept the loss
No way did he lose this...
Both of you who voted for the wackest battler are fucking d/r's...
Herbs...
man freeman stop swaying votes or else ill report you to ir mothafucka
^..........werd free but o/well 2-2..........lets get sme votes plz....................................thx for pll who have voted............
dawg, its all about opinion, i dont know either of them so how am i a d/r, fuck you
ight yo this was a nice battle.....the judge had the better structure illynice urs was stretched in places..the judge work was nice he had harder hitting punches where as illynice came wit attemted ones i didnt lke.......both flows were aight but off in some places.....but overall the judge gets this 4 me as he came harder than illynice
first of all what the hell does structure have to do with battling anyways?
the shit makes no sense.. this is not a battle of structure its a battle of disses.. so all yall voting based on structure are dumbasses
Jus set up our battle...
This is beef...
lol? a beef on the inernet kid please kid.. if this was off the internet i would whup your little ass
Yes... Ok... Ive taught JuJitsu for 3 years... So youd really 'whup my ass'...
Set up our battle bitch... A wana merk you... Then you can come round and 'whup my ass'...
Herb...
lol.. i want to merk you.. ohh know.. what you going to do shoot your internet slugs at me.. please kid calm down.. go sit on a dick or something
Just set the battle up then...
Stop talkin... Just set it up... :)...
Judge:
punches were awesome, flow was nice, structure was nice, personals were ok, opener was awesome, closer was off the hook, overall = awesome verse..
Best Lines:
little faggot fuck this newb....no wins about to be beat,
cause with i record like 0-4..even your avy's callin "defeat",
^ nice.. made me laugh
you aint shit..already been banned probally for nicking my ryhmes,
cause your like a telephone advicer the way....
........................your studying my lines.........
^ very nice..
Illy:
punches were ok, flow was good but came off sometime, structure was good, no personals i saw, opener was very wack, closer was terrible, overall = wack verse..
Best Lines:
none
well, judge got this VERY clearly.. nice job by both cats, both need to elevate..
Vote - The Judge..
BE SURE TO HIT THE LINKS IN MY SIG AND DROP A VOTE..
ite votes plz........................4th.................... ..................................
Judge - not bad.. consistant thruout.. opened well an some nice concepts.. didnt like ya 'sweet an sour' line.. there's no force in a punch like that.. an ya closer was wack.. but the rest of ya verse was pretty good.. flowed quite well..
Illynice - alot of played ideas.. 'bowel movement' line was horrible.. several of the punches were forced too.. widen ya vocab an get more personal cos there was too much general filler..
VoTe = The Judge
little faggot fuck this newb....no wins about to be beat,
cause with i record like 0-4..even your avy's callin "defeat",
^aright personal here drop the uneeded words like fagot and shit...
you aint shit..already been banned probally for nicking my ryhmes,
cause your like a telephone advicer the way....
........................your studying my lines.........
^aright this is good wordplay a nice meta4...good punch....nice bar..reachin a little..
little coward smash this prick up untill hes truely devoured,
my rhymes are sweet...leave your's to be tangy and soured,
^2nd line is all filler firstl line is a multi and weak punch ..bad bar...
so fuck this prick..spit on his lip so he can taste my flow,
cause to be honest ive seen colder shit..from an ice show...
^ok this is a strong finish good wordplay and a nice punch..first line was kind of filler again overall a decent verse....
ive seen alot of rhymes but you've got to be the worst in flows
your rhymes read like something a retarted person wrote
^ok setup to a decent punch not a bad opener....
your new to rb but already your weakness is old
kid your raps slow and like a "consitaped persons bowel" movements they dont flow
^stretched second line OK metaphor...good punch...
and kid you cant find a trace of intelligence out of ya head
your iq's lower than scores of retard that took and algebra test
^meh you already used the retard concept so you need to get a new one..bad bar..
yeah only god can judge you and we know the verdict in that
it reads.. guilty on all counts of being wack!
^this is simplistic vocab and a weak punch....you just basically called him whack..been done...
just give up rap dude no one respects your crap
look in the dictionary youll find your picture under the word wack!
^yea again this is the same concept as before....so no...
Overall judge takes it for more creative/ less repetitive concepts....pz